It's short (want general opinion more than critique)

Hello, I tried to send you a PM but you have private messages disabled.

The main reason you probably have not received any response is that the rules for this part of the forum don’t allow you to post more than a few paragraphs of a story. You’re supposed to provide a link if you’re looking for a review.

The rules below can be found in a stickies thread in the top of this section labeled “Authors, please read:”



2) The sample size of your story/snippet should not exceed three paragraphs or 100 words, whichever is convenient to the OP. Please note the following things while posting a thread requesting a feedback for your story/snippet:

-DO NOT post the entire story/story idea on the thread.
 
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