Jenifer conoly

[Guest]

somone write a story jennifer connelly stars in a movie set in the 1940s Jennifer connlly is seduced by uma thurman a nazi agent then they both have sex with six men involves bondage, anal, oral, cumshots and tit fucking

 

[Chicklet]

Well, I *am* writing a Jennifer Connelly story...(i will spell her name right, I promise)

It's about The Labyrinth, though. Twenty years after the movie, a sequel, written by yours truly, should be quite enjoyable. I'm working hard on it, so it should be decent.

Chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

Well, I *am* writing a Jennifer Connelly story...(i will spell her name right, I promise)

It's about The Labyrinth, though. Twenty years after the movie, a sequel, written by yours truly, should be quite enjoyable. I'm working hard on it, so it should be decent.

Chicklet

please make it indecent

how do you get around the fact she was 15? is the sequel 20 years later?

her "hotness" in that movie is proof that the arbitrary 18 "legal" age is not biological relevant. Perhaps justifiable on a psychological basis, but biology is powerful stuff...

If you are rerunning old Jen C plots, my fave movie of all time with her is Career Opportunities, where she gets locked in a store overnight with Frank whalley. She spends most of the movie in a white tank top and spandex pants. Yum. There is a sexy pup tent scene thatI'd love to read the " inside" version of, since the movie version is shot from outside the tent.

btw, why Jen? I love her, but after all your celeb phobia, what made you pick her?

 

[penguindance]

 

[sirhugs]

She had to pick someone!

true, bu so many more obvious ones exist.

 

[MsLinnet]

Well, I *am* writing a Jennifer Connelly story...(i will spell her name right, I promise)

It's about The Labyrinth, though. Twenty years after the movie, a sequel, written by yours truly, should be quite enjoyable. I'm working hard on it, so it should be decent.

Chicklet

when is it being turned into a film.

let me know that girl needs a good fucking

 

[mmercury]

back then

Just my opinion, but I thing she was SOO much hotter in the Rocketeer. Much more curvy and fuckable.
Again, just one mans opinion. Have fun.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: back then

Just my opinion, but I thing she was SOO much hotter in the Rocketeer. Much more curvy and fuckable.
Again, just one mans opinion. Have fun.

so many movies, so little jenifer= she's now a lollipop ( big head, stick body)

 

[mmercury]

so true

I agree. Corpse-like even. You could get hurt on some of those boney angles. Ahh well..

 

[Chicklet]

please make it indecent

how do you get around the fact she was 15? is the sequel 20 years later?


btw, why Jen? I love her, but after all your celeb phobia, what made you pick her?

Of course it will be indecent! And yes, it's going to be exactly the # of years it's been since the movie actually came out. I figure she's aged into a perfect woman, but Jereth (and I may not have spelled that right, but I have it spelled correctly in my notes) has remained the same since he's a magical goblin king, right?

Why Jennifer? Well, I am a huge labyrinth fan and honestly it's more that I'm excited by doing a sequel to the movie than doing a story *about her*

Chicklet

 

[Chicklet]

when is it being turned into a film.

lol at one of my stories ever being turned into a movie, but blush and thank you too = )

I *did* consider writing it in the form of a screenplay, but I don't think that my readers would go for that. What do you think?

Chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

Of course it will be indecent! And yes, it's going to be exactly the # of years it's been since the movie actually came out. I figure she's aged into a perfect woman, but Jereth (and I may not have spelled that right, but I have it spelled correctly in my notes) has remained the same since he's a magical goblin king, right?

Why Jennifer? Well, I am a huge labyrinth fan and honestly it's more that I'm excited by doing a sequel to the movie than doing a story *about her*

Chicklet

how wise, and clever as always. I to loved Labyrinth, and think a sexy sequel is a great idea. I agree celeb stories about characters are more fun than about the real stars.

 

[sirhugs]

lol at one of my stories ever being turned into a movie, but blush and thank you too = )

I *did* consider writing it in the form of a screenplay, but I don't think that my readers would go for that. What do you think?

Chicklet

I find all dialogue stories tough reads, so think a screenplay format would be less popular. Hard to convey the fantasy aspects too.

 

[MsLinnet]

lol at one of my stories ever being turned into a movie, but blush and thank you too = )

I *did* consider writing it in the form of a screenplay, but I don't think that my readers would go for that. What do you think?

Chicklet

I foundthis while recerching another project and i liked it beter that the film

G.I. JANE


by

David Twohy
























FIRST DRAFT

August 6, 1995






FADE IN:

INT. SENATE HEARING ROOM - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

Blinding in their white uniforms, naval flag officers sit
in the audience, showing their support for THEODORE HAYES,
a 50-year-old civilian. This is his confirmation hearing.
Reading from prepared material:

HAYES
... last few years have brought many
advances in the interests of women
in naval service, particularly in
the land-based maritime specialties.
What's more, the Navy has instituted
special sensitivity courses with an
eye on --

DEHAVEN
Whoa, whoa, whoa. "Land-based
maritime specialties." Gimme a
second here to de-euphemize that...

At the center of a dais, LILLIAN DEHAVEN leans back to
ponder the ceiling of the hearing room. Her plaque card
reads "CHAIRPERSON -- SENATE ARMS COMMITTEE." DeHaven is a
tough-hided old Southern belle, Scarlett O'Hara at 60.
In her arsenal she carries conversational hand-grenades --
and she's apt to pull a pin at the slightest whim.

DEHAVEN
Would that be anything like
"typing"? "Restocking the
cupboards"? That sort of thing, Mr.
Hayes?

CHUCKLES from the packed gallery. The flag officers go
stone-faced. Hayes forces a smile.

HAYES
Hardly the case, Senator.

DEHAVEN
Well, I'm just an old dame without
much time left, so you'll pardon me
if I jump right in here before they
discontinue my blood-type. I am
deeply concerned over the Navy's
seemingly incontrovertible attitude
toward women in the military. Case
in point...

On cue, aides begin distributing reports to other members
of the dais. Hayes gets a copy, too. And it jars him.

DEHAVEN
"The Lark Report."

HAYES
Madam Senator... this is an internal
document of the U.S. Navy. I must
seriously question whether --

DEHAVEN
(to others on panel)
The Navy's conclusion regarding the
crash of an F-14 aboard an aircraft
carrier. Female aviator, it just so
happens.
(to Hayes)
You're familiar with this report and
its conclusion, am I right?

HAYES
I was one member of the investigating
commission.

DEHAVEN
Yes, I see your signature right here
-- twice the size of everyone
else's. And your conclusion was
"pilot error," hmm?

HAYES
I'm really not prepared for any kind
of in-depth review of --

DEHAVEN
I'd like to think our next Secretary
of the Navy would be prepared for
anything, Mr. Hayes.

A humorless smile. She's roasting his nuts over an open
fire, and everyone knows it.

HAYES
The commission concluded that the
aviator in question failed to
execute a proper approach to the
carrier.

DEHAVEN
That aside for the moment, I'm
struck by the tenor, the ill-spirit
of your report... the degrading
remarks by other aviators...
innuendo about her performance in
unrelated situations... even a
reference to her sexual activity the
weekend prior.
(closing report)
In my seven years on this committee,
I've never seen a downed aviator
treated like this. Never. I'm
deeply disturbed by this report, Mr.
Hayes. Not just what it bodes for
women in the military -- but for
your own confirmation as well.


INT. CORRIDOR - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

Heading for her office, DeHaven is escorted by a small
PRESS RETINUE.

DEHAVEN
... a full 35 percent of all jobs in
the U.S. military are still, to this
day, off-limits to women. And
that's simply gotta change.

PRESS #1
What about those who say women
aren't suited for all jobs? That
they're physically weaker... they
have less stamina...

DEHAVEN
Sure. And we're gonna hog the
bathroom, too.

DEHAVEN'S AIDE catches up, pulls her aside.

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
White House boys want a private
meeting.

DEHAVEN
I'll act surprised.


INT. DEHAVEN'S OFFICE - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

Shoes dumped on her desk, DeHaven changes out knee-high
stockings while devoting one ear to...

WHITE HOUSE #1
... to reassure you that he has
every faith in the ability of Mr.
Hayes to guide the Navy into the
next century. The task, as the
Administration sees it, is to
acknowledge changing realities
without losing traditional values.

A beat. DeHaven looks between the two WHITE HOUSE boys --
#1 young and eager, #2 older and cagier.

DEHAVEN
'Zat it? Ten minutes, nothin' on
the table? Sweetcakes, you best go
back to the President and tell him
to open up the phone book and start
lookin' for his next nominee.

White House #1 looks spanked. Taking over, #2 pops a
briefcase. An inch-think report appears before DeHaven.

WHITE HOUSE #2
Administration's plan for 100
percent integration. If female
candidates measure up in a series of
test cases, the President will
support full integration within
three years' time.

Surprised -- maybe even startled -- DeHaven flips through
the report, absorbing by osmosis.

WHITE HOUSE #2
It's your gender-blind Navy,
Senator. Surely you're not going to
balk now.

DEHAVEN
Well, it's just that askin' you all
to integrate the Navy is like
sending a man to do a woman's job.
(a beat)
How do you propose to handle the
Combat Exclusion Laws?

WHITE HOUSE #2
Keep narrowing the definitions.
Keep redefining.

WHITE HOUSE #1
We got around it in Saudi Arabia.

DEHAVEN
By calling women "Honorary Men."
Ingenious.

WHITE HOUSE #2
C'mon, Senator, President's pitchin'
right down the center of your plate.
If women measure up to men, they've
got the job. You going to take a
swing? Or step out of the box?

DeHaven riffles the edges of the report, thinking it over.
Thinking light years ahead.


EXT. CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

Buttoning up topcoats, the White House boys move down
marble steps to reach a pair of limousines. Hayes and two
FLAG OFFICERS wait.

HAYES
Well?

WHITE HOUSE #2
(shaking hand)
Congratulations, Mr. Secretary.


INT. HAYES' LIMOUSINE - DAY

Inside the moving car:

HAYES
So she picks the women, we pick the
programs. Seals?

FLAG OFFICER #1
I'd go Special Reconnaissance.
Every bit as tough -- and we have a
60 percent drop-out rate among the
men.

HAYES
Then I suggest we start there.

FLAG OFFICER #1
Doesn't matter who she picks. No
woman is going to last one week in a
commando training course. And I
don't care who it is.


EXT. POTOMAC RIVER - WASHINGTON D.C. - DAY

Winterscape: Dotted with ice floes, the Potomac wends
through the capitol city, banks iridescent with snow,
morning water calm. There's an almost hallowed beauty to
it all. Soon we pick out...

A spot of day-glo. Coming out of the mouth of morning.
Overtaking the floes.

CLOSER on JORDAN O'NEIL. She pushes her flat-water kayak
downriver, paddling hard and clean, making good time.
Gliding through the graceful arches of the Arlington
bridge, she passes...

Cars overhead. Grid-locked by snow conditions.

In seconds Jordan paddles clear, leaving the traffic
behind as she heads toward the Washington Monument.
Something BURRS from a life-vest pocket. She rips through
velcro to free a cell phone.

JORDAN
Lieutenant O'Neil.

ROYCE (V.O.)
Gotta situation here. Where are
you? Stuck in traffic?

JORDAN
(checking dive watch)
Not due in for 22 minutes, sir.
Watcha got?


INT. SITUATION ROOM - N.I.C. - DAY

ROYCE
All right, stand by, we're going to
switch over to COMSAT...

A TACTICAL OFFICER reroutes the call via defense
satellite, cryptography flashing on terminals. Lieutenant
Commander ROBERT ROYCE joins other Intel officers at a
conference table. They're pouring over weather charts,
navigation logs, high-altitude NRO video.

TACTICAL OFFICER
Voice-system now secure...

ROYCE
(into speaker)
Okay, fresh stuff: Lost a NATO
plane over the Sea of Japan. ELB
signals leads us to believe the
pilot is alive and has made his way
to the North Korean shore, near a
fishing village, "Tamyung."

JORDAN (V.O.)
Do we know it's him using the
beacon? Not a decoy?

ROYCE
Signals received only sparingly, in
such a pattern that leads us to
conclude it is a downed aviator
trying to conserve his batteries.

JORDAN (V.O.)
Chances of recovery?

ROYCE
You're the analyst for East China,
O'Neil. Analyze.


EXT. POTOMAC RIVER - WASHINGTON D.C. - DAY

Riding the current, Jordan blows a troubled sigh as she
accesses the file of her brain. Drifting past the
Jefferson Memorial:

JORDAN
North Korean beaches are the best
protected, most heavily monitored in
the world. The civilian population
is so propagandized that it acts as
an Early Warning system. Extraction
team has to be small and silent --
I'd go with Seals over Delta Force.
Problem is, don't want to hold a
conventional sub off-shore for
target practice. Where's The Polk?

INTERCUTTING:

ROYCE
Halfway 'round the world. So that's
the problem -- we can get the team
in, just not out.

JORDAN
(an inspired beat)
Unless you Whiskey Run.

ROYCE
Blank faces here, O'Neil.

JORDAN
Quick-hit technique used by Capone.
Rigged a getaway car with running
boards and handles. All his guys
had to do was jump on and take a
ride. Check the files -- DPRK-57 --
I doped it out as a contingency
plan: Seal Team infiltrates, picks
up the package, links up with
recovery sub. But don't waste time
opening and closing hatches. They
just grab the periscope and hang on
for neutral waters.

A dubious beat.

ROYCE
You expect the extraction team to
ride the sub bare-back? Is that
correct, O'Neil?

JORDAN
Only four minutes to neutral waters,
sir. Why not?

Silence on the radio: They're discussing her scenario
privately. During, Jordan's kayak reaches the junction of
the Potomac and the Anacostia rivers. On the far bank
lies...

Naval Intel Center (N.I.C.), bristling with communication
antennae.

Jordan stares at the complex, waiting for a response.

ROYCE
All right, sending the
recommendation across the river.
Royce out.

The phone goes dead.

JORDAN
No, thank you, sir.


EXT. SECURITY STATION - N.I.C. - DAY

Bundled in topcoat and scarves, military and civilian
employees transit a security station on their way inside.
Presently Jordan appears -- wearing a wetsuit and
balancing a collapsed kayak on her head. She flashes a
photo-badge and double-times inside.


INT. CORRIDOR - N.I.C. - DAY

Jordan exits a locker room. Smoothing out her Khaki
uniform, she heads down a broad corridor with cipher-lock
doors. Falling in step:

ROYCE
That was good headwork, lieutenant.

JORDAN
Thank you, sir. We hear back from
the Pentagon?

ROYCE
(scoffing)
Probably hear back from CNN first.

JORDAN
Hate this part. Just sweating it
out on the sidelines.

ROYCE
Intel has its own glory, lieutenant
-- no matter how subtle.

Now they reach...


INT. BULLPEN - N.I.C. - DAY

A circular chamber. Dominating the ground floor is the
bullpen, a hive of cubicles an computer stations. On the
second floor are executive offices, ringing the bullpen.

ROYCE
By the way, I'll need that option
paper by 11-hundred today so I can
review it with Admiral Hanover. And
do we have any of that breakfast tea
around here?

JORDAN
(with a look)
Is this my glory, sir?

On the upper walkway, a frazzled N.I.C. SECRETARY
appears. She spots Royce and Jordan below.

N.I.C. SECRETARY
Excuse me, but I have Senator
DeHaven on the line for you.

ROYCE
Jesus God, what now?

He bounds up the stairs toward his office.

N.I.C. SECRETARY
I'm sorry, sir no -- she asked to
speak with Lieutenant O'Neil.

Royce turns back and gives Jordan a hall-of-fame look.
"Oh, really?"


INT. DEHAVEN'S OFFICE - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

DEHAVEN
(into phone)
So everyone I talk to says you're
top drawer with silk stockings
inside.

JORDAN (V.O.)
Thank you, ma'am. Um, may I ask
what this is regarding?

DEHAVEN
(reading file)
High-school pentathlete... ROTC
scholarship, graduated with
honors... top marks in Basic
Training... and, as it just so
happens, a constituent of my home
state of Virginia. Oh, the things
I'll do for one extra vote.


INT. BULLPEN - N.I.C. - DAY

On the phone, Jordan glances around. Co-workers mull
within earshot. Those out of earshot post E-mail memos on
Jordan's computer: "Moving up in life." "I want a full
report." "Don't tell her who you really voted for."

DEHAVEN
Lieutenant O'Neil, I am prepared to
nominate you for the Navy's Special
Reconnaissance program. Should you
accept, you'll ship out to Coronado
next week and join in the big
testosterone festival. Complete the
course, and you'll have a fast
ticket to any assignment you want.
That's my personal promise to you.

A beat as Jordan's mind catches up to her ears. Now
INTERRCUTTING the two:

JORDAN
"Coronado."

DEHAVEN
California.

JORDAN
I know that, sir. Ma'am. It's just
that... Beggin' your pardon,
Senator, but... do you understand
that this involves combat training?

DEHAVEN
This is just a test case, O'Neil.
But if it works out -- if you work
out -- it could well change the
Navy's official policy on women in
combat. Or, actually, its official
non-policy. Now who's your
immediate superior there?

