The story in the Wheel of Time is very chaste. But the world has such a horny aesthetic. There's constant references to switching (spanking) there's mind control collars, there's even a people who force their prisoners to strip naked and perform a year of service.Oh my, lots of fuel for a BDSM story. So I've written one featuring a femdom relationship between an Aes Sedai and her warder.
Anyway, the story is still a draft and I will do a lot more editing and improving before posting. I just wanted to know if there's anyone willing to read the draft and let me know if it works? I'm not really after a full edit or spell check or anything. I just want someone, preferably a WOT fan to have a quick read and let me know if it's on the right track?
Thanks in advance V.R.R.
Anyway, the story is still a draft and I will do a lot more editing and improving before posting. I just wanted to know if there's anyone willing to read the draft and let me know if it works? I'm not really after a full edit or spell check or anything. I just want someone, preferably a WOT fan to have a quick read and let me know if it's on the right track?
Thanks in advance V.R.R.
