Interested in Writing a Long Lost in Space Mother/Son story with all the problems and dilemmas it would cause

[SS100]

At the moment I'm interested in writing a Lost In Space Story Like the following:

1. https://web.archive.org/web/2018072...rcold/28787/Adrift/76122/Chapter-1/Purgatory2.
2. https://www.literotica.com/s/lost-in-space-with-mom

However I was interested in thinking about how to do it. I was wanting the story to go on for about 15,000 words or more. I plan to make it a standalone story but if there's some good reception I could make it more than one chapter.

The thing though is that I want to make it a ,preferably hard, science fiction story with some push and pull as to why to how things are between the mother and son whilst they are in space. Overall they should be in space for together for a year, maybe a decade or maybe the rest of their lives. I'm not sure where I want to go with this story but I am interested in ideas on how it can go.

Or what I should do.

Here's my parameters:

1. Only Mother and Son (no one else)
2. The story is long i.e. more than 15,000 words
3. The will be like this for a long period of time i.e. at least a year
4. Some conflict or push and pull

So I got a few questions and points of discussions:

1. Should I make this a hard or a soft sci fi story?
2. Should the mother and son eventually be rescued?
3. How would I show push and pull here or tension between the two?
4. Ideas on external factors that cause tension?
5. How big should their "lifeboat space ship" be?

 

[AlinaX]

1. Should I make this a hard or a soft sci fi story?
2. Should the mother and son eventually be rescued?
3. How would I show push and pull here or tension between the two?
4. Ideas on external factors that cause tension?
5. How big should their "lifeboat space ship" be?

Mother is an exobiologist. Studying planets is her joy, and she's been away from home for much of Son's life. He used to talking to her via video messages with long delays, rarely getting to actually see her in person. He's been living on a small space station all his life with Father, so has no experience of open spaces - other than Space itself, which is different - and not much experience indeed with people.

At 18 years old, he gets to join Mother on an expedition. Which is nice, but actually he's got a crush on the young Ensign, who likes him okay but keeps her distance. In the privacy of his cabin, he gets the ship's holographic entertainment system to create a virtual porn companion in the shape of the Ensign. This is fun but he feels guilty about it and is very awkward around the Ensign afterwards.

Disaster strikes... An attack, or a collision. It's unclear. Son and Mother make it to a lifepod and eject. A shared space without privacy. Their attempts at communication fail. No one can hear them. Maybe the equipment is damaged. It's unclear. There's enough power for a few microhops, enough to get to a nearby planetary system, enough to land on a planet with breathable atmosphere and, amazingly, a biosphere. Mother is delighted.

The lifepod's computer is glitching. The AI keeps taking the form of the naked Ensign. Son is humiliated. Mother is embarrassed. But Son is horny too. While Mother is outside exploring, Son is reluctant to go out, and he can't resist wanking off to the virtual Ensign. Mother pretends not to know this, gives him privacy, but she's lonely. There's no one else for her to share her findings with. She has her own moments of solitary pleasure too, outside by herself...

But fingers aren't ever enough for her. She needs a hard cock. She always has. And it's frustrating to have one so close and not be allowed to use it. He looks so much like his father too. Days pass. Weeks. Hope of rescue is dwindling. They may be alone for ever. Why not embrace the forbidden?

 

[SS100]

Mother is an exobiologist. Studying planets is her joy, and she's been away from home for much of Son's life. He used to talking to her via video messages with long delays, rarely getting to actually see her in person. He's been living on a small space station all his life with Father, so has no experience of open spaces - other than Space itself, which is different - and not much experience indeed with people.

At 18 years old, he gets to join Mother on an expedition. Which is nice, but actually he's got a crush on the young Ensign, who likes him okay but keeps her distance. In the privacy of his cabin, he gets the ship's holographic entertainment system to create a virtual porn companion in the shape of the Ensign. This is fun but he feels guilty about it and is very awkward around the Ensign afterwards.

Disaster strikes... An attack, or a collision. It's unclear. Son and Mother make it to a lifepod and eject. A shared space without privacy. Their attempts at communication fail. No one can hear them. Maybe the equipment is damaged. It's unclear. There's enough power for a few microhops, enough to get to a nearby planetary system, enough to land on a planet with breathable atmosphere and, amazingly, a biosphere. Mother is delighted.

The lifepod's computer is glitching. The AI keeps taking the form of the naked Ensign. Son is humiliated. Mother is embarrassed. But Son is horny too. While Mother is outside exploring, Son is reluctant to go out, and he can't resist wanking off to the virtual Ensign. Mother pretends not to know this, gives him privacy, but she's lonely. There's no one else for her to share her findings with. She has her own moments of solitary pleasure too, outside by herself...

But fingers aren't ever enough for her. She needs a hard cock. She always has. And it's frustrating to have one so close and not be allowed to use it. He looks so much like his father too. Days pass. Weeks. Hope of rescue is dwindling. They may be alone for ever. Why not embrace the forbidden?

Hmm. If I make it small spaceship like this: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/9a/c5/43/9ac543e0301b3b1eab931c359ad8e4fc.png

Do you think it would work? And if so what would be some good ideas to show it? Should I go fully luxurious as well? A real decadent feel then?