JORDAN
Captain Dwyer. Technically.

DEHAVEN
My office will fill him in and help
expedite. Look forward to meeting
you at the proper time. Jumping off
now...

JORDAN
Uh, question, ma'am.

DEHAVEN
Yes, dear.

JORDAN
Would I be the only one? The only
woman?

DEHAVEN
There'll be more to follow -- but
yes, dear, right now you're the pick
of a very large litter. And your
success would mean a lot. Jumping,
now...

The line goes dead. Jordan hangs up catatonically.

JORDAN
Well, shit-a-doodle-do...


EXT. GUNKHOLE HARBOR - POTOMAC - NIGHT

A small gunkhole harbor up the Potomac. Snow falls thick
and silent on overturned canoes, stored for the winter.
Beyond stands a clapboard rental house.


INT. JORDAN'S HOUSE - NIGHT

It's not so much furnished as equipped -- scuba gear and
wetsuits in the mud room, life vests on coat racks, a
training bag and boxing gloves hanging in the living room.
In the kitchen we find...

A naked man. He's steeping tea.

JORDAN (O.S.)
... well, I survived Basic Training
and three brothers -- so I know how
to fight. What scares me are the
sexual politics. I don't want to be
turned into some poster girl for
women's rights.

CAMERA FOLLOWS as the naked man carries a steaming mug
through the house...


INT. BATHROOM - JORDAN'S HOUSE - NIGHT

... and sets it down beside Jordan, languishing in a tub.
Snow builds on a window sill. Facing Jordan, the man
slides into the tub.

ROYCE
So why're you even considering it?
Are you?

JORDAN
Just like you would be.

ROYCE
Spec-Recon. Those guys are world-
class warriors. And they will not
want you there, Jordan.

JORDAN
I take it you don't either. Feet.

Dutifully, Royce massages her feet.

ROYCE
Well, you're doin' shit-hot at
Intel.

JORDAN
Royce. We're the same age, we
started the same time -- and now
you're sitting in the upperdecks
while I'm still down in the bullpen.
What does that tell you about the
Navy?

ROYCE
(shaking head)
She's haze grey and underway...

JORDAN
You need operational duty to really
advance... you need combat training
to go operational... yet combat
training is off-limits to people
with tits. I'm topped out at Intel.
Forget the glass ceiling -- I'm
beating my head on a big brass
ceiling.

ROYCE
So dump on me.

JORDAN
This has nothing to do with you.

ROYCE
(getting out)
Well, guess I don't even need to be
here...

JORDAN
Get your dick back here. It has
everything to do with you.

ROYCE
You're such a ball-breaker
sometimes. Especially at night.

JORDAN
Sorry. But after our days...
(a thoughtful sip)
So if I try this thing... if I ship
out to Coronado... what happens
here?

ROYCE
I'll try to keep the door open. If
you wash out, I make it so that --

JORDAN
Wai', wait. What happens if it
works? Four months of training,
three years of operational duty.
What then?

ROYCE
(blowing a sigh)
I don't feel like doing an option
paper on the rest of my life,
Jordan. Maybe we should just let it
happen.

JORDAN
Which is guy-speak for...

ROYCE
(conceding)
Sounded lame as soon as it came out
of my mouth. But I'm trying to be
honest, okay? Three years is a long
time. Don't ask me to predict how
I'll feel then, Jordan, because I
don't know. And either do you.

JORDAN
You know, right up until you said
that -- I thought I did know.

Wounded, she gets out.

ROYCE
Jordan...

JORDAN
Thank you, Royce. It was shaping up
like such a tough call -- and then
you go and make it so goddamn easy.
Really, thank you so much.

She punches into a robe and leaves. Royce considers
drowning himself in the tub.


EXT. CORONADO BRIDGE - SAN DIEGO - DAY

Jordan drives a top-down Mustang across the sweeping
Coronado Bridge, cityscape behind her, naval base ahead.

A flock of pelicans pace Jordan alongside the bridge.
Suddenly two NAVY HELOS BLAST overhead, scattering the
pelicans.


EXT. THE GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

On base, Jordan carries a gunnysack across an asphalt
courtyard. The is "the grinder," reminiscent of a
gladiator's arena. She notices at one end...

A silver ship's bell. Hung prominently.


INT. ADMINISTRATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

JORDAN
Excuse me, lieutenant. I was told
this is where I check in.

A DUTY OFFICER looks up to find Jordan across a counter.
In no particular hurry, the duty officer makes his way
over to check Jordan's orders.

DUTY OFFICER
(looking up)
So you're the one.

Hearing, other workers look up. Among them is a female
ensign, KATHY BLONDELL -- no makeup, no nail polish, no
concession to her sex. Throughout, she'll watch Jordan
with more than passing interest.

JORDAN
Still don't have my bearings yet.
Direct me to the officer's quarters?

The duty officer stamps her paperwork, returns it with
room assignment and keys.

DUTY OFFICER
You'll proceed directly to the
infirmary for eye tests, blood
tests, urinalysis, pregnancy test.
Uniform issue adjacent. Then you're
to report to the Base Commander.
He'd like a word with you.

JORDAN
Fine. And the officer's quarters?

DUTY OFFICER
C.O.'s office can supply you with
directions. Enjoy your visit,
lieutenant.

It's a nasty little barb -- one that Jordan decides to let
slide. Jordan turns for the door. Blondell catches up
with a base map.

BLONDELL
B.O.Q., south side. Take a
starboard tack out the door.

JORDAN
Thank you, ensign.

BLONDELL
No problem, lieutenant.


INT. C.O.'S OFFICE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

A soft KNOCKING.

C.O.
Come.

A YEOMAN opens the door. Behind him is Jordan.

YEOMAN
Lieutenant j.g. O'Neil reporting,
sir.

For a beat, COMMANDING OFFICER (C.O.) TURRENTINE takes
stock of the female in his doorway, sizing her up like a
fighter across the ring. Then he stubs out a perfectly
good cigar, rises with an amiable face, and touches the
back of a chair -- stopping just short of pulling it out
for her.

C.O.
Yes, of course. Please, have a
seat, lieutenant...

JORDAN
Thank you, sir.

C.O.
Would you care for a beverage? Tea?

JORDAN
I'm fine, sir.

C.O.
So. We're still coming to terms
with the exact protocol for this --
for integrating the Spec-Recon
training. It may not always be
smooth, but we're trying to make it
as painless as possible for you.

JORDAN
Thank you, sir. But I expect a
certain amount of pain.

More stock-taking. Is he looking at her hair?

JORDAN
Barber was my next stop, sir.
Would've had it regulation sooner,
only --

C.O.
Don't worry about it. If it's off
your collar and out of your eyes,
that's all I'm going to ask.

JORDAN
Really, I have no problem with --

C.O.
I'm not out to change your sex,
lieutenant. You'll have separate
beds, separate heads. If you have
specific medical needs, inform the
infirmary. If a classmate or
superior acts in an harassing or
otherwise unbecoming manner, please
inform me immediately so I can deal
with it immediately. Questions?

JORDAN
None at this time, sir.

C.O.
Then that's all I have to say.
Dismissed.

Another smile, another phantom gesture on the back of her
chair. If Jordan was expecting a fight, the bell never
sounded. She rises, salutes -- then turns back at the
door.

JORDAN
Sir, I just want you to know... I'm
not here to make a statement. I
don't want to make men look foolish.
All I care about is completing the
training and getting operational
experience -- just like everyone
else, I suspect.

C.O.
If you were like everyone else,
lieutenant, I suspect we wouldn't be
making statements about not making
statements, would we?
(a beat)
Take your leave.


EXT. B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

The Spec-Recon TRAINEES loiter outside their open rooms,
pumping weights, hosing down dive gear, trading Walkman
tapes. This is the last day of liberty they'll have for a
long time.

MILLER
What am I scannin' here?

Other eyes quickly lock in on...

Jordan. Across a grass courtyard, she walks the ground
floor of an identical building, trying to match key number
to room number. Every door is open, every room empty.
Soon she feels the presence of...

The men. They're disgorging from their rooms -- ten,
twenty, thirty of them -- all buffed and cut. These guys
are what Hitler saw in his dreams.

Jordan picks up her pace. Where the hell is her room?

On all three levels of their building, the men shadow
Jordan en masse. Not hooting. Not leering. Just
assessing.

Jordan finds her room at the far corner of the building:
She's got the entire floor to herself. With a last look
over her shoulder, Jordan vanishes inside.


EXT. THE GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

C.O.
Special Reconnaissance. Here you
will be trained to infiltrate
hostile territory... to be the real-
time eyes on the ground... to
recover assigned targets and, if
need be, to fight your way out under
adverse conditions.

CAMERA SURVEYS faces of the trainees: MILLER, MCCOOL,
SLUTNIK, CORTEZ, FLEA, STAMM, ENGLAND, NEWBERRY, WICKWIRE.
We'll get to know them later. Dressed in Navy greens,
they stand in formation -- ten rows, ten deep, helmets in
hand. Pacing before them:

C.O.
That is all that will be said about
the special nature of this class --
by us or by you. Many of you have
waited years for admission to this
program. Opportunities like this
are rare -- and those who seize upon
them are rarer still.

He approaches Jordan. We can tell what she's thinking.
"Just keep moving. Don't single me out."

C.O.
Other than that, there is little to
be said but "Good luck, gentleman."
(correcting)
"Gentlepersons."

Jordan flinches.

C.O.
Now I turn you over to the chief
training officer. He has earned six
naval commendations, the purple
heart, and the Navy Cross for
heroism and valor. I give you
Master Chief John James Urgayle.

Taking over, THE CHIEF stands before the class a moment,
sizing them up while giving them -- get an eyeload of him,
too: His body is 30 years old, his face 40, his eyes 50.
An ageless warrior. Somewhere, the blood of Ulysses runs
in this guy's veins.

The Chief lifts a bullhorn to deliver his opening salvo --
and it's anything but the kick-ass rant the class is
expecting:

THE CHIEF
The sun and moon... the ebb and flow
of the Pacific tides... global
warming... the very angle of the
Earth upon its axis... these are
just some of the things I control in
my world.

Trainees swap private looks.

MCCOOL
We're fucked.

SLUTNIK
Darth Vader reads poetry...

MCCOOL
We are so fucked.


EXT. BEACH - CORONADO NAVAL STATION - DAY

START on boots, crashing through shallow surf, spraying
water. We assume this is a routine beach run -- until
VIEW RISES to reveal...

Telephone poles on their shoulder. Working in groups of
10, trainees labor under 300-pound poles. Jordan, six
inches shorter than most, looks like Atlas carrying the
weight of the world. But she's doing it.

INSTRUCTOR
Count down... one, two... count
down... three, four...

CLASS CADENCE
One, two, three, four... One, two,
three, four...

An ambulance shadows the class. Perched on the front
bumper like an hood-ornament, the Chief keeps working his
bullhorn:

THE CHIEF
You may think that you are the
brightest, the best, the strongest.
I assure you, that is a total
delusion on your part. It is my job
to show you just how weak human
beings can truly be. 60 percent of
you will not finish this course.
How do I know? Because that is an
historical fact.

It's also intimidating shit.

THE CHIEF
Poles down.

The earth literally shakes as the phone poles hit the damp
sand. Approaching on foot, the Chief loads fresh
batteries into his bullhorn. He does it like a man
thumbing rounds into a shotgun.

THE CHIEF
Now for the bad new: I always like
to get one quitter on the first day.
And until I do, the first day does
not end. So look around right now
-- go on, do it. I wonder who it's
gonna be...

He passes right by Jordan, never meeting her eyes.
INSTRUCTOR PYRO steps up. He's the Chief's bulldog.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Down to BVDs!

The guys strip down to boxers. Jordan settles for boxers
and jog bra.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Now face the Pacific... link arms...
and take a stroll!

The class wades in. The first wave takes Jordan's breath
away: It's February, and the water is cold. When they
move out of instructors' earshot:

STAMM
What is it with the damn phone
poles? We sign up for Spec-Recon or
GTE?

WICKWIRE
Just trying to thin the herd.
That's all they want to do right
now.

Some of the guys are glancing Jordan's way, cashing in on
a cheap wet T-shirt contest. Jordan covers herself
instinctively -- and hates the instinct. Modesty isn't
going to get her through this.

SLUTNIK
Man. Doesn't she know it's rude to
point?

NEWBERRY
Wow. You see that girl?

WICKWIRE
I got eyes, Newberry.

SLUTNIK
One night. Just one night in my
room, she'd forget all about playin'
commando.

ENGLAND
Tone that shit down, Slutnik. You
heard with they said.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Out of the water!

The class breaks for the beach.

THE CHIEF
Now make like sugar cookies and roll
in the sand for me.

The trainees hit their bellies and roll. Indeed, they
look like sugar cookies.

THE CHIEF
Collect those poles, gentlemen.
Still a lotta beachfront you haven't
seen...

Groaning, the trainees grab poles. Jordan's pole, wet
slips from their collective grasp...

And bangs Stamm's ankle. He HOWLS through his teeth.

ENGLAND
How bad? Stamm?

JORDAN
We better get a medic over --

STAMM
No, goddamnit. No.

INSTRUCTOR
Up! Up! Up! Up!

Stamm swallows the pain. Poles go back on shoulders.
Looking like drunk centipedes, the class staggers off down
the beach.


EXT. MUD PIT - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Wallowing in mud, the class does belly-busters, atomic
sit-ups -- and the sadistic reverse push-up, where
trainees lie of their backs, place hands under shoulder
blades and push their crotches skyward.

THE CHIEF
Pain is your friend. You ally. It
will keep you awake in times of
emergency... it will tell you when
you are seriously injured... it will
keep you angry and remind you to
finish the job and get the hell
home. But you know the best thing
about pain?

CLASS
No, sir!

THE CHIEF
It lets you know that you aren't
dead yet.

Instructors roam, RASPING ORDERS, kicking students into
proper position. Jordan struggles with the reverses.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Go regulation if you can't do the
reverses, O'Neil.

She looks around. A lot of the guys are having trouble
with the reverses, not just her.

JORDAN
Thank you, sir. But I like these
just fine.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Not doin' them very fine, O'Neil.

JORDAN
I'll try anyway, sir.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
You'll try what we tell you to try,
O'Neil. Go regulation.

She switches to standard push-ups, her face disappearing
into the ooze with every downstroke. Soon the Chief's
boots slosh into FRAME. He's still looking for his human
sacrifice.

THE CHIEF
Who's it gonna be. I just wonder,
who is it gonna be...


EXT. BEACH - CORONADO NAVAL STATION - SUNSET

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
On your belly... on your back... on
your feet... on your belly... on
your back... on your feet...

Whistle-drills. Silhouetted against a lowering sun, the
students flop around like docked fish.


INT. ADMINISTRATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Blondell is ending her shift. She shoulders a purse and
pauses at a window, seeing...

The trainees shuffling into formation like the living
dead. Jordan is still among them.


EXT. THE GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

THE CHIEF
You have noticed a ship's bell
hanging at the west side of this
courtyard. If, at any time, you
feel you cannot continue with your
training -- that bell is your
salvation. Strike it three times,
and the ordeal is over.

Nervous eyes flick to the bell.

THE CHIEF
Yes, it is a long walk. So I'll
make it as easy as I can.

He turns his back to the class.

THE CHIEF
Now you don't have to watch me
watching you break rank. Because I
know someone here wants to do it.

CAMERA SEARCHES their faces. There isn't one trainee here
who hasn't thought about it. Including Jordan.

THE CHIEF
Now I know what you're thinking...

SLUTNIK
(low)
I'm thinkin' we could jump him right
now...

THE CHIEF
"Can I really take 15 weeks of this
bubonic asshole?" If you don't know
the answer to that question, the
answer is "No, you cannot." And
that is another historical fact. So
do it. Admit you don't have what it
takes... admit you are out of your
depth -- or we're all heading back
to the beach right now.
(waiting a beat)
Instructors! Time hack!

Following the Chief's lead, Instructors lift their dive
watches.

THE CHIEF
Six... five... four... three...
two... one... HACK!
(to class)
The time is now 12-hundred. The sun
is shining brightly. Plenty of
daylight left for another phone-pole
run...

GROANS behind him. The groans give way to the SOUND OF
BOOTS breaking rank.


INT. ADMINISTRATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

BLONDELL'S POV: Of a lone figure crossing to the bell.


EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

QUICK CLOSEUPS of Miller, Slutnik, Wickwire, turning to
watch someone cross the grinder. At least we know who it
isn't.

CLOSE on the Chief as the BELL RINGS THREE TIMES. He
turns around to find...

Stamm at the bell.

For the first time, the Chief looks dead-bang at Jordan.
Was he expecting her?

THE CHIEF
Leave your helmet there, Stamm.
Back to the barracks.

Stamm drops his helmet and limps away.

THE CHIEF
The rest of you should remember one
thing. The only easy day was today.
Lieutenant Wickwire? Turning it
over to you.

WICKWIRE
Cuh-lass, face right!

They march off.


INT. MESS HALL - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Dead-ass tired, Jordan slides her tray down the line,
piling on food that means nothing more than raw calories.
She heads for...

A table of trainees, one spot open. Seeing her coming,
the guys shift position. Suddenly the table is full.

