It's Legal on Other Planets! Ch. 2 -- Anyone willing/able to give it a read?

[bashfullyshameless]

Hi,

I've just finished the rough draft for chapter 2 of "It's Legal on Other Planets!" I haven't worked with any literotica editors before. I'm just edgy enough about this story that I'd really like to have someone else look at it before I submit it. My usual go-to people for this are rather busy for the next couple days.

I'd prefer it be looked at by someone who has already read chapter 1 (just so they're familiar with the story so far), which runs just over 3 "lit" pages. Chapter 2 is 10,440 words.

Aaaaand naturally I'm antsy to submit it.

Takers?

(Cross-posted to the Editor's forum, where this admittedly probably belongs...)

 

[TE999]

I'm not an 'official' editor, but I have done some editing for some of the folks here. I'll give it the once-over if you like.

I haven't read Chapter One, but a link to it will solve that problem. The title intrigues me since I write Sci-Fi myself.

My e-mail addy's in my profile or I can PM you.

 

[The_Fool]

I'll read it. I've read all of your other stuff.