Maybe I can use these as a guide:

1. https://imgur.com/a/7HUE3c4

2. https://imgur.com/cvZCXpQ

3. https://imgur.com/a/7ZJXR4u

4. https://imgur.com/a/fifAm

5. https://imgur.com/a/x4GJPtf

6. https://imgur.com/gallery/QU4D6rU

I mean I think I like the idea of a mother and son in a soft sci fi setting being stuck together for long periods of time now.

 

[AlinaX]

Lol. Lots of fun research for you to do.

Maybe Mother is severely injured and Son gets the power to rebuild her body the way he likes, and goes a little wild...

 

[SS100]

Lol. Lots of fun research for you to do.

Maybe Mother is severely injured and Son gets the power to rebuild her body the way he likes, and goes a little wild...

I think I will make my maximum FTL speed to be 20 times the speed of light. That way trips between the various stars happen or take at least a month. Plenty of time to get it one. Still ideas on how to make a "Soft" science fiction lost in space story?

 

[JoRay]

A very short mother and son "Lost in Space" story.

Mom: "That's the third time we have passed that asteroid."

Son (piloting small spacecraft): "I don't think it was the same one."

Mom: “It was.”

Son: “Okay…”

Mom: "Why didn't you ask for directions?"

Son: "Where?"

Mom: "Back on Pluto."

Son: "Those guys were Martians.”

Mom: "So?"

Son: "They were probably lost too."

Mom: "God, you are just like your father.”

Son: “How is that?”

Mom: “He never asks for directions either.”

Son: “Smart man.”

Mom: “That isn’t necessarily true, and it’s beside the point.”

Son: “So you don’t think dad is smart.”

Mom: “I think he makes the most of what he has to offer.”

Son: “What is that?”

Mom: (pause)

Son: “C’mon, you married him for a reason.”

Mom: “If you must know he has a big dick.”

Son: “Oh…”

Mom: “Sorry, I didn’t mean to–”

Son: “No, it’s okay.”

Mom: “Is that Venus?”

Son: “I don’t think so, we’d see the Sun if it were Venus.”

Mom: “Yeah, right.”

Son: “So how big is big?”

Mom: “That’s personal.”

Son: “You broached the subject.”

Mom: “Yeah, but—”

Son: “Like twelve inches, eleven?”

Mom: “Nobody is that big.”

Son: “Well not quite eleven, but over ten.”

Mom: “Really?”

Son: “Yeah.”

Mom: “Pull over at that asteroid and show me.”

Son: “What?”

Mom: “I’ll show you something that your dad really loves.”

 

[SS100]

A very short mother and son "Lost in Space" story.

Mom: "That's the third time we have passed that asteroid."

Son (piloting small spacecraft): "I don't think it was the same one."

Mom: “It was.”

Son: “Okay…”

Mom: "Why didn't you ask for directions?"

Son: "Where?"

Mom: "Back on Pluto."

Son: "Those guys were Martians.”

Mom: "So?"

Son: "They were probably lost too."

Mom: "God, you are just like your father.”

Son: “How is that?”

Mom: “He never asks for directions either.”

Son: “Smart man.”

Mom: “That isn’t necessarily true, and it’s beside the point.”

Son: “So you don’t think dad is smart.”

Mom: “I think he makes the most of what he has to offer.”

Son: “What is that?”

Mom: (pause)

Son: “C’mon, you married him for a reason.”

Mom: “If you must know he has a big dick.”

Son: “Oh…”

Mom: “Sorry, I didn’t mean to–”

Son: “No, it’s okay.”

Mom: “Is that Venus?”

Son: “I don’t think so, we’d see the Sun if it were Venus.”

Mom: “Yeah, right.”

Son: “So how big is big?”

Mom: “That’s personal.”

Son: “You broached the subject.”

Mom: “Yeah, but—”

Son: “Like twelve inches, eleven?”

Mom: “Nobody is that big.”

Son: “Well not quite eleven, but over ten.”

Mom: “Really?”

Son: “Yeah.”

Mom: “Pull over at that asteroid and show me.”

Son: “What?”

Mom: “I’ll show you something that your dad really loves.”

Hmm. If this does happen like this how would you show the luxury of the space ship as the mom and son fuck in it? Or show the sense of isolation where they're together and have all their needs met but no one else to talk to?

They can get communications but can't send any out?

 

[AlinaX]

The hyperdrive develops a fault. They have no FTL comms, and any message they send will take years. Otherwise the ship works, but they will be all alone together for years, perhaps decades.

 

[JoRay]

Mom, a well regarded author of incest fiction online, leaves a space station located near the planet Buy-Mor continuing her mission to find the perfect present for her daughter who is about to graduate high school. At the same time her eldest, a son, is unbeknownst to her, separately enroute to Buy-Mor to look for a gift for his sister.