ENGLAND
Better look elsewhere, O'Neil.

Jordan glares. None of them meet her eyes. She wheels
around -- and now all eyes are on her, watching her ass
walk away. FEATURE Slutnik, the walking sperm bank.

SLUTNIK
Half a night, Lord, just gimme half
a night to set her straight...

Jordan tries another table. This one, too, becomes
abruptly full. As Jordan leaves, HOLD on Miller. He's a
human eclipse -- six-three, 220, the perfect commando
physique. Instructors wish they could clone him.

MILLER
Average woman is 25 percent body
fat. That's one-quarter fat, man.
Think about that.

MCCOOL
Nice distribution, though.

MILLER
No way does she makes this program.
No way.

After wandering the mess hall like a homeless person,
Jordan finds refuge at a table with female mess stewards.
They look at her with blank faces. No understanding. No
compassion.


EXT. B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Jordan walks in a bathrobe, toweling her hair dry. She
fishes for keys at her door.

VOICE
It's not so much that they hate
you...

Jordan looks. Someone is sitting on an outdoor table,
smoking. He leans into the light so she can see his face.
It's Wickwire, the mid-30s lieutenant who doubles as class
officer. He's dangerously handsome.

WICKWIRE
They're more afraid of you.

JORDAN
Well, now I feel so much better.

WICKWIRE
It was made clear before you came --
harassment equals career suicide.
Can't say anything good, so they
don't say much at all. To your
face, anyway.

JORDAN
Whose orders were those?

WICKWIRE
It was made clear.
(getting up)
Anyway, stay ballsy. First week's
hell, then it levels out. Until
S.E.R.E. training, anyway. That's
hell-and-a-half.

JORDAN
And how do you know that?

WICKWIRE
Made it to Week 10 last time.

JORDAN
I didn't know they let you try
again. Especially at your age.

WICKWIRE
You're kind of a surprise yourself.

A faint grin from Wickwire before he shadows back across
the courtyard that separates the two B.O.Q. buildings.
Back across no-man's land.


INT. JORDAN'S B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Two beds. Matching lockers. A desk, a chair, a mirror.
All overwhelmingly dull.

Jordan drops the robe off her shoulders to take inventory
of her body. Both sides of her neck are bruised from the
phone-pole run. Her back and thighs are sand-burned.
Mirror cuts abound. She's already a mess.

Jordan uncaps some cologne. It's a vestige of her old
life she's not going to surrender. She sniffs. Savors.
Dabs. Looks back in the mirror...

And breaks out laughing. It's like dropping a rose in a
cesspool.


EXT. SILVER STRAND HIGHWAY - CORONADO - DAY

A PHOTOGRAPHER stands near a car parked just outside the
base. He's peering through a 600mm lens.

PHOTOGRAPHER'S POV: FOCUSING through cyclone fencing...
PANNING past the sand dunes... and finding green-clad
trainees gathered at an obstacle course.


EXT. OBSTACLE COURSE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

An explosion of sand: England and Wickwire belly-flop
into a sand pit and speed-crawl under barbed wire. Clear,
they gain their feet and blitz toward...

The rolling logs. They balance-beam their way to...

The rope climb. Racing to the top, they reach a platform
and fling themselves down onto...

The high poles. They land awkwardly, losing their wind
and their grip, tumbling into the sand pit below before...

Racing for the finish. The Chief thumbs a stopwatch.

THE CHIEF
England, 88 seconds. You're good to
go for the slide-for-life.
Wickwire, roll back till you get
south of 90.

WICKWIRE
Fuck. Yes sir.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Who'd you kiss to get back in here,
anyway?

Wickwire dusts off and starts back for...

The starting line. Stepping up next is Cortez, the human
fighting cock. Jordan lines up beside him and psyches up
for the first obstacle -- and eight-foot sheer wall.

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
Hang on, here...

He grabs something off a truck and positions it at the
base of the wall. It's a little two-step platform.

SNICKERS, MOANS from the guys. Cortez can barely contain
his disgust.

CORTEZ
Aw, what is this...

JORDAN
(mortified)
Sir...

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
Don't have to use it, O'Neil, but
it's gotta go out.
(calling out)
Five... four... three...

JORDAN
I can make this wall without --

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
... two... one... MARK!

Cortez blurs away. Jordan starts a step late.

Cortez takes the wall clean. Eschewing the two-step,
Jordan jumps right over it -- but jumps too far out
because of it. She takes the wall awkwardly.

INTERCUT the others as they break rank to follow, eager to
see Cortez blow her off the course.

CLASS
Lesgo, Cortez, LESGO, GO, GO!

Cortez belly-flops into the sand pit -- and snags going
under the barbed wire.

CORTEZ
Shit of a saint...

Catching up, Jordan clears the wire without a hitch and
leads going into...

The rolling logs. They both tight-rope across nimbly and
bound on toward...

Rope climb. Jordan starts up at a decent clip -- but
Cortez comes from behind like a chimp on white sugar,
doubling her speed.

CLASS
Take her, take her here, Cortez...
lookit that monkey-man go... hoo-
yah, hoo-yah...

Cortez reaches the top platform. Now he's faced with...

The high poles. He's seen others land sideways and pay
the price. Trying another way, Cortez takes a flying
leap...

And WHUMPS down with legs astraddle. He tried to cushion
the landing with his hands -- and failed magnificently.
His balls took the brunt.

Jordan WHUMPS down beside him with legs astraddle -- and
shoots Cortez a "Hey, no problem" look. She rolls off the
poles...

And drops to the pit below. Cortez lands right behind.
Now it's a flat-out sprint for...

The finish line. He takes her at the tape.

THE CHIEF
Cortez, 93 seconds. O'Neil, 94.
Cortez, do a little rescue-recovery
on your gonads and line up again.
O'Neil... move ahead.

Heading back to the starting line, Jordan wheels around.

JORDAN
Say again, sir?

THE CHIEF
You heard me. Move on.

CORTEZ
Aw, this is such bullshit...

Others GRUMBLE in commiseration. Jordan flushes with
anger.

JORDAN
Chief, sir, I don't understand
why --

THE CHIEF
Educate her, Pyro.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Automatic five-second deduction,
which slips you under the wire.
It's called "gender-norming," O'Neil
-- standard procedure for all
females in physical training
courses. Where you been the last
few years?

JORDAN
What "all females"? If I'm the
only --

THE CHIEF
Twice now, I have said the words
"move on."

He turns his back, leaving no possibility of discussion.
Jordan stares after.

SLUTNIK
Can't live with them, can't kill
them. What's the point?

MCCOOL
Somebody throw a tent over this
circus.

WICKWIRE
(low to Jordan)
Just let it go. If it's in your
favor, just shut the hell up and
take it.


EXT. B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Dressed in bathrobe, Jordan reaches her door. She pauses
to check...

The outdoor table. No visitors tonight.


INT. JORDAN'S B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Jordan pushes inside -- and stops when she sees the little
two-step platform. That awful crutch. Someone has put it
beside her bed.

Jordan wheels around to check...


EXT. B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

The men' building. Slutnik and a few others loiter on a
balcony, mirroring her stare.


EXT. CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Hastily dressed, Jordan marches across the base. Her
march turns into an angry run as she cuts through parking
lots... jumps hedges... and finally reaches...


EXT. C.O.'S HOUSE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

An on-base bungalow. Jordan bangs on the front door until
the C.O.'S scowling face appears.

JORDAN
Pardon the hour, sir. But you told
me to come to you immediately if I
felt I was being mistreated in any
way.

C.O.
Didn't take long.

He waves her inside.


INT. C.O.'S HOUSE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

C.O.
All right, lieutenant, give me a
name and specifics, I'll have the
X.O. file an action first thing in
the morning.
(waits)
A name?

JORDAN
It's you, sir. And it started the
day I came here.

C.O.
(jolted)
Oh, really.

JORDAN
It's this double-standard, the
separate quarters, the deferential
treatment. It's how you pulled out
my chair and nearly served high tea
the first time we met.

C.O.
Because I was civil, now you're
complaining.

JORDAN
I can't afford civility, sir. How
am I supposed to fit in with these
guys when you've got me set up as an
outsider? Even if I make it under
these rules, I still lose, because
there'll always be a flag in my file
-- "Yeah, she made it, but..." I
mean, really -- why didn't you just
issue me a goddamn petticoat to wear
around the base?

C.O.
Did you just have a brain-fart?

JORDAN
Pardon?

C.O.
Did you just barge in here and curse
at your base commander? If so, I
regard that as a bonafide brain-
fart, and I resent it when people
fart inside my home.

JORDAN
I think you've resented me from the
start, sir.

Now, finally, her opponent steps into the ring. And he's
a bare-knuckle brawler.

C.O.
(building)
What I resent, lieutenant, is some
politician using my base as a test
tube for her grand social
experiment. What I resent is the
sensitivity training that is now
mandatory for my men... the day-care
center I have to build where an
officer's lounge used to be... and
the OB/GYN I have to keep on staff
just so someone can keep track of
your personal pap smears.
(drawing close)
But most of all, lieutenant, I
resent your perfume, however subtle
it may be, competing with the aroma
of my fine three-dollar-and-fifty-
nine cent cigar, which I will
happily put out this very instant if
the phallic nature of it happens to
offend your goddamn fragile
sensibilities. DOES IT?

JORDAN
No, sir.

C.O.
No, sir, WHAT?

JORDAN
The shape doesn't bother me. It's
just that goddamn rotten stench.

A dangerous beat -- before the C.O. disengages.

C.O.
Well. 'Least now we're talking the
same language.
(a beat)
So one standard. Is that what
you're after?

JORDAN
Same rules for everyone, sir.

C.O.
Straight up?

JORDAN
Across the board, sir.

C.O.
And if you just happen to wash out,
I won't have to contend with you
bitchin' to some hairy-chested
female Senator? And please note I
did not identify any one in
particular.

JORDAN
Wouldn't dream of it, sir.

A deciding beat.

C.O.
Then good night.

JORDAN
So I'll get a fair shot?

C.O.
You'll get everything you want,
O'Neil. Let's see if you want what
you're gonna get.


INT. BARBER SHOP - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Jordan gets her hair cut to regulation length. It's over
in seconds.


INT. ADMINISTRATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Jordan slaps down old room keys and new orders. Blondell
scans the paperwork with deepening concern.

BLONDELL
This some kind of joke?


INT. JORDAN'S B.O.Q. - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Jordan tosses her belongings into a laundry bag. She
slings the bag over her shoulder, boots aside the hated
two-step on her way out...


EXT. B.O.Q. BUILDING - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

... marches across the no-man's land...


INT. B.O.Q. ROOM - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

... and bangs open a door. Slutnik sits up on his bed.

SLUTNIK
Well, who the shit you think you
are? Comin' in here like that?

JORDAN
Your new roommate.

Slutnik's face curdles. Jordan dumps her bag on an open
bunk and starts unpacking.

JORDAN
Anybody usin' these drawers here?

SLUTNIK
Hey, hey, HEY. No possibility. You
can't stay in here. You can't sleep
right next to me.

JORDAN
Funny, the C.O. says I can.

She slaps orders on his chest, continues to unpack.

SLUTNIK
Aw, lookit this, lookit this --
she's bringin' Tampax in here.
C'mon, you got nothin' but rooms
over there.

JORDAN
That your desk? I'll take this one.

SLUTNIK
WOULD YOU JUST GET OUTTA HERE?

JORDAN
(whirling on him)
Listen, Sex Ape. I'm here to stay.
And if you don't want me for a
roommate or classmate, you got two
options -- move out or ring out.
End of file.

Slutnik stalks out. Jordan fires a look at the innocent
bystander here, McCool. He was studying at his desk when
the fireworks began.

JORDAN
What about you, McCool? Any problem
with the room assignment?

McCool -- an imperturbable black lieutenant -- just goes
back to his manuals.

MCCOOL
"It's not a job -- it's an
adventure."


EXT. OCEAN - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

START on flares igniting overhead. FOLLOW the flares as
they parachute down into the surf to illuminate...

The class, standing in one long line, arms linked. As
black waves knock out their legs, we're reminded of show
girls kicking their way through some macabre review.


EXT. BEACH - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Firing flare guns and working their bullhorns:

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
58 degrees this morning! That's not
a bad water temp, really -- if
you're standing where we are!

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
Slurred speech, lack of proper motor
control, short-term amnesia -- all
early signs of hypothermia!
Advanced hypothermia is easy to
detect in a classmate! He'll look
like he's dead!

THE CHIEF
Body heat. In situations of extreme
cold, you can always count on body
heat to keep you alive -- and I do
not mean your own. We will break
you of the cultural barriers that
dictate you should not invade
another man's space. Are any of you
in a situation of extreme cold right
now?

INTERCUTTING trainees and instructors:

CLASS
Yes, sir!

THE CHIEF
Then why aren't you all over the man
next to you?

The class pivots 90 degrees and starts to close rank.
Behind Jordan, Montgomery (a.k.a. "Flea") hesitates:
He's a bantam-weight from Georgia, his manners bred into
the bone. He just can't find a delicate way to grab
Jordan without mounting her.

JORDAN
Just do it, okay?

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
If you can't feel the other guy's
pecker, you ain't in tight enough!
I want nuts to butts!

JORDAN
Come on, Montgomery...

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
Flea! O'Neil! Why is there a break
in that line?

Finally Jordan grabs Flea by the neck, pushes him ahead
and mounts him. The class closes down into a long human
snake.

JORDAN
(in his ear)
Montgomery, why do they call you
"Flea"?

FLEA
It's really "F. Lee Montgomery" --
but that gets whittled down to just
"Flea." For short, ma'am.

JORDAN
So it really has nothing to do with
actual brain size?

FLEA
No, ma'am.

JORDAN
Well, Flea, I appreciate the respect
you just showed me. But I don't
need it and don't want it -- not
that kind of respect, anyway. It's
just gonna hurt us both, okay?

FLEA
I'll work on it, ma'am.

JORDAN
Do that.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
(to the Chief)
Time.

THE CHIEF
Check your watch, Pyro. Seems fast.

CAMERA POLLS the grim, blue-lipped faces in the water.
Jordan feels Flea starting to shake. Badly.

JORDAN
Hey. You okay, Flea?

FLEA
'Snot me. It's him.

Two bodies ahead, it's the big bruiser, Miller, who's
shuddering. Jordan feels him shaking through Flea.

MILLER
Jesus, my hands... they aren't
workin' right...

NEWBERRY
How long i'zis for?

WICKWIRE
'Sposed to be 20-minute intervals,
no more.

NEWBERRY
Swear each time's gettin' longer.

MCCOOL
This where you bailed last time,
Wick?

WICKWIRE
Huh-uh -- but wasn't middla February
last time, either.

FLEA
How you doin', Miller? Miller?

No answer. Bad sign. On shore:

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
22 minutes...

Ignoring, the Chief lifts his bullhorn:

THE CHIEF
Remember, all this is completely
voluntary. For any of you who don't
want to continue, Instructor Johns
is now serving coffee and danish at
the ambulance.

A portable light comes on. Indeed, an instructor is
setting up coffee service.

THE CHIEF
Any takers?

SLUTNIK
He's the fuckin' Antichrist.

MCCOOL
Wick! They really got donuts over
there? Or just some'a last night's
dinner rolls?

FLEA
Look like donuts to me...

JORDAN
(in disbelief)
What're you guys doing? Huh?

MCCOOL
Just askin'

JORDAN
What, you gonna give it all up for a
maple twist? How dumb you gotta be?
That's exactly what they --

Suddenly the line rips apart. It's Miller, breaking for
shore.

CLASS
NO!

Soon the dyke is bursting everywhere: Four others break
rank, following Miller's lead.

The deserters stagger onto the beach. MEDICS close in
quick, draping them with blankets, shining flashlights in
their faces, asking brain-check question.

MEDICS
Tell me what day this is... look at
me now... what city are you from,
sailor... here, look right here...

A medic nods to the Chief. No hypothermia. Not yet.

THE CHIEF
You want another minute to think
about this? Huh?
(no response; to
Miller directly)
Do any of you want to reconsider?

Avoiding his eyes, Miller wags his head.

THE CHIEF
Johnson. Get 'em out of my scan.

It's a death sentence. As the quitters slouch for the
coffee truck...

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
By my watch... which, of course
appears to be broken... they've been
in 27 minutes without the benefit of
protective gear.

TIGHT on the Chief. Scanning the remaining trainees.
Thinking about holding out out for one more.

TIGHT on Jordan. Knowing who he's waiting for. Wondering
if she can outlast him.

THE CHIEF
(into bullhorn)
Everybody out.

With a SHIVERING CHEER, the trainees stampede ashore,
grabbing blankets, trading body-bumps and high-fives.
Jordan gets swept up in the esprit: They've conquered a
common enemy. But when she tries to get high-fived...

The guys turn their backs. It's a cold rebuff, worse then
any water.

HOLD TIGHT on Jordan. Shivering. Watching the guys drift
away. Hating them.

WICKWIRE
Hey. Way to gut it out.

JORDAN
Thanks, Wick.


