AWhoopsieDaisy
Just Call Me Daisy
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I've never asked for an editor before so I have no idea what to expect from wait times or even responses.
Am I doing something wrong?
Am I doing something wrong?
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I have a manuscript. I'm just looking for someone to read over it. I have zero interest in cowriters. I even said in the title, looking for a beta reader.You weren't really asking for an editor. You were asking for a cowriter. Editors usually aren't engaged until the story is drafted (and wordage is provided), and they don't bail the author out on creative content.
An editor isn't a beta reader. You didn't say you had a completed manuscript. You indicated it isn't finished and you are just seven thousand words into it. You asked why you hadn't gotten a response on the editorial board. Neither editing nor what you asked for are big business here on Literotica. You still might get response. There's a slight chance it will be helpful.I have a manuscript. I'm just looking for someone to read over it. I have zero interest in cowriters. I even said in the title, looking for a beta reader.
I disagree. Whoopsies post was clear enough about the nature of the story - slow gay romance with a first time/discovery theme. A back cover style blurb might help more, but it's enough to know if your interested.You weren't really asking for an editor. You were asking for a cowriter. Editors usually aren't engaged until the story is drafted (and wordage is provided), and they don't bail the author out on creative content. You were asking for someone to invest themselves in your story without giving them any idea what was involved--either in story content, in the technical needs, or in the size of the project. If you get response on the basis of what you asked for and the information you gave, you're most likely to be latching onto someone without a clue on what to do with what you have so far.
The post was changed after my post on not enough content information given. Enough of this, though. The question was asked and I responded with my first thought of "this probably won't get a result" from the first time I read the originally worded post. I won't comment further.I disagree. Whoopsies post was clear enough about the nature of the story - slow gay romance with a first time/discovery theme. A back cover style blurb might help more, but it's enough to know if your interested.
Yeah that's exactly what I'm looking for. A lot of the things I'm worried about could warrant a total rewrite if it's not working. The longer I go without a second set of eyes the more work I potentially have to redo from scratch.some to read through the story and give first impressions of what has already been done. The reader will presumably end up saying things like 'Why did Bob do that? It doesn't seen in character' etc.
I'm gonna assume you meant the scifi/fantasy one. My first two stories on here are weird and kinda cringe because I wrote them both long before I even joined Literotica.Anyway, not your request, but a quick scanning of that one imaginary story made me wonder if I would be the right reader for you. I wasn't sure.
RubenR wrote pretty much exactly what I had been thinking about this thread.I checked out the post, and didn't get what you were asking for. Then, I checked your story list and read part of your ... (I thought you had a story in the Gay Male category?)
Anyway, not your request, but a quick scanning of that one imaginary story made me wonder if I would be the right reader for you. I wasn't sure.
I find it useful when people asking for editors / beta-readers provide information about the story, about the content, about possible issues, etc. etc. For example, it would be silly for me to comment on the content of an incest-stroker, as it so much doesn't appeal to me; I'm not the audience, and I don't have the experience to deal with it. Don't ask me to check on spelling and grammar, or on verbality or sentence construction. Being a non-native English speaker with possibly some other issues, that's not my strength.
About gay male; I wouldn't be the right person to ask about technical details or about the appeal of hardcore male-to-male-sex scenes. But, if the writer wants feedback on storyline and consistency, I might be of help. I don't mind getting out of my comfort zone, but I do have my limits.
With the right info provided, it's easier to check if a story appeals to an editor/beta-reader, and if he/she/... is willing to invest time in it. To be honest, your request, and in particular the title, was okayish; good enough to catch my eye.
Feel free to send me a pm if you still haven't gotten any offers. I may be far from the best editor / beta-reader on this site, but I'm confident enough that it's better than nothing. 7k words shouldn't be a problem.
ps. I would recommend to add a link to your storylist in the actual request post, to give editors / beta-readers an easier option to check out your other work. When reading on my mobile phone, I can't see the signature line that normally holds such a link.
Not on the post itself but TheRedChamber gave the draft a read and gave me notes on pretty much everything I was concerned about in one go.Have you gotten any positive replies yet?
Hey man that's perfect, I'm really good with English, Im totally down to swap stories for edits.I do also have gigantic problems with finding editors for myself because some people don't want to work with non-native speakers, it's too much of a workload.