Suddenly that area of the galaxy is enveloped by a powerful energy wave that damages several spaceships, and strands mother and son in the Delta Quadrant, 70,000 light-years from Earth. It was not an accident, the wave was caused by the detonation of the "Unobomb," a device created by a fringe group bent on sending authors of erotic stories they dislike far outside GWW (galaxywideweb) coverage.

They consider their situation. It's a good thing Junior was an Asteroid Scout; he is able to determine their actual position and plot a course back home-- even though it will take over a year. By combining the fuel cells in both spaceships they can probably make it back to earth, so junior parts out his spaceship for spare parts.

They can certainly make it back to a place close enough that they can communicate with earth, but that will take months. The two take turns piloting mom's eight seat "MiniVanAllen BLT--" the one she had been planning on trading in on a "GeminiXIII" sports rocket. Well at least it has a big bench seat they can take turns sleeping on.

It's a boring trip. Once you've seen one debris field or Crab Nebula the next one just isn't so exciting. And those emergency food rations while compact are uninspired. Mom dictates her unfinished submission to Laurel8, and Junior helps by editing and beta reading. But once she is done with her story, she needs a new idea for the next one.

"What about an incest story about a mother and son trapped together on a long space voyage," Junior suggests.

"Hmm, what would they do?"

"Eventually everything, but it should start out slow, and then build up over time.

"Really," mom asks, "how much time?"

"Well. by my calculations, eight months and three days."

 

[Whispor]

But fingers aren't ever enough for her. She needs a hard cock. She always has. And it's frustrating to have one so close and not be allowed to use it. He looks so much like his father too. Days pass. Weeks. Hope of rescue is dwindling. They may be alone for ever. Why not embrace the forbidden?

This... In dealing with the feelings about her own sexual needs, she begins to rationalize a physical relationship with him regarding all of the things that he will miss. He'll never have sex otherwise, and she knows even as a xenobiologist that all creatures - even her own son - has needs that must be met. There's no reason not to since they're away from the pressures of societal norms regarding incest, etc.

 

[SS100]

This... In dealing with the feelings about her own sexual needs, she begins to rationalize a physical relationship with him regarding all of the things that he will miss. He'll never have sex otherwise, and she knows even as a xenobiologist that all creatures - even her own son - has needs that must be met. There's no reason not to since they're away from the pressures of societal norms regarding incest, etc.

The hyperdrive develops a fault. They have no FTL comms, and any message they send will take years. Otherwise the ship works, but they will be all alone together for years, perhaps decades.

Mom, a well regarded author of incest fiction online, leaves a space station located near the planet Buy-Mor continuing her mission to find the perfect present for her daughter who is about to graduate high school. At the same time her eldest, a son, is unbeknownst to her, separately enroute to Buy-Mor to look for a gift for his sister.

Suddenly that area of the galaxy is enveloped by a powerful energy wave that damages several spaceships, and strands mother and son in the Delta Quadrant, 70,000 light-years from Earth. It was not an accident, the wave was caused by the detonation of the "Unobomb," a device created by a fringe group bent on sending authors of erotic stories they dislike far outside GWW (galaxywideweb) coverage.

They consider their situation. It's a good thing Junior was an Asteroid Scout; he is able to determine their actual position and plot a course back home-- even though it will take over a year. By combining the fuel cells in both spaceships they can probably make it back to earth, so junior parts out his spaceship for spare parts.

They can certainly make it back to a place close enough that they can communicate with earth, but that will take months. The two take turns piloting mom's eight seat "MiniVanAllen BLT--" the one she had been planning on trading in on a "GeminiXIII" sports rocket. Well at least it has a big bench seat they can take turns sleeping on.

It's a boring trip. Once you've seen one debris field or Crab Nebula the next one just isn't so exciting. And those emergency food rations while compact are uninspired. Mom dictates her unfinished submission to Laurel8, and Junior helps by editing and beta reading. But once she is done with her story, she needs a new idea for the next one.

"What about an incest story about a mother and son trapped together on a long space voyage," Junior suggests.

"Hmm, what would they do?"

"Eventually everything, but it should start out slow, and then build up over time.

"Really," mom asks, "how much time?"

"Well. by my calculations, eight months and three days."

I'm thinking of making this ship a bit more luxurious since it is in the far future with ftp.

So very comfortable life pod or ship.

But I was wondering. How about the mother baby trapping her son when they're alone?

How would you write his shock and horror at first? And then his anger?

Follower by his submission to her seduction and then acceptance?

 

[JoRay]

You seem to focus on is how the set-dressing looks...stuff that we aren't going to concern ourselves with ...

Yes, yes, I know that there is an orgy going on. But shouldn't the vase be a blood orange or at least a red tone rather than a blue tone. After all, red is impetuous passion while blue is...

 

[SS100]

Other than isolation (chapter 1), an asteroid (chapter 2) and maybe pirates (chapter 3) what other ideas or external conflicts or problems can occur in this story?

 

[SS100]

Do you think it would be good to have the son be the one starting the relationship or the mother? And what are some semi-dark but decent motivations?

 

[SS100]

Perhaps actually have a fight and deal with being incestous? Or going back to society as a whole?

 

[SS100]

What issues and fights do you think would arise? And how would I show this relationship is toxic?