INT. INSTRUCTOR'S OFFICE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

The instructors are shuffling muster lists, reorganizing
the class. B.G., the BELL TOLLS again and again.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
(shaking head)
Miller. Thought the guy was made of
depleted uranium. Really didn't
expect to lose him.

THE CHIEF
Every class has its surprises, Pyro.
This one'll be no different.


EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Blondell crosses the grinder with another female ensign,
tall and striking. Passing the bell, Blondell checks
on...

The helmets lined up beneath. A dozen already.

An O.S. CADENCE CALL -- then, led by Wickwire, trainees
double-time into the grinder, uniforms drenched from a
beach run. Among them, still, is Jordan. It brings a
Mona Lisa smile to Blondell's face.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Change those clothes, be back here
in six minutes! And I am timing
you!

The class scatters. Slutnik hits the brakes when he sees
Blondell and her friend.

SLUTNIK
Jesus Christ. And I only got three
minutes apiece...

ENGLAND
(jerking him away)
Barkin' up the wrong dress, Slutnik.
You ain't their type.

Overhearing, Jordan snaps a look at Blondell, only now
realizing. Their eyes meet.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
O'Neil! What're you gawking at?


INT. C.O.'S OFFICE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

P.R. FLAK
(reading newspaper)
"... last week at Coronado. The
woman, identity unknown, is believed
to be the first female candidate for
the elite Special Reconnaissance
program. Her presence could signal
a shift in the Navy's long-standing
policy that excludes women from
combat positions."

The P.R. FLAK drops the newspaper on the C.O.'s desk.
It's the San Diego Tribune. Under the headline "G.I.
JANE," a photo shows a chesty sailor running the obstacle
course.

C.O.
(calling O.S.)
I'm asking again. Where is she?

YEOMAN
Inbound now, sir. Had to pull her
out of the dive bell.

P.R. FLAK
I have interview requests from two
local TV stations. And a
sociologist from U.C. San Diego
called, wanted to know if she could
examine the interaction between
"G.I. Jane" and the men.

C.O.
"A sociol..." Kill the interviews.
I don't need civilians nosin' around
in matters that are supposed to be
covert in nature. Just kill 'em
before this whole thing gets outta
con --

YEOMAN
Senator DeHaven calling, sir.

The C.O. gets an instant headache.


INT. SENATE BARBER SHOP - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

C.O. (V.O.)
Base Commander Turrentine speaking.

In the Senate barber shop, DeHaven is having her hair
colored. She holds a fax of the Tribune article in one
hand, a cell phone in the other.

DEHAVEN
(hitting like a Scud)
Commander, are you of the habit of
letting photographers traipse around
your base snappin' their fill?
These were supposed to have been
discreet test cases --

INTERRCUTTING:

C.O.
Senator, they stand out on the
public highway with telephoto
lenses --

DEHAVEN
-- and now I got reporters from
Toadsquat, Iowa, calling my office
and askin' what I know about this
"G.I. Jane" thing.

C.O.
-- nothing I can do about it unless
you're suggesting I infringe on
their civil liberties -- which I'd
happily do if you'll just trim a
little fat off the Constitution.

DEHAVEN
Are you truly mouthin' off to a
senior member of the Senate Arms
Committee? I mean, I'll give you
points for style -- just nothin' for
smarts.


INT. C.O.'S OFFICE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

The C.O. double-takes as Jordan enters: She's sun-burned,
wind-burned, sand-burned, chapped and chaffed, bloody and
soggy. Her dive suit leaks onto the floor.

JORDAN
See me, sir?

C.O.
You makin' friends with the press,
lieutenant?

He tosses her the paper. Jordan scans the article as
DeHaven continues over speakerphone:

DEHAVEN
Well, seein's how this thing is out,
you let me handle the r.p.m. From
this point forward, I want all press
matters coordinated via my office.
I'll be god-damned if I'm gonna
watch Hayes pull flowers out of his
ass and take credit for this one.
Him or the President.
(aside to beautician)
This my shade? "Midnight Mahogany"?
'Cuz I'm comin' dangerously close to
lookin' like Ronald Reagan here.

C.O.
Your prerogative, Senator.

DEHAVEN
Awright. How's our girl doin',
anyway?

C.O.
Standing right here in my office.

DEHAVEN
Jordan, dear. How are they treating
you?

JORDAN
(catching C.O.'s
eyes)
Can't complain, ma'am.

DEHAVEN
Hmmm. Maybe I'll ask when I see you
in person.

JORDAN
Uh, ma'am.

DEHAVEN
Gonna be visiting that all-woman's
America's cup team in a few weeks --
If I were a gambler, I'd say Dennis
O'Conner's days are numbered. But
they're in San Diego, so I thought
I'd take a quick promenade of the
base.

Deafening silence. We aren't sure who dreads the idea
more -- the C.O. or Jordan.

C.O.
Uh, V.I.P. security arrangements
generally take some time, Senator.

DEHAVEN
"Security"? What the hell you
talkin' about? Your base isn't
secure?

C.O.
Of course, but there's more --

DEHAVEN
Then set out the good plates, we'll
all have lunch. My office will
follow up with details. Jumping
off, now...

Phone goes dead. The C.O. gives Jordan a look one might
reserve for a lab technician who inadvertently unleashed
Ebola upon the world.

JORDAN
Sir, I want you to know that I had
nothing to do with any of this. Not
this article, not --

C.O.
"We'll all have lunch." Good idea.
Oh, and let's be sure to invite this
sociologist, too -- just in case we
want to have a FUCKING BRIDGE GAME
AFTERWARDS!

YEOMAN
Sir? Secretary Hayes calling.

The C.O.'s headache becomes a migraine.

JORDAN
(backing out)
Permission to leave, sir?

C.O.
Permission to evaporate, O'Neil.


INT. SENATE BARBER SHOP - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

DeHaven hands the phone to her aide. He's set up a
portable office in the next barber chair.

DEHAVEN
Think I overplayed it?

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
Congress and the Pentagon share a
lot of plumbing. They'll never know
whose leak it is.


EXT. BEACH - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

150-pound rubber boats ("Zodiacs") litter the beach. The
class is breaking down into six-man crews.

THE CHIEF
Boat Five -- Wickwire, Cozad, Vinyl,
Intagliata, Ayers, and Wise.
Lieutenant Wickwire is your senior
officer. Follow his orders to your
death.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Get it up!

Crew Five finds their Zodiac, hoists it onto their heads.

THE CHIEF
Boat Six -- England, O'Neil, McCool,
Montgomery, Cortez, and Slutnik.
Lieutenant England is your senior
officer.

Jordan rolls her eyes: At least two of the guys in her
crew are blue-ribbon misogynists. Cortez and Slutnik
don't like it any better.

JORDAN
Ah, c'mon...

CORTEZ
Motherachrist...

SLUTNIK
Me? Again?

THE CHIEF
(looking up)
Somebody got a problem with the
muster?

JORDAN
Fine by me, sir!

CORTEZ
No problem, sir!

SLUTNIK
Full of joy here, sir!

Exchanging looks across their Zodiac, Jordan and her new
crewmates lift the boat overhead.

THE CHIEF
Boat Seven...


EXT. BEACH - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

With BATTLE CRIES, 12 boat crews charge into the teeth of
the POUNDING SURF. Some lose their boat to the first
wave; others clear the surf and scramble aboard.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
(into bullhorn)
First crew to finish gets hot food
and warm racks for the night! Rest
of you are digging hide-sites and
eating earthworms tonight!


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

Beyond the breakers, the Zodiacs run parallel to shore,
crews paddling furiously, racing the wind, the sun, the
other crews. Instructors shadow in power boats,
stopwatches running.


EXT. BOAT SIX - OCEAN - DAY

McCool
Don't wanna be pickin' no sandcrabs
outta my ass tonight!

ENGLAND
So shutup and stroke, McCool!

SLUTNIK
Hoo-yah! Hoo-yah!

Flea checks on Jordan. She paddles hard, really digging
in. Flea grins: On some level, he has to admire this
women.

Jordan catches the grin, gives one back.

Ahead, buoys mark the finish line. And just when it seems
victory is at hand...

THWUNK. Something hits Boat Six. Suddenly it's losing
air. Jordan torques around to see...

The Chief on a nearby boat, speargun in hand.

THE CHIEF
Your boat just hit razor coral.
What do you do now?

ENGLAND
Patch and pump! C'mon! Whose ass
is on the kit?

MCCOOL
I say keep paddlin'! We're
almost --

ENGLAND
Forget it, McCool! Pri One is to
save the boat, not win a race! So
let's get on it!

They flail to save their sinking boat. Boat Five noses
past, stealing the lead. Wickwire tosses Jordan a passing
look. "Sorry, but..."


EXT. UPPER DUNES - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Up and down the dunes, crews are digging "hide-sites" --
six-man holes that will be their homes tonight. Cortez
and Slutnik are uprooting shrubs, collecting camouflage
material.

CORTEZ
Four years I petition to get into
this program. Four years. Finally
get here, and now it's co-ed? Such
bullshit. Now I'm gettin' hammered
just 'cuz she's on our crew.

SLUTNIK
Least you don't have to sleep with
her every goddamn night.

CORTEZ
Tellin' you, I'd rather be the last
class with balls than the first one
with chicks.

CUT TO:

EXT. UPPER DUNES - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Jordan and Flea fill sand bags to shore up the walls of
their hide-site. England and McCool shovel back to back.

MCCOOL
Had a grandaddy who wanted to be a
Navy man. Wanted to fire them big
guns on a big-ass battleship. But
Navy said to him, "Oh, no. You can
only do one thing on a battleship."
"Well what's that?" grandaddy said.
"Cook," they said. Now this ain't
100 years ago -- I'm talkin' United
States Navy, middla World War II.
And you know the reason they gave
him? You know why they tol' my
grandaddy he couldn't fight for his
country?

ENGLAND
He talked too much?

MCCOOL
"Negroes can't see at night. Bad
night vision."

JORDAN
You're kiddin' me.

Jordan jumps in the hole, ready to take over shoveling.

MCCOOL
See, you just the new nigger on the
block, O'Neil. That's all. And
maybe you moved in too early.

He climbs out. HOLD on Jordan, looking off down the
dunes, seeing the other crews covering up and going
underground for the night. How the hell did she wind up
here? So far from home?


EXT. SILVER STRAND HIGHWAY - DAY

A Jeep speeds along the public highway, carrying the C.O.
back to base. When the Jeep tops a rise:

C.O.
What in God's name...

Ahead, a half-dozen news crews are camped on the shoulder.
All cameras are trained on the base.


INT. BEDROOM - GEORGETOWN APARTMENT - NIGHT

CAMERA FINDS Navy dress blues laid out on a bed... topcoat
draped on a chair-back... CNN on a television.

CNN COMMENTATOR (TV)
... is denying that it is
considering changing its long-held
policy of exclusion -- but it isn't
denying the presence of at least one
female in a heretofore all-male
program. Dubbed "G.I. Jane" by the
media, this woman is now undergoing
commando training at the Special
Warfare Command Center in San
Diego...

Half-shaven, Royce leans out of the bathroom in time to
catch...

Footage from Coronado: A woman in Navy greens is on a
beach run, loaded down with backpack and M-16. The NEWS
FOOTAGE ZOOMS IN, FREEZE FRAMES with the indelible image
that will be used over and over in coming weeks: Woman
cradling rifle. Madonna for the 21st century.

ROYCE
Goddamn. My poster girl.

CNN COMMENTATOR (TV)
Senator DeHaven's office still has
not released the identity of the
woman, but DeHaven is confirming
that "G.I. Jane" has outlasted many
of her male counter-parts in the
program, said to be one of the most
grueling anywhere. Joining us now
on "Washington Tonight" for the
feminist perspective is Gloria
Allred, live from --

Royce snaps it off. He can't take anymore.


INT. BEAU-ART HALL - WASHINGTON D.C. - NIGHT

Beneath the coffered ceiling of a great Beau-Art hall, one
of Washington's power-tribes is celebrating. We find
gowned women, tuxedoed men, gold-braided naval officers, a
SWING BAND, and...

Secretary Hayes, newly confirmed. He beams as he dances
with his wife. Compliments and friendly barbs come from
all directions:

COMPLIMENTS (O.S.)
Congratulations, Mr. Secretary. Say
hello to the President for me...
Maybe now you can change that carpet
in your office, Teddy... So what was
the deal you made with DeHaven? Or
was it the Devil? Always get them
confused...

HAYES
Didn't you hear? Effective
immediately, all navy vessels can no
longer be referred to as "she."

BRAYS of laughter.

CUT TO:

INT. BEAU-ART HALL - WASHINGTON D.C. - NIGHT

Royce, EXCUSING his way through the crowd, fixating on the
bar, leading his DIAL-A-DATE winner by the hand.
Conversations drift into earshot:

VOICE #1
... women are child-bearers. Life-
givers. Now we're going to make
them killers?

VOICE #2
... just don't have the upper-body
strength...

VOICE #3
How strong do you need to be to
launch a rocket? To push a button
or pull a trigger?

Royce can't get away from it.

DIAL-A-DATE
Are we going to dance?

ROYCE
Not right now.

Just yards from the bar, a Pentagon E-RINGER snags Royce's
elbow.

E-RINGER
Commander Royce. How's life across
the river?

ROYCE
Little slow, sir. When's the
Pentagon going to send me a good
crisis?

E-RINGER
I'll check my out-basket in the
morning. Say, do you know...

The E-Ringer turns to make introductions -- but finds his
CIRCLE OF FRIENDS embroiled in the topic du jour:

CIRCLE #1
... but men have trained as athletes
for 5,000 years. Women have been at
it for, what, couple of decades? Do
we really know the limits of their
strength?

CIRCLE #2
Or their endurance? You know, 30
years ago, women marathoners were 90
minutes off the pace of the men.
Now, the women's time is probably
only 20 minutes off.

CIRCLE #1
Try 15.

CIRCLE #3
But what do female soldiers really
contribute? I mean, why is this
"G.I. Jane" there instead of a man?

Eyes drift to Royce, inviting him into the fray.

ROYCE
(to dial-a-date)
You wait right here. I'll get the
drinks.


INT. MEZZANINE - BEAU-ART HALL - NIGHT

Heading upstairs with an iceless rum. Royce finds a calm
and secluded place to get drunk in peace and quiet.

VOICE #1
Take my word for it. It's just not
going to happen. Not now, not
anytime soon.

VOICE #2
You're guaranteeing that?

Royce frowns: He thought he was alone. He tracks the
voices to a forced-air vent beside the chaise.

VOICE #1
I have it on unorthodox but reliable
authority that combat positions will
remain off-limits. Despite what's
happening with our Babe in Boyland.

Alarms go off in Royce's head. He moves quickly to a
railing, looks down.

ROYCE'S POV: Of two naval officers on the floor below.
They stand beside a matching vent. It's impossible to see
faces from this angle -- but one man has a distinct bald
spot.

NAVAL OFFICER (VOICE #1)
Well, isn't that what these test
cases are supposed to decide?
(thinking)
Unless, of course, you're suggesting
that "G.I. Jane" is on her way to
becoming "Jane Doe"...

BALD SPOT (VOICE #2)
All I'm saying is that we won't be
integrating -- despite the rhetoric
coming off Capitol Hill, despite
what's happening in Coronado. And
you did not hear it from me.

NAVAL OFFICER (VOICE #1)
Hear what?

A conspiratorial handshake. The men split up.


INT. BEAU-ART HALL - WASHINGTON D.C. - NIGHT

Royce flashes down the stairs. Hitting main floor, he
looks around and then bumps into...

DIAL-A-DATE
There you are. Can we please dance
now?

Over her shoulder, Royce spies Bald Spot heading for the
cloak room. Royce commandeers the nearest J.O.

ROYCE
Lieutenant!

J.O.
Yes sir?

ROYCE
Take a dance!


INT. BEAU-ART HALL - WASHINGTON D.C. - NIGHT

Royce bobs and weaves through the crowd, trying to keep
sight of...

Bald Spot. Pushing through the exit doors.

Only steps behind, Royce shoulders through the doors...


EXT. BEAU-ART HALL - WASHINGTON D.C. - NIGHT

And blasts outside, intending to shake some answers out of
Bald Spot. But here Royce finds...

A dozen naval officers waiting for their cars. All of
them now wear caps.

Royce tries to check faces of the quickly departing men.
but it could have been anyone.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. OCEAN - DAY

A high-speed transport ("Seafox") is SLAMMING OVER SWELLS.
Lashed to one side is a rubber life boat.


EXT. SEAFOX - OCEAN - DAY

THE CHIEF
Crew Six! Stand by!

ENGLAND
Flea! 'Cool! O'Neil! Cortez!
Slutnik! In that order! Five-
second intervals! Let's go!

England's crew lines up for cast-and-recover drills: One
by one, they speed-roll off the transport...

... and drop into the life boat. After quickly
stabilizing, they roll off the life boat...

... and disappear underwater like human bullets. England
is last to cast off.


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

Jordan resurfaces. Treading water, she scans for...

Seafox. It makes a hard turn in the water and starts
back. The recovery rig -- a big flexible loop -- is
lowered into position.

Still hauling ass, Seafox picks up the trainees in reverse
order -- England, Slutnik, Cortez. They each stab an arm
through the passing loop...


EXT. SEAFOX - OCEAN - DAY

... and vault back aboard, slick as hell.

CORTEZ
Hoo-yah! Better'n sex in a car
crash!

But now they're bearing down fast on...


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

Jordan. She braces as best she can. As SEAFOX THUNDERS
past, she stabs for the loop...

And snags it with her hand. But only her hand.

Hanging on grimly, Jordan drags face down in torrential
water. Her mouth gropes for clean air but can't find it.
If she doesn't let go soon, she'll drown.


EXT. SEAFOX - OCEAN - DAY

At the stern, the Chief spots Jordan bobbing up in the
boat's wake.

THE CHIEF
(to pilot)
Next recovery! Keep goin', keep
goin'!


EXT. OCEAN - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

COUGHING up water, Jordan watches Seafox speed on toward
McCool and Flea. They make textbook recoveries. She's
the only one who couldn't cut it.


INT. WOMEN'S SHOWERS - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Head hung, Jordan showers alone.

THE CHIEF (O.S.)
You know, the Israelis...

Jordan recoils. Christ, how long has he been there? Just
standing in the doorway?

THE CHIEF
... they tried women in the 1967
War. Female soldiers.

With forced calm, Jordan squeaks off the water and finds a
towel.

JORDAN
Permission to get dressed, sir?

THE CHIEF
It seems the men couldn't get used
to the sight of women blown open and
their viscera hanging from tree
limbs. Israeli men would linger
over wounded females -- often to the
detriment of the mission, often
endangering their own lives. They
don't use women anymore.

JORDAN
(moving closer)
Sir, someone mentioned you received
the Navy Cross. May I ask what you
got it for?

THE CHIEF
For pulling a 210-pound man out of a
burning barrack in Saudi Arabia.

JORDAN
I see. So when a man tries to
rescue another man, he's a hero.
But when he tries to rescue a woman,
he's gone soft.

THE CHIEF
Could you have pulled that 210-pound
man clear, lieutenant?

She can't say yes. She wants to but can't.

THE CHIEF
Females in combat situations impact
unit cohesion. Men fight better
without women around. And that is
an historical fact.

JORDAN
It also seems like a problem with
the men's attitude, sir. So maybe
you should be sniffing around their
shower room instead.

She shoulders past. The Chief gives her a few steps
before dropping his bomb:

THE CHIEF
England went out with a stress
fracture. That puts you in charge,
lieutenant.

JORDAN
(off-balance)
McCool's that same rank. We're both
j.g.'s.

THE CHIEF
You were commissioned one month
earlier, which makes you the senior
officer.
(passing her on his
way out)
Remember. There are no bad crews --
only bad leaders.


INT. ARTILLERY RANGE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Trainees are getting familiar with M-60 machine guns,
firing SHORT BURST at downfield targets.

CORTEZ
(pissed)
No operational experience, and now
she's callin' the shots?
Unbelievable.

SLUTNIK
Suppose she'll wanna eat with us
now...

Jordan overhears them BITCHING. She steps up to an open
slot -- and proceeds to WAIL AWAY with her M-60, tracer
rounds blazing. Her target vaporized, she keeps WAILING
madly, taking out Slutnik's target... then Cortez's...
then...

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
O'Neil... O'Neil... O'NEIL!

Finally she stops.

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
One burst, one body, O'Neil! What
the fuck you trying to do? Spell
your name?
(to class)
You are not infantry! Your
firepower is limited! Excessive
killing only risks compromise...

Reloading, Jordan tosses a look at Slutnik and Cortez.
Ain't nobody bitchin' now.


EXT. MESS HALL - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

BLONDELL (O.S.)
S.E.R.E. training coming up.

Eating at a table with other women, Jordan turns to see
Blondell setting down her tray.

BLONDELL
They take you away to San Clemente
Island. Half the guys quit when
they come back. Supposed to be just
hell-and-a-half.

JORDAN
That's what I hear.

BLONDELL
Can I ask you somethin', lieutenant?
How come you're doing this? I mean,
we're kinda curious.

JORDAN
Who's "we"?

BLONDELL
Just some of the women.


EXT. QUARTERDECK - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Walking across the base:

JORDAN
I don't know if there's any single
reason. But my father was Navy.
And he had this old-time recruiting
poster in his den. It showed a girl
trying on a sailor's uniform while
saying, "Gee, I wish I were a man!
I'd join the Navy!" Was maybe 10
years old when I first saw it, and
even then it felt wrong. Made me
mad. And I don't think a month has
gone by that I haven't thought about
that poster. "Gee, I wish I were a
man."

BLONDELL
I've been accused of that wish.

JORDAN
The woman I saw you with...

BLONDELL
Just a friend. We have friends,
too, you know.

JORDAN
But are there... I mean, how many...

BLONDELL
More than you'd guess. It's just
that we don't hold coffee klatches.
If more then three of us get
together at any one time, the guys
think it's some kind of uprising.

They laugh.

BLONDELL
Sounds funny now, but it's really
not. We have to be careful. The
Navy still knows how to put on a
witch-hunt.

Reaching the quarterdeck, they scan a message board.
Jordan finds a half-dozen phone slips for her.

JORDAN
Royce...


INT. GEORGETOWN APARTMENT - NIGHT

ROYCE
(into phone)
I've been trying you for five days.
Don't they give you messages?

JORDAN (V.O.)
It's hard to find time to sleep,
Royce. Much less keep up with my
phone life.

ROYCE
How hard they making it on you?


EXT. PHONE KIOSK - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Jordan sighs and slumps against the phone kiosk. Where to
start?

ROYCE (V.O.)
That bad?

JORDAN
I feel like there's men here,
there's women here -- then there's
men. But hey, what'd I expect?

INTERCUTTING Jordan and Royce:

ROYCE
Well, not this. I was doing the
Pentagon scene few nights ago. Got
some fresh stuff -- about you. You
may be in a hostile camp. I think
someone may be taking steps to
ensure that you crash and burn.

JORDAN
Me? Why me?

ROYCE
Don't you know? How they're talking
about you?

JORDAN
I saw an article...

ROYCE
I can't walk two blocks in
Washington without hearing about
"G.I. Jane." You're all over the
place, and whether you wanted it or
not, the feminists are sizing you up
for that poster.

Jordan's face sours with an errant thought.

JORDAN
So why are you telling me this?

ROYCE
Big symbols make big targets,
Jordan. I think someone's gunning
for you.

JORDAN
You know, Royce, I got enough heat
on me without you turning up the
jets, too.

ROYCE
I'm only trying to warn you in
case --

JORDAN
Well, let me warm you: I'm going
though with this. The more
everybody fucks with me, fucks with
my head, the more it just makes me
want to finish. So don't expect me
back crying in your arms any time
soon, okay?

ROYCE
That's not what I want, Jordan. I
mean... it is and it isn't...

JORDAN
Still can't make up your mind, huh?
Gotta go, Royce.

ROYCE
Jordan. You watch your ass.

JORDAN
Sure. I'll join the crowd.


EXT. AIR STATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

A HELO WARMS UP on its pad.

Crew Six approaches, garbed in black wetsuits, loaded down
with weapons and rucksacks. Jordan is at the lead.


INT. HELO - NIGHT

The helo is airborne. Sitting on rucksacks, trainees
slather their faces with green camouflage paint. Over the
HOWLING ROTORS:

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Infiltrate... establish your hide-
site... record any movement of
troops, vehicles, patrols -- any
activity inside your scan. If you
are compromised, you have two
options! Newberry!

Newberry is the new sixth man. He's young enough to still
have a hyperactive Adam's apple.

NEWBERRY
Evasive maneuvers or radio for
emergency extraction, sir!

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
If you are extracting, be damn sure
to follow procedures you have
learned in your classroom training!
A helo cannot extract you from a
wooded area! You must bring it down
in a clearing! What's the minimum
clearance for an MH-60 Black Hawk,
McCool?

MCCOOL
32 feet, six inches, sir!

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
You will be penalized for early
extraction, but you will be
penalized more for capture -- trust
me, far more! Survival! Evasion!
Rescue! Evacuation! Welcome to
S.E.R.E.!


EXT. OCEAN - NIGHT

The helo swoops low over the water, moon silhouetting.
Black figures helo-cast into the ocean.


INT. HELO - NIGHT

Last out, Jordan is poised to follow when...

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Lieutenant! Don't back down!

Jordan looks back. "What the hell does that mean?"
Offering no elaboration, Pyro signals "GO!" Jordan
springs clear...


EXT. OCEAN - NIGHT

... and knifes into black water.

The HELO PATTERS away.

An inky stillness overtakes the world.

Jordan activates a red-light beacon, sweeps it around,
revealing her position to...

Her crew. Five black faces regroup around her.

SLUTNIK
Feel right at home, McCool?

They secure weapons atop their waterproof rucksacks.
Jordan checks a heat-bearing compass.

JORDAN
(nodding direction)
South-southeast. And I don't want
to hear another word till we're
underground.

Pushing rucksacks ahead of them, they start swimming
towards...

A moonlit shoreline. Half-mile ahead.


EXT. ROCKY SHORELINE - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - NIGHT

Jordan's crew reaches shallow water. They deflate their
vests and rucksacks. Jordan trades her face mask for
night-vision goggles.

NIGHT-VISION POV: Sweeping the rocks. Nothing at first.
Then two "hostiles" appear, patrolling the rocks.

Jordan motions "down." Six faces sink from sight.

NIGHT-VISION/UNDERWATER POV: Of the "hostile" patrol
moving on.

They resurface. On Jordan's cue, the crew sheds flippers
and begins scaling rocks. They've made landfall.


EXT. HIDE-SITE MONTAGE - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - NIGHT

MONTAGE: Racing the coming sun, Jordan's crew builds
their hide-site... digging feverishly... filling sand
bags... telescoping open a roof pole, fanning out spars...
laying canvas roof panels into place... camouflaging the
panels... sprinkling sanitizing powder around the
perimeter to ward off animals. INTERCUT WITH...

A snake slithering across the ground. As it nears the
hide-site...

A knife whacks its head off.

Slutnik picks up the carcass, kicks dirt over the severed
head. No trace.


EXT. SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

CAMERA PANS the island, awash in morning light. Woodlands
lie distant. A road is the only man-made feature -- until
in FOREGROUND, we find a spotting scope poking from the
ground.


INT. HIDE-SITE - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

SCOPE POV: Of the road. Fast-attack vehicles approach.

MCCOOL
(peering into scope)
Got two FAVs moving south. I
make... four banditos aboard,
carrying... H-60 machine guns...

Jordan REPEATS THE INFO into a digital tape-recorder, adds
the time.

JORDAN
Newberry, get a photo. South?

CORTEZ
Entering my scan now...

JORDAN
West?

SLUTNIK
Clear.

JORDAN
North?

FLEA
Clear.

SCOPE POV: Of the FAVs disappearing down the road.

CORTEZ
FAVs clear.

Everyone relaxes -- as much as six people can in a hole
five feet-wide. McCool opens up MREs (Meals Ready to Eat)
Slutnik guts his snake.

MCCOOL
You mind? I'm trying to eat here.

SLUTNIK
So am I.

Cortez finishes pissing into a tin pot. He transfers the
waste to a zip-lock baggy, offers the pot.

CORTEZ
Anyone?

He looks at Jordan. She eyes the pot, tempted and nettled
at the same time.

FLEA
Don't wanna evacuate 'cuz someone
came down with uric poisoning, el-
tee.

Abruptly Jordan unzips, drops her pants, sticks the pot
under her. It raises eyebrows: It's a far cry from when
she was covering up in cold water.

JORDAN
Didn't even bitch about the seat,
did I?


EXT. SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

WIDE VIEW: As a lone figure appears on foot.


INT. HIDE-SITE - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

MCCOOL
What the... Got an unknown here.
100 yards north-northeast.

They pile up at McCool's scope. Jordan bulls her way
through.

SCOPE POV: It's a women. Dressed in civilian clothes,
she collects firewood. And she's coming this way.

MCCOOL
She part of the training?

JORDAN
I don't know...

SLUTNIK
"She?" There's another one?

McCool takes a second look.

SCOPE POV: Of the women drawing closer... closer... and
finally looking dead-bang at us. She does an about-face
and walks away. Quickly.

MCCOOL
Shit. Think we're had.

CORTEZ
Smoke her.

MCCOOL
I ain't gonna shoot her.

CORTEZ
Only blanks. Lemme do it.

MCCOOL
(pushing him away)
Hey. Ain't your call, man.

He looks to Jordan.

JORDAN
Pri One is to protect the mission.
If she represents a real threat, we
have to do it.

Pleased, Cortez slips his rifle under a roof panel.

JORDAN
(to McCool)
But did she see us? Do you know for
a fact that we are compromised?

McCool doesn't. Not for sure.

JORDAN
If not, firing will only give away
our position to hostiles in the
area. Now how smart is that?

MCCOOL
(a beat)
Mighta been civilian.

NEWBERRY
They got regular peeps on this
island, don't they?


EXT. ROAD - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

The asphalt road shimmers with midday heat. Suddenly a
TROOP CARRIER ROARS over a rise.


INT. HIDE-SITE - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

SCOPE POV: Of the troop carrier braking hard. "Hostiles"
spill out the rear -- and fan out all around us.

CORTEZ
(at scope)
Banditos on the east perimeter! 150
yards! Shit, she was part of it!

MCCOOL
Fuck me.

FLEA
What's the word, el-tee? We're
about one minute from a major take-
down here.

HOLD on Jordan, heart skipping. Did she really make the
wrong call?

JORDAN
All right, fire-and-evade maneuvers.
Drop everything but weapons and the
PRC radio -- we're gonna be high
speed, low drag all the way to the
link-up site. Ready?

SLUTNIK
Sure. Now she wants to shoot.

JORDAN
MOVE!


EXT. SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

They come out of the hide-site like atomic locusts,
splintering into three groups and laying down SUPPRESSIVE
FIRE as they blitz for...

The woodlands.

"Hostiles" FIRE and pursue.

Flea is running flat out when the ground vanishes beneath
him. He goes down like a doped race horse. Suddenly
exposed, another crew scrambles into daylight: Flea ran
right over their hide-site.

Slutnik yanks Flea out, gets him back on his feet.


EXT. WOODS - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

Breathing like asthmatics, Jordan's crew regroups at the
link-up site just inside the woods. Flea comes in
hobbling. Badly.

SLUTNIK
This ain't workin' right!

MCCOOL
What's our go-to-shit plan, O'Neil?

SLUTNIK
This ain't even workin' wrong!

A beat as Jordan deliberates. She doesn't want to go out
like this.

FLEA
Really don't wanna be captured, el-
tee. Heard some bad things.

JORDAN
Fuck.
(snatching the radio)
Basher-Basher, this is Ground Crew
Six requesting emergency extraction.
Stand by for a PRC fix...


EXT. SKY - DAY

As a helo pirouettes in midair.


EXT. WOODS - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

Jordan's crew lopes through the woods, searching for a
place to bring the helo down. Right on their heels...

ARTILLERY SIMULATORS THUMP-THUMP-THUMP, illumination
GRENADES POP and flare. This may not be war, but it'll do
until the real thing comes along.


INT. HELO - DAY

PILOT'S POV: Buzzing treetops, searching.


EXT. WOODS - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

On the run:

MCCOOL
32 feet, six inches!

JORDAN
I'm lookin', I'm lookin'!

Finally they break into a clearing. Is it big enough?

JORDAN
'Cool?

MCCOOL
(doesn't care)
Smoke it!

Jordan chucks a smoke grenade.


INT. HELO - DAY

PILOT'S POV: Yellow smoke rises from the woods. We swoop
toward it.


EXT. CLEARING IN WOODS - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

Whirling smoke, the helo descends. Jordan's crew breaks
early, trying to get there the instant it touches down.
But before they can...

An FAV crashes through the underbrush, M-60s BARKING in
the helo's direction. The helo bounds away.

Jordan's crew tries to retreat -- but a second FAV cuts
them off.


INT. HELO - DAY

PILOT'S POV: Of the action below, growing smaller and
smaller: Jordan's crew. Surrounded. Laying down
weapons. Captured.


EXT. WOODS - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

JORDAN'S POV: Brush slapping her face.

Crew Six is being hauled through the woods, hands tied
back, boots around their necks, pulled along by...

The captors. We assume they're instructors in camouflage
paint -- but we're moving so fast it's impossible to be
sure.


EXT. P.O.W. CAMP - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

A P.O.W. camp, disturbingly authentic. A dozen trainees
are already here, held in pens of bamboo and barbed-wire.

Flea, McCool, Slutnik, Cortez, Newberry -- all five get
tossed into a pen. Jordan is pulled away.

FLEA
Where are you... HEY! Where are you
taking her?


EXT. BOXES - P.O.W. CAMP - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

Jordan is thrown to the ground. Her eyes go wide when she
sees a row of steel boxes nearby. They're scarcely larger
then coffins.


INT. BOX - P.O.W. CAMP - DAY

Hands push Jordan inside the box. She has to curl up
fetally just to fit.

JORDAN
How long?
(no answer)
Please, HOW LONG?

The LID BANGS closed. A LOCK RATCHETS, FOOTSTEPS RETREAT.
Daylight sheets in through ventilation slats.

When her eyes adjust, Jordan finds markings on the lid and
walls. Scratchings made with a nail. The memoirs of
previous tenants.

JORDAN
"Don't know how much I can take"...
"A little taste of death"... "Save
the nail"...
(then the real kick-
in-the-teeth)
"It's been three days now"...


EXT. P.O.W. CAMP - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - NIGHT

As "hostiles" pull Flea out of the pen.


INT. BOX - P.O.W. CAMP - NIGHT

A BANGING wakes Jordan. Are they coming for her? But
FOOTSTEPS LEAVE. A GROAN from the adjacent box.

JORDAN
Who is it?

WICKWIRE (O.S.)
(a beat)
You know, I had an apartment about
this size once.

JORDAN
Wick. They got your crew, too?

WICKWIRE (O.S.)
Intagliata was out chasing
breakfast. They found his tracks.
Well, shit.

A beat.

JORDAN
You really came back for more? Of
this?

WICKWIRE (O.S.)
When I was sittin' behind a desk in
Washington, it made sense, somehow.
Blame it on my big brother. He was
Spec-Recon. And the stories he used
to tell...

JORDAN
If you got a good one, Wick...

Anything to get her mind off this box. Out of this box.
Now INTERCUT Jordan and Wickwire, lying like fraternal
twins in their wombs of steel:

WICKWIRE
One time he was doing a rekkie of
the Libyan coastline. This is,
like, right before we bombed
Khadaffi into the past tense. So
his crew does a nighttime infil,
maps all the big artillery
placements and stuff, then turns
around to get the hell gone. But
between them and the water are five
Libyan guards, all armed to the
nuts.

JORDAN
They had to kill 'em?

WICKWIRE
Nah, they were dead-ass asleep. But
on every guard's chest,they left one
Marlboro cigarette. Just a little
calling card to say they'd been
there -- and could come back any
time they wanted.

JORDAN
That's a good story.

WICKWIRE
So the shit you gotta go through?
To get from here to there? Brother
said it was worth it. Worth the
training... worth the divorce...
worth anything.

JORDAN
He was married?

WICKWIRE
At first.

JORDAN
You got anybody, Wick?

WICKWIRE
Not me. You?

It hurts to think about it. The Potomac. The gunkhole
harbor. Royce.

WICKWIRE
O'Neil?

JORDAN
How'd you make it last time, Wick?
How'd you get through this part?

WICKWIRE
(a beat)
Last time I didn't.

JORDAN
(jarred)
Let's keep talkin', Wick. Just keep
talkin' to me...


EXT. NEWSSTAND - WASHINGTON D.C. - DAY

Royce stops for a newspaper. As he pays, something else
catches his eye. He picks up...

A "People" magazine. The grainy image of "G.I. Jane"
fills the cover. A photo inset, much clearer, shows a
beaming DeHaven. "BEHIND EVERY GREAT WOMAN..."

ROYCE
(shaking head)
Suitable for framing...


INT. CORRIDOR - N.I.C. - DAY

ROYCE
Got time for a brain-pick?

Reading as he walks, a former CIA spook looks up to find
Royce in lockstep. It surprises him: Not many people
here talk to him -- unless they're in trouble. THE SPOOK
is physically unremarkable except for a face that would be
right at home on Easter Island: This is a man who's seen
most of the world's ills -- and forgotten none.

THE SPOOK
Subject?

ROYCE
O'Neil, Jordan.

THE SPOOK
Thought you two were file-closed.

ROYCE
You knew about us?

THE SPOOK
Sorry. Thought you knew I knew.


INT. SITUATION ROOM - N.I.C. - DAY

Royce and the Spook enter. The vault-like door closes
emphatically. Ensuring their privacy:

ROYCE
Computer -- no transcription, no
com-link, no data-link. In fact...
shut-down sequence 0-Niner-0-8,
mark.

All around, screens go blank, phone lights extinguish.
They sit at the conference table. No Computer. No files.

Just two guys doing headwork.

THE SPOOK
All right. So who stands to gain if
Jordan flames out in a big way?

ROYCE
The E-Ringers? Full integration is
gonna cost the services billions at
the worst possible time -- when
Congress is already swinging the
axe.

THE SPOOK
(agreeing)
Congress cuts, military bleeds. But
Pentagon's a big place. Let's
narrow the sights.

ROYCE
The Navy? They've made it clear
they don't want to pull missiles out
of subs to make room for women's
heads. What's it gonna cost to make
a fleet of Trident's co-ed?

THE SPOOK
Sabotage born of economics?
Wouldn't be a first. But is Hayes
really going to start his watch with
such a public failure?

ROYCE
Possibly. Just to spite DeHaven.

THE SPOOK
Hmm. Let's aim higher.

Royce blinks. "What's higher?"

THE SPOOK
The White House. If Jordan wins,
DeHaven wins in spades. Why? Well,
it's been said that the only man the
President fears -- ain't no man.

ROYCE
The first female President?

THE SPOOK
Don't for a second think she didn't
leak this story. "G.I. Jane" gives
DeHaven a symbol that taps into the
biggest constituency of them all.

ROYCE
Women.

THE SPOOK
If you were the President, wouldn't
that put a little piss in your
shoes?

ROYCE
I don't know. Seems...

THE SPOOK
This ain't about some little soldier
girl sloggin' her way through
commando school. The implications
go way beyond.

ROYCE
Christ, I don't want to see her take
a fall. She thinks I do, but...

THE SPOOK
I take it this file is still open.

ROYCE
(shaping his words)
Even tough I don't talk to her every
day -- I still talk to her every
day. Know what I mean?

THE SPOOK
(nodding)
Okay, so now work it from the other
end. Think about California -- and
how things might be handled there.

ROYCE
I don't...
(scoffing)
What, someone on base? A "mole"?

THE SPOOK
This is what you get for brain-
picking an old CIA spook. but if I
needed to control the outcome of
this test case, that's how I'd do
it. A man-in-place. Makes
everything very controllable.


INT. BOX - P.O.W. CAMP - DAY

JORDAN'S POV: The box opening. Daylight assaulting us,
blowing out our eyes. Disembodied hands pulling us out.


EXT. P.O.W. CAMP - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

Legs hobbled, uniform soiled, Jordan is led past a row of
huts. She looks like she got hit by a train -- and got
back up.

JORDAN'S POV: Vision still blown out. But inside the
pen, we make out 40 trainees now. One guy wrings out a
sock and drinks from it.

Jordan moves past huts. VOLATILE VOICES spill out as
trainees get interrogated.

JORDAN'S POV: Outside one hut, we see Flea. At least we
think it's him: Strapped face-down to a table, sobbing
quietly, he wears a slinky dress and whore's makeup. They
broke him -- and it's an ugly, ugly sight.


INT. INTERROGATION HUT - P.O.W. CAMP - DAY

THE CHIEF
What is your father's name?

Jordan seated. Prowling the hut is her interrogator. Her
tormentor. Her chaperon through Hell.

THE CHIEF
Simple question, lieutenant. No
reason not to answer. What is your
father's name?

JORDAN
"Dad."

THE CHIEF
Any brothers? Sisters?

JORDAN
Dick, Jane, and Spot.

THE CHIEF
Are you hungry? What's your
favorite food? We'll try to get it
for you.

JORDAN
Green Eggs and Ham. You're not
going to get anywhere. You might as
well put me in the cage.

THE CHIEF
You are in the cage, O'Neil. Right
here, right now.

JORDAN
Should I be afraid?

THE CHIEF
Right down to your worthless womb,
and I'll tell you why. This is my
island. My world. And here I can
get away with shit that would get me
arrested anywhere else in the world.
Take another scan of my little joy-
boy outside. If I can do that to a
Navy Seal, what's gonna happen to
you? Huh?

It makes Jordan think -- and yes, it makes her afraid.
Continuing the psychological strip-search:

THE CHIEF
Why didn't you shoot the woman,
O'Neil?

JORDAN
Wasn't deemed a threat.

THE CHIEF
She led us right to you. That's no
threat?

Jordan rubs her head. So long ago. How did the call come
down?

THE CHIEF
Would you have shot if it was a man?

JORDAN
No. Yes. I mean, depends on --

THE CHIEF
The others already told me, O'Neil.
They wanted to shoot, but you
wouldn't let them. Because you went
soft on another women --

JORDAN
That's not right.

THE CHIEF
That's what your crew said. Are
they lying? Or are you?

JORDAN
I think you're the liar.

THE CHIEF
I'm not the one who got five good
men thrown in a bamboo cage. You
wear the bars, you made the call,
and you got your whole crew --

JORDAN
We didn't know we were compromised.
Firing would only've given away our
position.

THE CHIEF
You think we should go easy on
women, O'Neil?

She stares a beat, knowing it's a loaded question.

THE CHIEF
Do you?

JORDAN
No.

THE CHIEF
I'm so glad we agree.

With stunning ferocity, he grabs her by the neck, pushes
her out the door...


EXT. P.O.W. CAMP - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - DAY

... and throws her onto a table.

In the pens, all faces turn to watch. Even instructors
stop what they're doing as...

The Chief pushes Jordan's head down and jams up behind
her.

THE CHIEF
Didn't you know you'd be raped if
you were captured? Didn't you even
think about that?

JORDAN
Sure. Just like your men do.

THE CHIEF
I think we oughtta practice it,
just so you know what to expect.

He flips her over, rips off her belt, starts tearing open
her pants.

JORDAN
Should I practice bleeding, too,
sir? Would that make me a better
soldier?

He covers her mouth -- her whole face -- with one hand.

THE CHIEF
(to the men)
Any of you can stop this! Just give
me the location of one more hide-
site, and it ends right here!

In the pen:

SLUTNIK
(wide-eyed)
Someone's trippin' out here...

The Chief jerks Jordan up, whirls her around like a dead
dance partner, slams her face-first into the pen to give
the guys a good look at what's happening to that pretty
face.

THE CHIEF
Three crews are still on this island
somewhere. Who knows where?

The men trade itchy looks. Some do know.

JORDAN
Don't do it, don't do it...

The Chief throws her down like garbage.

THE CHIEF
Who's gonna tell me? Who's gonna be
chivalrous and stop this abuse?
What, you want to see her get
mauled? Is that it?

The men shift anxiously. Should they talk? Behind the
Chief, Jordan staggers to her feet.

JORDAN
Don't tell him shi --

The Chief whirls, decks her a crescent-kick. Instructors
lurch forward instinctively.

THE CHIEF
(waving them back)
She's fine!
(squatting beside)
When I put you down, O'Neil, take
the hint and stay down.

She licks her bloody teeth -- and considers kicking his
balls into his brainpan. Instead she makes a move to get
up. He grinds her back down with a crowbar forearm.

THE CHIEF
(for her ears only)
I am saving your life, O'Neil. You
may not know it, but I do. You're
an inferior soldier, a bad officer,
and I don't want you learning that
inconvenient truth when you're stuck
in a muddy bomb crater behind enemy
lines and don't know how the fuck to
get out. You get out now, O'Neil.
Seek life elsewhere. And if you
can't do it in front of me, do it
behind my back.

Pinning her down with just his eyes, he rises -- and
starts away.

Behind him, Jordan struggles to rise.

An ANXIOUS MURMUR races through the men: They don't want
to see this. They don't want to see her crucified.

MCCOOL
Down... stay down...

Hearing, the Chief turns back to see...

Jordan wobbling to her feet.

Eye-lock.

JORDAN
Fuck you and the boat you rode in
on. Sir.

TIGHT on the faces of her crewmates -- Slutnik, Cortez,
McCool. In their eyes, a new respect. The Chief see it.
Instructors see it. Everyone does.

THE CHIEF
(to instructors)
We're done here.

Beaten, he walks right out of camp.

Wordless, instructors open the pens, unlock the boxes.
Wickwire rises like a vampire in daylight. But this time
he made it.

A medic tries to help Jordan, but she pushes him away,
walking drunkenly for...

Flea. She begins wiping the makeup from his face.

JORDAN
Make you a deal, Flea. Never tell
me how I look -- and I'll never tell
you.


EXT. PIERS - SAN CLEMENTE ISLAND - SUNSET

The Chief chucks gear onto a transport boat. FOOTSTEPS
approach. He knows it's Pyro.

THE CHIEF
You don't think she'd be raped if
she were captured? You don't think
the threat of rape would be used to
leverage the men?

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
You broke a dozen training rules
back there -- before I lost count.

THE CHIEF
I've had it. Just because they pay
me like a baby-sitter doesn't mean
I'm gonna be one.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
She's a trainee, just like the
others. Why are you coming down so
hard?

THE CHIEF
She's an officer. There's a higher
standard.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
She's a women, and that's why you're
ridin' her bareback.

THE CHIEF
Of course it is. And I'm gonna stay
on her until everyone realizes this
is not some bullshit equal-rights
thing, that real lives are gonna be
lost. Maybe mine, maybe yours.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
I oughtta report you.

THE CHIEF
I think you probably would -- if you
didn't know I was right.


EXT. STREET - WASHINGTON D.C. - DAY

As a limo moves -- heads for the Capitol building.


INT. DEHAVEN'S LIMO - DAY

DeHaven snags a BUZZING PHONE.

DEHAVEN
Yes?

DEHAVEN'S AIDE (V.O.)
(anxious)
Did you hear?

DEHAVEN
She made it through S.E.R.E.
training. Got a call this morning
from --

DEHAVEN'S AIDE (V.O.)
Not that. The White House just
announced that it was sponsoring
legislation that would, in one
stroke, void all remaining elements
of the 1948 Combat Exclusion Laws.

The phone suddenly weights a ton, DeHaven dumps it on the
seat beside her. HOLD on her disbelieving face.

DEHAVEN'S AIDE (V.O.)
You there? Senator?


INT. CORRIDOR - PENTAGON - DAY

Hand-carrying a report, Flag Officer #1 hurries down a
corridor, pushes through a door. HOLD on the door marker:
"Secretary of the Navy."


INT. SECNAV OFFICE - PENTAGON - DAY

HAYES
Without telling us they do this?
With absolutely no lead time?

At his desk, Hayes scans the report with a deepening
frown.

FLAG OFFICER #1
(to Hayes)
Mr. Secretary, if this bill
passes...

FLAG OFFICER #2
Forget our three-year plan. They're
rushing the cadence. We'll be
forced to reorganize the Navy from
top to bottom -- overnight.

HAYES
What the hell is the President
trying to do? Steal DeHaven's
thunder?

FLAG OFFICER #1
I think it's more important, sir, to
decide what we're going to do --
since it's apparent this issue is
not going away quietly.

HAYES
"G.I. Jane." And which one of you
told me she wouldn't last a week?
Huh?

The flags squirm. Shaking his head, Hayes moves to a
window that offers a stunning view of Arlington National
Cemetery.

HAYES
20 years in the Pentagon, I finally
rate an office with a window -- and
it looks out over the world's
largest graveyard. Think it's a
sign?


EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

The bell. It reflects the moon. TILT DOWN to reveal a
new batch of helmets -- the casualties of S.E.R.E. A
graveyard of its own.


EXT. THE EXCHANGE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Jordan exits with purchases. Her face is still bruised
from S.E.R.E. With a minute to kill, she peruses a
bulletin board casually. But a RAISED VOICE leads her
eyes to...

Wickwire. At a phone kiosk, he hangs up emphatically. He
looks flustered when he spots Jordan.

JORDAN
Sorry, didn't mean to --

WICKWIRE
That's okay. Just an ex-girlfriend.
And know I remember why.

JORDAN
First big night of liberty and no
date? You're pathetic, Wickwire.

WICKWIRE
Maybe I'll just head over to McP's
with the others, have a drink or
four. Don't wanna come, do you?

JORDAN
(touching bruises)
I can't go out. Not like this.

WICKWIRE
I think you look beautiful.

JORDAN
Thanks for lying. But you're the
class officer, Wick, and it'd just
be weird if we hook up. Besides...

Catching up, Blondell exits the exchange.

BLONDELL
Sorry. Forgot I needed oregano
and...

She sees Wickwire. An awkward beat for them all.

JORDAN
Do you, uh, know...

WICKWIRE
Sure, sure.

JORDAN
We're going over to her place to
make salad and pasta. Just, you
know, nothing special.

WICKWIRE
Okay. Well... thought I'd ask.

Jordan and Blondell head for the parking lot. HOLD on
Wickwire, looking after them. Thinking it through.


INT. CLASSROOM - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Charts are being passed around the room. Every trainee
takes one, including Jordan.

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
... underwater detonation devices
employ mechanical timers, and as
such, they are subject to variances
due to water temperature. That's
why when clearing mines, we always
use two timers. The charts now
being passed out contain
calculations you must memorize
before...

A MILITARY COP fills the classroom doorway. Frowning,
Johns joins the cop for a private discussion.

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
O'Neil?

JORDAN
Sir?

INSTRUCTOR JOHNS
You're wanted at the C.O.'s.


INT. C.O.'S OUTER OFFICE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Jordan enters. The yeoman's desk is unattended. Noticing
the X.O.'s door open, Jordan peers inside to find...

Blondell. She looks scared out of her mind. Before she
and Jordan can speak, the yeoman materializes.

YEOMAN
This way, lieutenant. They're
expecting you.


INT. C.O.'S OFFICE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

JORDAN
See me, sir?

The C.O. and X.O. are both here.

C.O.
(uncomfortable)
I don't know of any delicate way to
say this, lieutenant, so I won't
try. Claims have been made that you
have engaged in fraternization -- of
the same-sex variety. Specifically,
that you were...
(reading)
"... seen leaving the apartment of
another female officer at such a
time and in such a manner as to
suggest conduct unbecoming."

JORDAN
(a beat,laughing in
relief)
Sir, if someone is suggesting that
I'm a lesbian, they're wrong.

The C.O.'s face remains grim. He isn't relieved.

JORDAN
They're very wrong. And I'd like to
know where you got this information.

On the C.O.'s nod, the X.O. opens an adjoining office.
Wickwire enters. He's stiff as a groom on a wedding cake.

WICKWIRE
I'm sorry, O'Neil. But as class
officer, it's my obligation to
report all violations.

JORDAN
This is insane. You've got no
proof.

X.O.
(from report)
You were seen leaving Ensign
Blondell's apartment at
approximately 0-200, whereupon
physical affections were exchanged
in public.

JORDAN
We hugged.

X.O.
In addition, you have been seen
frequenting the base exchange, the
mess hall, the --

JORDAN
Because the men didn't want me
eating with them. Jesus Christ,
let's get this right.

C.O.
That's enough. Everybody.
(to Wickwire)
Rejoin your class, lieutenant.

WICKWIRE
(only to Jordan)
I wish I didn't have to do this,
Jordan.

C.O.
Dismissed, lieutenant.

Wickwire exits.

JORDAN
Sir, I just want you to know that
this is either a gross mistake --
or someone's vindictive bullshit.
In no way did anything happen
between Ensign Blondell and myself.
We're just friends.

X.O.
So you're saying the charges have no
validity whatsoever?

Jordan opens her mouth to confirm -- and hesitates,
realizing where this might be headed. What the collateral
damage might be.

JORDAN
I'm saying, we're just friends.

C.O.
I find this as distasteful as you,
lieutenant. But if it's on my desk,
it's on my shoulders. There's going
to be an inquiry -- it will not be
quick and it will definitely not be
pretty. You should prepare
yourself.

JORDAN
Sir, please... if there's any way to
do this without dragging everyone
through the mud...

C.O.
I don't see how, O'Neil. Dismissed.

Jordan moves to the door. Again she makes eye-contact
with Blondell. Now we understand why she's so scared:
There's a witch-hunt brewing.

JORDAN
(turning back)
Sir. If tomorrow... I was not under
your command... would the inquiry
still go forward?

C.O.
I'm not sure what --

JORDAN
Would you have the discretion to end
it right then and there?

She's offering her own head on a silver platter -- and the
C.O. actually hesitates before answering.

C.O.
I believe so.


EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

McCool and Flea exit a classroom with other trainees.
They spot Jordan approaching.

MCCOOL
So what'd he want? O'Neil?

She passes them robotically. Flea realizes where she's
going.

FLEA
Oh, no... no, no, no, no...

They lurch after her, grabbing her, stepping in her way.

THE CHIEF
Stand fast!

McCool and Flea jerk to a stop: The Chief has emerged
from the instructor's office. Helpless, they watch as...

Jordan mounts the stairs to the bell... takes up the
baton... and HITS THE BELL like a tyko drummer.

RING ONE: On the pained faces of her crewmates.

RING TWO: On the Chief. Taking no joy in it. Just
accepting it as inevitable.


EXT. THE QUARTERDECK - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

RING THREE: On Wickwire as he walks across the base. His
regrets are obvious.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

EXT. UPRIVER - THE POTOMAC - DAY

The ice floes are gone. The river banks are budding
green. Soon CAMERA FINDS a power boat making its way
upriver. A lone figure sits on the prow.


EXT. POWER BOAT - DAY

It's Jordan. Dressed in civvies, gunnysack between her
legs, she's back in Virginia with nothing more than what
she left with. Around a river bend appears...

The gunkhole harbor. Home.


EXT. GUNKHOLE HARBOR - POTOMAC - DAY

The boat docks. Jordan springs clear, waves a worn-out
thanks, starts up the dock. But now she comes to a stop,
seeing...

Royce. Stepping out of the house.

EXTREMELY WIDE: River shimmering behind them, they meet
on the dock. A charged stand-off: Where do they pick up?
Can they pick up? Then Jordan drops her gunnysack and
steps into his wide-spread arms. Royce wraps her up as if
to never let go.

For the first time in this whole ordeal, Jordan begins
crying, sobbing uncontrollably.

ROYCE
(in her ear)
I want to kill them... I want to
kill the guys who made you cry like
this...


INT. COVERED PORCH - JORDAN'S HOUSE - SUNSET

An hour later. Sharing a quiet moment, Jordan and Royce
cradle tea mugs while sitting on the rear porch that
overlooks the Potomac and a fiery sunset.

JORDAN
All I wanted was an honest chance.
And If I couldn't get it, I couldn't
stay.

ROYCE
And this class officer...
"Wickwire." You think he was just
trying to get even? Striking back
for...

JORDAN
Maybe. Though it didn't seem like
he was getting any satisfaction out
of it. Almost like...
(a beat)
Did I say he was class officer?

ROYCE
Almost like someone put him up to
it. Okay, who?

JORDAN
No shortage of suspects.

ROYCE
The Chief? Or maybe even
Turrentine? Your C.O.?

She looks at him sidelong.

JORDAN
Royce. Tell me you didn't keep a
file on me.


INT. LIVING ROOM - JORDAN'S HOUSE - DAY

CLOSE on multiple files being pulled out of a briefcase.
One contains clippings -- "G.I. Jane" photos, editorials,
political cartoons. Another holds records of Coronado
personnel -- Jordan's crewmates, instructors, the base
brass.

ROYCE
Somebody was yankin' your stings,
Jordan -- maybe from 3,000 miles
away. I wanted to know who. I still
do.

She shakes her head, resisting.

ROYCE
C'mon, Jordan. Do the headwork with
me.

JORDAN
It's done with, Royce. Let it go.

ROYCE
Someone screwed you over like this,
left unanswered charges hanging over
your head, and you're not gonna
fight back?

JORDAN
I'm tired of fighting back. I just
wanted to come home and be safe and
have you here and the river there
and just forget the rest of the
world, okay?

ROYCE
Well, before you crawl off to die,
Jordan, give me five minutes of good
headwork.

Agitated, she walks away. B.G., a PHONE RINGS until the
machine picks up.

ROYCE
(pulling a file)
"John James Urgayle." The Chief.

JORDAN
What about him.

JORDAN
Instructors typically pull three
year assignments. This guy's in and
out in one year -- your year. That
sound right?

JORDAN
Sounds like an amazing coincidence.

ROYCE
Or like maybe he was baby sitting a
problem child for the Navy.

JORDAN
I don't know, I don't care.

ROYCE
Well, pardon me if I do. Now who
else? Who could've leveraged a
class officer like that? C'mon,
Jordan, keep your head in the game.

UNDER DIALOG, we hear some of the INCOMING CALL:

DEHAVEN'S AIDE (V.O.)
... just got word today. The
Senator wants you to know that she's
disturbed by the matter, and she'll
be looking into it carefully to make
sure you were treated fairly. If
you need to reach us, we're here in
Washington, 202-224-3121.

A HANG-UP. Something stirs in Jordan's memory.

JORDAN
"In Washington..."

ROYCE
What?

JORDAN
Wickwire said he was dry-docked in
Washington between stints at
Coronado...

We can see her mind gathering speed. Royce switches files
quickly.

ROYCE
"Wickwire, Thomas Dane"... Second
run at Coronado... and correct, they
had him stashed in the
"Appropriation Liaison Office,"
whatever that is.

JORDAN
You don't crap out of Spec-Recon and
get another shot without
dispensation from someone up in flag
country.
(a revelation)
He's got a Sea Daddy somewhere.

ROYCE
I'd sure like to know who.

JORDAN
Yeah. Me too.


INT. ADMINISTRATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Answering a PHONE:

BLONDELL
Administration, Ensign Blondell.

JORDAN (V.O.)
Don't say my name.

BLONDELL
Who's...
(brightening)
Lieuten --

JORDAN (V.O.)
Or rank. But can you do me a favor
and pull a transfer order?

BLONDELL
Okay, but... You didn't have to do
what you did. Not for me.

JORDAN (V.O.)
(appreciative)
"Wickwire, Thomas Dane." See what
you can find.

CUT TO:

INT. ADMINISTRATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

File in hand, Blondell returns to the phone.

BLONDELL
Got it.

JORDAN (V.O.)
Who signed as his "sponsoring
officer"?

BLONDELL
Uh... don't see it. There's no
signature. But hang on -- there's a
note to "See Addendum." Checking...

She finds a crisp sheet of stationary, out of place among
the smeared government forms.

BLONDELL
Wow...

JORDAN (V.O.)
What'd you find, Kathy?

CLOSE on the stationary. It bears an image of the Capitol
dome.

MATCH CUT TO:

EXT. CAPITOL BLDG. - WASHINGTON D.C. - DAY

The real Capitol dome. A flag is being raised over the
Senate Wing.


EXT. CAPITOL BDLG. - WASHINGTON D.C. - DAY

A car parks at barricades. Jordan and Royce emerge, both
in uniforms.

D.C. COP
Don't even dream about leaving that
vehicle there.

ROYCE
Government car -- tow it if you
want. Just point us to DeHaven's
office first.

Not waiting for directions, Jordan takes the Capitol steps
two at a time. We've seen this look on her face before --
and last time, she nearly knocked the grinder bell into
orbit.


INT. CORRIDOR - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

Jordan and Royce move quickly down a corridor, eyes
hunting, passing CAPITOL GUIDES and their tourists. Soon
they find...

DeHaven's office. A Navy captain exits with paperwork.
Hasty salutes.

ROYCE
Capt'n.

NAVY CAPTAIN
Commander.

The captain moves on. Royce holds in the doorway a beat,
memory nagging him. Again he looks at...

The captain. He has a distinct bald spot.

ROYCE
(to Jordan)
Get started here. I'll catch up.

Picking up where he left off a few weeks ago, Royce
follows Bald Spot around a corner...


INT. PRIVATE STAIRCASE - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

... down a private staircase...


INT. ANOTHER CORRIDOR - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

... and through a door marked "Naval Appropriation Liaison
Office." It's not 30 seconds from DeHaven's door.


INT. FOYER - DEHAVEN'S OFFICE - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

SECRETARY
Your name again?

JORDAN
Lieutenant j.g. O'Neil.

In a side office, DeHaven's aide overhears. He rises
quickly and enters the foyer.

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
Ms. O'Neil. Yes, of course. I'm
Douglas Champeau. Unfortunately,
the Senator is in chamber right now.
How can I help you?

JORDAN
What chamber? Which way is that?

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
I mean, she's on the floor of the
Senate.

JORDAN
Okay, which way?

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
She really can't be disturbed. But
if you care to wait, I'll find you
an office with a phone. It might be
several hours, but --

A TOURIST pokes in.

TOURIST
'Scuse me, but I'm here to pick up
gallery tickets? Are you...

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
See the secretary, please.

Over the aide's shoulder, Jordan watches as...

The tourist claims tickets. HOLD on the bureau near the
secretary's desk where the tickets are stored.


INT. SENATE CHAMBER - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

On the chamber floor, SENATORS mull about, consulting
aides, polling party mates. PAGES place microphones and
fill the ceremonial snuff boxes, readying the room for
session. Among the activity, we find...

DeHaven. Caucusing with another Democrat.

JORDAN (O.S.)
Senator DeHaven...

DeHaven looks behind her. Nobody.

JORDAN
DeHaven...

Now she looks up to behold...

Jordan standing in the gallery. Staring down on DeHaven
as she is, it's hard to read anything into her expression
but open disdain.

Drawn by Jordan's voice, a CAPITOL GUARD hurries down the
gallery steps. Royce runs interference.

JORDAN
We can talk here or we can talk
outside, Senator. You tell me.

On the floor, half the U.S. Senate stops what it's doing
and looks up.

In the gallery, the guard is thrown off-balance by the
naval uniforms: Do Royce and Jordan belong here or not?
Confused, he looks for guidance from...

DeHaven. She notes C-SPAN cameras swinging Jordan's way.
Summoning a page:

DEHAVEN
Cloak room. I'll meet her there.
Just her.


INT. CLOAK ROOM - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

Towering doors swing open. DeHaven appears, face pleasant
but harried.

DEHAVEN
Jordan. I always hoped we'd get
together -- though just now I'm
gearing up for a child-care vote
that --

JORDAN
Lieutenant Thomas Wickwire.

About to hug Jordan, DeHaven stops awkwardly.

JORDAN
You know him.

DEHAVEN
Sounds familiar.

JORDAN
It should. You nominated him for
Spec-Recon just three days after you
nominated me.

DEHAVEN
Jordan. Might we do this over lunch
tomorrow? I do very much want to
talk, but now is scarcely --

JORDAN
Did you set me up? Did you set me
up just to see me fail?

DEHAVEN
Absolutely not.

DeHaven glances back at the doors to the Senate chamber --
the open doors. Walking Jordan a few steps away:

DEHAVEN
Wickwire was there to help. To be
my eyes on the inside, to make sure
you were getting a fair shot. At
least that was the intent.

JORDAN
What changed?

DEHAVEN
Should probably ask him that.

JORDAN
If I have to ask again, Senator,
I'll be asking in front of cameras.

It's a threat DeHaven doesn't appreciate. The Senate
DOORKEEPER appears.

DOORKEEPER
Madam Senator? Your esteemed
colleagues are requesting --

DEHAVEN
Two seconds, Walter.
(answering Jordan)
In 1981, the Supreme Court was
asked to rule on the issue of women
in combat positions. The Court
cited the 1948 Combat Exclusion Laws
as a legal foundation for keeping
women ineligible. That decision
held for all these years -- until
the White House, 10 days ago, moved
to have the Exclusion Laws voided.
To demolish that legal foundation.

JORDAN
So? Isn't the President jumping on
your bandwagon?

DEHAVEN
What he did was light the bandwagon
on fire. Because he knows what I
know -- that American families are
not prepared to put their daughters
in harm's way.

JORDAN
You don't know that.

DEHAVEN
In face, I do: Roper, Harris,
Gallop -- they all come back the
same.

JORDAN
What are you saying? That a women's
life is more valuable than a man's?
That a women's death hurts a family
more?

DEHAVEN
I'm saying it's not going to happen.
Not when the President is set to
turn this into a third-rail issue
should I choose to ever campaign
against him. He will fry me six
ways to Sunday for sending daughters
and young mothers off to war -- and,
quite possibly, for bringing them
back in body bags.

Jordan shakes her head in disbelief. She has met the
enemy -- and she is us.

JORDAN
You were never going to let women
serve in combat. You always had a
safety net. Or thought you did.

DEHAVEN
Jordan. I don't expect you to fully
understand this -- but sometimes
there's more to be gained from the
fight than the victory.

JORDAN
So the rhetoric gets you headlines.
But the reality gets you in trouble.

DEHAVEN
The reality is this: We send far
too many men off to war. I don't
need to compound the problem with
women.
(off Jordan's look)
Can you honestly tell me you wanted
that life? Squat-pissing in some
third-world jungle with --

JORDAN
I wanted the choice. The chance to
prove myself, my skills, my work,
me. That's how it should've been.

DOORKEEPER
Madam Senator, once again I must --

DEHAVEN
Just hold the goddamn clock, Walter.

Not happy about it, the doorkeeper reaches into an alcove,
grabs a broom he keeps around for just these occasions.
He enters the chamber...


INT. SENATE CHAMBER - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

... and moves behind the rostrum. Holding the broom by
the bristles, the doorkeeper stands on tip-toes...

And uses the broom handle to turn back the Senate clock by
three minutes.

Senators GROAN. It's an old trick played by senior
members -- and they all hate it when it happens to them.


INT. CLOAK ROOM - CAPITOL BLDG. - DAY

DEHAVEN
I once promised you a fast ticket,
Jordan, and I always meant to make
good on that. Come work for me. I
can always use a hard-charger on my
team.

JORDAN
You promise Wickwire a fast ticket,
too?

DEHAVEN
I've had no direct communication
with him since this whole thing
began. And that's quite verifiable.

JORDAN
I'm sure it is.

DEHAVEN
You'll think about my offer?

JORDAN
You know, I wonder what the SecNav
would think about it. If I spoke
with him.

DEHAVEN
Well, I spoke with Mr. Hayes this
morning myself -- and told him the
deal was off. No more test cases.
He was only too happy to oblige.
(dangerously low)
Don't play politics with me, little
darlin'. You'd be up way past your
bedtime.

DOORKEEPER
(distraught)
Madam Senator, please...

DEHAVEN
I'll call you in a few days.

She flashes a winning smile and turns away. As the
chamber doors start to close behind her:

JORDAN
So I wonder what the President would
think.

The last image we have of DeHaven is her whirling back,
startled. The DOORS BOOM CLOSED in her face.


EXT. C.O.'S HOUSE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

Through a window, we see the C.O. with a phone pressed to
his ear. He stands at attention even though wearing a
bathrobe. Half-audible through the glass:

C.O.
Yes sir. No, I'm not saying it
would be impossible, sir, just...
Yes sir. No sir. Yes sir. I can
appreciate that, sir. Good night,
sir.


INT. C.O.'S HOUSE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - NIGHT

The C.O. hangs up and looks to Jordan, heretofore unseen.
She waits anxiously.

C.O.
Well, if you had to go over my
head, lieutenant, that's the way to
do it. Christ, nothin' like a 0-200
call from the Commander and Chief to
get the bowels movin'.

JORDAN
Sir? What did he say?

C.O.
Basically -- he asked me if I could
unring a bell.


EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

START on the helmet graveyard. Hands enter FRAME to
reclaim one helmet in particular. TILT UP on Jordan,
back in the grinder, back in Navy greens.

The Spec-Recon class is here. Crewmates gawk like stone
idiots as Jordan takes her old place in the line-up.

C.O.
(to class)
One of you here understands better
than anyone what this is all about.
Someone who has engaged in conduct
unbecoming. Someone who knows, I
would hope, what he must now do.

CLOSE on Wickwire. Feeling the heat. Wondering if they
really know who it is. Now the C.O. parks himself right
in Wickwire's face.

C.O.
And unless that someone takes the
honorable way out in the next 10
seconds -- I will make certain he
faces action under the Uniform Code
of Military Justice.

Wickwire breaks rank and heads for the bell. He slows
when reaching Jordan, considering an apology he knows
would be inadequate.

JORDAN
Just walk away and never stop.

He does. As Wickwire RINGS OUT:

C.O.
It seems we have an opening for
class officer. Any nominations?

Eyes swing to Jordan. Way ahead of them:

C.O.
All those in favor?

A CHORUS OF AYES. Jordan puddles up.

C.O.
Chief Urgayle, turning it back over
to you.

On his way to the front, the Chief stops to check in with
Jordan.

THE CHIEF
Well, I'm trying to figure out if
you're stupid, unlucky, gluttonous
-- or some new alloy of all three.

JORDAN
Good to see you again, too, sir.

THE CHIEF
Okay, O'Neil. So you've impressed
all the others. Now try me.


EXT. CORONADO BRIDGE - DAY

The morning sun is an orange ball balanced on the Coronado
Bridge. In silhouette, pelicans circle, some dive-bombing
into the bay below. Suddenly a HELO HOWLS across the sun,
scattering the birds as it heads off-shore.


INT. HELO - DAY

THE CHIEF
(setting watch)
Four... three... two... one... hack!

Flea, McCool, Slutnik, Cortez, Newberry, Jordan. Inside
the airborne helo, they synchronize their dive watches.

THE CHIEF
Final assignment! Each crew will be
dropped 12 miles out! Between you
and the shore is a network of mines
and underwater obstacles! You will
clear the obstacles, you will tag
the mines with your crew number!
You have until 18-hundred to make
landfall!


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

As the helo swoops down onto the ocean deck.


INT. HELO - DAY

The trainees double-check wet gear and survival vests. On
Jordan's nod, they push an inflatable life boat ("ILB") to
the helo door. It's rolled up into a rubber log.

THE CHIEF
Remember! The one thing you can
count on in any mission is that
anything mechanical will fail! If
you get stuck out here, do not call
me, for you will no longer be in my
class! Try the Coast Guard!

The HELO PILOT slows to five knots. The Chief gives
Jordan the go-ahead nod.

JORDAN
(to her crew)
One-second intervals! Go!


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

The ILB splashes down into the ocean. Jordan's crew helo-
casts in after it.

From the door of the circling helo, the Chief watches
as...

Jordan's crew swims to the ILB, bobbing in the swells.
Flea turns a handle on the CO2 tank meant to inflate the
boat. Nothing happens.

FLEA
C'mon, c'mon...

Cortez tries to help. The handle spins in his grip.

CORTEZ
This tank's not gonna cut it, el-
tee. Handle's stripped.

Jordan looks skyward. 100 feet overhead, the Chief gives
her a parting salute as the helo lifts away.

SLUTNIK
I just wonder how that happened.

JORDAN
Cortez, see if you can dig out the
tools without losing the rest of out
gear. Try a wrench on that thing.


INT. HELO - DAY

The helo turns into the morning sun. PILOT and CO-PILOT
drop visors.

PILOT'S POV: Of dots in the sun. What the hell are try?

SMACK! Something hits the windscreen, splattering red and
brown.

THE CHIEF
What happening?!

PILOT
Fucking pelicans! Hang on!

He starts to bank clear -- but not fast enough.


EXT. HELO - DAY

More birds pepper-shot the helo: One SHREDS through the
main rotor, another through the tail rotor. Another bird
gets sucked right into...

The main turbine.


INT. HELO - DAY

A SHARP BANG... a WICKED SHIMMY... and now they whole helo
loses power.

PILOT
Holy... LET'S GYRATE!

As the pilot wrestles controls, the co-pilot rigs for
auto-gyration. But the bank they started is working
against them: The helo is coming down badly, circling
like a huge steel feather.

Braced, the Chief looks out the side door -- and sees
ocean rushing up at him. Fast.


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

MCCOOL
What the shit is...

Jordan whirls. She's just in time to witness...

The helo hitting the water. In seconds it's gone.

A stunned beat. We never knew the ocean could be this
quiet. When the anesthetic of shock wears off:

SLUTNIK
You don't suppose this is just part
of...

JORDAN
FLEA! KEEP YOUR EYES ON THAT SPOT!
Mark it, mark it! Cortez? What the
hell you waiting for?

Cortez torques his wrench hard: CO2 flows into the ILB,
inflating it. The crew scrambles aboard. Jordan digs
like a dog to find a radio.

JORDAN
Base, this is Crew Leader Six. We
have a downed helo 12 miles west-
south west of base with three
aboard. Repeat, we have a downed
helo with three aboard...

Slutnik yanks a starter cord: Their outboard MOTOR ROARS
to life. The boat does a donut in the water and blasts
away.

CUT TO:

EXT. OCEAN - DAY

The ILB powers over swells. Flea is perched on the bow,
nose to the wind like a hunting dog.

FLEA
CUT IT! CUT IT HERE!

Slutnik motors down.

FLEA
Close as I can get, el-tee!

JORDAN
Flea, 'Cool, Cortez, Newman -- take
your minis, hit the water. Go, GO!

They grab masks and mini-tanks and dive in like dolphins.
Jordan snaps up the radio.

JORDAN
Base, this is Crew Leader Six. What
is your E.T.A. on that rescue helo?
Over.

BASE (V.O.)
Crew Leader, we have a Medevac
rerouting from Long Beach, but no
other helos prepped at this time.
Seafox One and Two are launching
now. Over.

A beat.

JORDAN
Base, don't think you copied me. We
are 12 miles out. Seafox tops out
at 30 knots, which makes it a no-
show for 18 minutes. Over.

BASE (V.O.)
You copied right, Crew Leader.
We're looking for options ourselves.

SLUTNIK
Maybe we should call the Coast
Guard.

JORDAN
Shut your hole, Slutnik.

CUT TO:

EXT. OCEAN - DAY

McCool surfaces.

MCCOOL
Visibility drops dead at 40 feet.
If they're deeper than that...

The others surface and swim in.

CORTEZ
Nobody's comin' outta that crash,
el-tee. Nobody.

A grim beat -- and then A CRACKLE on the radio. With a
voice seemingly from the far side of the moon:

THE CHIEF (V.O.)
Base, this is Basher One. I've got
a small problem here. Do you copy?

Jaws drop.

JORDAN
(into radio)
Basher One, this is O'Neil. We are
barely reading you. What is your
situation?


EXT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

50 feet down, the helo lies canted on a reef shelf.


INT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

Wedged into a tortured maze of hydraulics and equipment,
we find the Chief, operating out of an air-pocket near the
windscreen. The pilot is dead, impaled on his cyclic
stick, head submerged. The co-pilot is still alive,
barely. The Chief struggles to keep the man's head up as
he keys a survival radio.

THE CHIEF
Got one other heartbeat here, looks
touch and go. I've got a
questionable leg.


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

THE CHIEF (V.O.)
Managed to activate the ELB. If you
just radio base and let them know,
they'll fix on that. Oh, and make
sure they send a helo with a winch
-- door's blocked by a reef. Over.

JORDAN
Chief, sir -- rescue team won't be
here for 15 minutes. What's your
air situation? Over.

THE CHIEF (V.O.)
Say again? How many micks?

JORDAN
15, sir.


INT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

The Chief sizes up his air pocket.

THE CHIEF
(into radio)
That... may not be adequate.


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

FLEA
If we could just fix on him...

MCCOOL
Beacon's a no-go for us.

JORDAN
(into radio)
Chief -- did I see a flare box
aboard? And can you get at it?
Over.


EXT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

The Chief props up the co-pilot's head. Gulps air. Ducks
underwater to grope through wreckage. Only now do we see
that "questionable leg" he was talking about: It's
snapped at mid-calf, blood rivering out.


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

THE CHIEF (V.O.)
Got it.

JORDAN
(into radio)
Show us where you are, Chief.


EXT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

Again the Chief goes below water. He finds a small breach
in the fuselage... sticks the flare launcher through...
and pulls the trigger.

With a MAGNESIUM FLASH, the flare launches...


EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

... streaks toward the surface...


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

... and arcs into daylight 50 yards behind the ILB.

FLEA
Six o'clock! Marking, marking!

JORDAN
Spotted you, Chief. Pri One is to
slip you some air, so we're coming
down with a tank -- just something
until the A-team shows. Over.

An ominous beat.

JORDAN
Chief?

CHIEF (V.O.)
O'Neil... there's no air in your
main tanks.

MCCOOL
What?

They scramble to check their main dive tanks. Even
through the gauges show full, they're dead empty. All of
them.


INT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

THE CHIEF
(into radio)
This mission wasn't about tagging
mines. It was to see how you coped
with mechanical failures. Pretty
fuckin' ironic, huh?

He laughs. It's the bleakest laugh imaginable.


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

SLUTNIK
He's circlin' the drain, el-tee.

Jordan surveys the equipment they do have aboard -- the
stuff she can count on. Mental turbos kicking in:

JORDAN
So we got two full mini-tanks, three
minutes each. 'Cool? How much air
in yours?

MCCOOL
Maybe half. Not even.

JORDAN
Grab an oar, find a way to weight it
down, we're gonna need it. Cortez,
help him. Flea? You take one of the
two full minis -- and just follow my
lead.

CORTEZ
What, we're gonna pry 'em out with
paddles?

MCCOOL
(grabbing her)
O'Neil. Our air's gonna crap out as
soon as we get down there. You know
that, don't you?

JORDAN
So I guess we get one shot at it.


INT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

Swimming in his own blood, the Chief starts to fade away,
losing consciousness. But then, through the cockpit
windscreen...

A hazy orb of light above him. The orb grows and grows
until it resolves into a flare carried by his would-be
savior. Jordan.

THE CHIEF
Why'd it have to be her...


EXT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

Reaching the downed Helo, McCool and Cortez wedge their
oars under the fuselage and leverage hard until...

An opening appears.

Jordan and Flea swim into the breach...


INT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

... and surface inside the wreckage.

JORDAN
Chief, sir... still with me?

CHIEF
(unbuckling co-pilot)
Take him first. Once he's clear,
come back with --

JORDAN
Sir, let me suggest you stop giving
orders and start doing exactly what
I say, because that's the only way
we're all getting out of here. Now
how's your vest check out? Still
good?


EXT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

McCool's air craps out. He abandons his oar and swims for
the surface. That leaves only...

Cortez, struggling mightily to keep the escape route open.
He knows his mini-tank is running on empty -- and it
scares the bejeezus out of him.


INT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

JORDAN
Flea, take the pilot up slow, feed
him air. Chief, sir, you and I are
gonna take the express elevator
outta here. Remember to let your
air out. Ready?


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

Twin transports -- Seafox One and Two -- pound across the
water. Instructors sweep binoculars, trying to spot...

The ILB. Newberry POPS A FLARE skyward as Slutnik
DOWNLOADS INFO over the radio.


EXT. CRASHED HELO - UNDERWATER - DAY

Cortez's air goes dead. He gives it three more seconds,
eyes riveted on the underside of the helo, knowing they
have to come out... right... fucking... absolutely...

NOW: Jordan appears with the Chief. Flea is at their
heels with the co-pilot.

Cortez drops his oar as if it were radioactive and swims
for the sky.

The HELO BOOMS back down onto the reef.

Jordan yanks the cord on the Chief's vest. It inflates
instantly. One arm raised, Jordan streaks for the
surface...


EXT. OCEAN - DAY

... and "Supermans" into daylight with the Chief. They
covered 50 feet in four seconds.

Doing a 360, Jordan spots...

Seafox One coming their way.

Jordan waves like a shipwreck victim.

Not slowing, Seafox lowers a recovery rig into place:
They're wasting no time on the pick-up.

Remembering the last time she tried this, Jordan gets a
death-grip on the Chief's vest.

THE CHIEF
(growling)
O'Neil...

JORDAN
Shut up, sir. I'm concentrating.

The recovery loop comes at her like a big brass ring.

SEAFOX THUNDERS past. Jordan plunges her free arm through
the loop...

And suddenly they're gone, whisked away by the boat.

Throwing a rooster tail a mile long, Seafox pivots on the
water and heads back to base.

MCCOOL
Hoooooo-yah!

NEWBERRY
Go, go, go, go!

SLUTNIK
Uh-huh! That's right! Just like we
always practice it!

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. GUARD HOUSE - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Limousine leading, a parade of vehicles reaches the base
entrance. A man exits the limo to expedite matters with
the BASE GUARD.

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
Senator DeHaven is here for the
graduation ceremonies.

BASE GUARD
What are all these other vehicles?

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
Just a small press corps. Routine.

BASE GUARD
And that pickup truck at the end?

DEHAVEN'S AIDE
That? That would be the all-woman
America's Cup team.


EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

C.O.
(into microphone)
Special Reconnaissance Class 118,
you may now stand down.

All buffed and polished and wearing their dress whites,
the former trainees erupt with ONE GREAT HOO-YAH. What
began as a class of 100 now ends with just 40.

Sitting among the families and friends we find Royce,
smiling through his fears. Not far away sits Blondell.
No one claps louder.

Jordan trades high-fives and fierce hugs with crewmates.
Pyro finally manages to take her aside.

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Lieutenant? I was asked to give you
this.

It's a small case. Jordan opens it to find a medal of
bronze and blue enamel.

JORDAN
The Navy Cross...

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
I believe he earned it for saving a
man's life in Saudi Arabia. He
wanted you to have it. He was very
clear on that point.

JORDAN
I was looking for him earlier,
but...

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
The Chief was granted early
retirement as of 17-hundred
yesterday. By 18-hundred he was
gone. Out of the Navy.

JORDAN
(knowing better)
Just a coincidence?

INSTRUCTOR PYRO
Maybe it's not my place to speculate
on his private thoughts. But I
think the Chief knew that his way --
his world -- had come and gone.

Jordan nods, understanding.

CUT TO:

EXT. GRINDER - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

DeHaven. She's holding a press conference, trying to turn
piss into wine -- and doing a pretty good job:

DEHAVEN
... of course, we always prefer
peace to war. But if we're going to
war, give women a piece. Give them
the choice to defend their country.
And if the President doesn't like
that idea -- if he wants to continue
to deny women their equal rights --
then I'll be happy to step out back
with him any time, anywhere...

Jordan approaches. Spotting her, the PRESS PLEADS for a
photo-op with both women.

DEHAVEN
Jordan? Jordan, dear...

Letting silence be the ultimate expression of scorn,
Jordan walks right past DeHaven...

And joins Royce. Together they turn and leave.

C.O.
Senator, perhaps this would be a
good time for that lunch. Will the
America's Cup team be joining us?


EXT. BEACH - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

Jordan and Royce walk hand in hand, strolling the same
beach she trained on.

JORDAN
So here we are again. Staring three
years of operational duty in the
face.

ROYCE
Look. It's not like you'd be
completely out of reach. And maybe
we could call in a few favors, get
you stationed at Norfolk instead of
Coronado. There are ways of dealing
with these things -- I mean, if
people are so inclined.

JORDAN
(warily)
Which is guy-speak for...

ROYCE
"Yes, Jordan -- I'll wait for you no
matter how long."

Finally, the right answer.


EXT. AIR STATION - CORONADO NAVAL BASE - DAY

START TIGHT on Jordan's face. Even beneath the camouflage
paint, we can see her exhilaration. PULL BACK to find her
in a line of commandos boarding an IDLING C-130: She's
embarking on her first mission. KEEP PULLING BACK until
we've lost her completely -- until she's just one soldier
among many, indistinguishable from the rest.

FADE OUT.

THE END

 

[Chicklet]

G.I. Jane? Isn't that demi moore?

 

[sirhugs]

G.I. Jane? Isn't that demi moore?

indeed
being baldly beautiful