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DallasRP

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Hiya,

I've been browsing through the "Poll: what is your favorite incest?" thread and the Incest/Taboo section and I'm wondering; Where is all the innocent incest? I'm interested in reading some erotica stories where one, or both parties aren't total sluts who just jump at the first chance. I want some tension built up, damnit! I want that innocence that makes the taboo aspect that much more, well, taboo! :D

So, can anyone recommend some mother/son or daughter/brother stories that actually have some innocence to them?

And if there aren't any, this would be an interesting angle to tackle(I think so, anyways :D).
 
Dallas you pervert. :p

Not that I am any less perverted of course. Anyway in the Kristen Archives there is two such stories, done by the same person. Broken in by Uncle and Broken in by Brother. They are both rather exactly what you are looking for, though both times she ends up pregnant.

There may be more in the archive, I haven't really looked to closely, and I am sure some even more perverted person will come along and tell you where to find hundreds more. :eek:

Anyway, just to maybe get more people thinking of a story like this, what exactly are you looking for in innocent?
 
Define "innocent"

Though my guess is your looking for something where they take a little more than 3 paragraphs to get into?
 
emap said:
Dallas you pervert. :p

Not that I am any less perverted of course.

Anyway, just to maybe get more people thinking of a story like this, what exactly are you looking for in innocent?
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*Smiles and bows slightly* Hello Emap. Nice to meet a fellow pervert. ;)

ExcelExcel said:
Define "innocent"

Though my guess is your looking for something where they take a little more than 3 paragraphs to get into?
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Alright, you're both right. I should have better defined "innocent". First off, I don't mean under age at all. I mean the situation and characters being, at least, a little innocent.

That's what makes, to me, the incest stories different and really gets across the taboo nature. I've read many here where the characters act like total sluts, and as ExcelExcel mentions, within a paragraph their screwing like wild dogs and the story (to me again:)) may as well be about two strangers.

To make the incest story actually interesting, different and taboo, there needs to be that area of the wrong of it explored. Adding the mixture of innocence of either one party, or both, and building up the tension of how this is going to happen I think heightens the stories.

I hope that clears things up. I just haven't read many that fit that discription(Thanks for giving me the links, emap, LA wicker, I'll check them out!) so I figured I'd ask all you lovely folks to post your favorites that fall in line with this or maybe write some. :)
 
A true story; She was, (unwittingly) dating/having sex with a cousin. When they were introduced as such at a family function, they stopped. No harm/no foul in this one.
 
I've got one

"Summer of Discovery" brother/sister
The first chapter is innocent and they are drawn into it, sorta.
But don't read past the 3rd chapter or so because anything goes after that.:)
 
It Doesn't Count, Mouse and The Shy One

DallasRP said:
Hiya,

I've been browsing through the "Poll: what is your favorite incest?" thread and the Incest/Taboo section and I'm wondering; Where is all the innocent incest? I'm interested in reading some erotica stories where one, or both parties aren't total sluts who just jump at the first chance. I want some tension built up, damnit! I want that innocence that makes the taboo aspect that much more, well, taboo! :D

So, can anyone recommend some mother/son or daughter/brother stories that actually have some innocence to them?

And if there aren't any, this would be an interesting angle to tackle(I think so, anyways :D).
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I'd recommend any of my incest stories. To me, there's no point to writing an incest story if they don't have inhibitions, guilt, regrets, fears and more. They also have to act like family, not two people that just met in a bar. I despise stories where two relatives just go at each other like they're newlyweds, or worse yet drunk, horny strangers. Or even worse, porn stars... "Pizza's here" ... "Ooooh, you look tense! Do you want a massage?"

Start with It Doesn't Count, it's perfect for you.

Then try Mouse... it's got Angst trademarked.

When it's published, try "The Shy One" (due out in July or August).
 
The idea interests me too, like, an older brother and a sweet innocent 18 year old sister who might like, barely know anything about sex. Maybe like, the brother is 25 or 26 and a little after he moved out, his parents became freaky ultra-christians who sheltered their daughter and now she's 18 and sent over to visit him, where she, in her complete innocence, turns him on in some way.
 
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DallasRP,

I sent you a private message, but wanted to let you know I fully agree with everything you've said in this thread. I also enjoy the long, slow build-ups, as well as having the characters realistic, instead of heathen sluts.
 
mother son

I enjoy the build up also. The son knowing he has naughty thoughts about his mom and being young and horny can't help sneaking looks at her or having thoughts of her at night as he jacks off. The mother, being a loving mom understands his needs and knowing she has needs too fights hard against the wetness she feels at knowing he wants her. The two flirt and touch each other a little too long and both feel wrong, but nature takes its course. Being shy lovers, they at first find it hard to express what they want (a problem with many lovers not just mother and son) but once they trust each other, taste each other, take each other, they then become filled with lust and desire to explore and teach and learn and enjoy.
 
innocent incests

DallasRP said:
Hiya,

I've been browsing through the "Poll: what is your favorite incest?" thread and the Incest/Taboo section and I'm wondering; Where is all the innocent incest? I'm interested in reading some erotica stories where one, or both parties aren't total sluts who just jump at the first chance. I want some tension built up, damnit! I want that innocence that makes the taboo aspect that much more, well, taboo! :D

I agree, Dallas. To me, the innocent aspect is very appealing. One of my favorite kinks is the the innocent girl who doesn't know what a cock is for but is most anxious for me to show her. (G) That fits perfectly in the kind of incest story you're referring to.
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I always wondered why I was given ''gag gifts'' as a part of my 30th birthday and it was right after my divorce ...I thought it was only after the big 3 0 that it was so silly. I think my dad thought it would tee-off my ex to let it be delivered a day after my birthday.
 
The age factor is a problem in incest stories as it usually begins innocent at exploring new feelings. The innocent can still be told with a brother and sister who find themselves in a close situation after leaving home and the hard time brings them together. And being young and horny who knows what might happen even when they know it is wrong. Or a son coming home to take care of his mother after the loss of her husband. Holding her, she feeling the husband she lost in her arms because the son reminds her of him, and he feeling a woman, soft and pretty, her breast pressed against him and maybe her legs showing in the dress that has ridden up and he begins to feel a stiring he knows is wrong, but doesn't want to let her go. Gives her little kisses and the two of them look at each other and their lips meet. When the kiss is broken both feel bad about what happened and yet both know that they enjoyed it and want it to happen again. They talk over the right and wrong of what they feel.
 
I agree. There is definetely something to be said about an incest story where there is a sense of reluctance at first leading to complete submission of two relatives. I prefer that than the mainstream 'jump into action right away' scenario. Also, though it is true no 18 year old can be passed off as completely innocent these days, it is the challenge of breaking the taboo of lusting after a relative that makes a story worth reading.
 
New Brother/Sister Story

Hello fellow Lit writers,

After taking some time off following my first two literary efforts, my third story just went up and I'm looking for some feedback.

My first two were Mature stories that got decent reviews, but this time I went for a brother/sister story that, so far, has only gotten mixed reviews in terms of voting and only two public comments, both somewhat critical. However, I've gotten nearly a dozen emails, all of which were complimentary and I would like to see what others Literotica regulars think.

Breakfast Lessons

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=378795

Thanks in advance for your comments!

Doug (carolinahusband)
 
carolinahusband said:
Hello fellow Lit writers,

After taking some time off following my first two literary efforts, my third story just went up and I'm looking for some feedback.

My first two were Mature stories that got decent reviews, but this time I went for a brother/sister story that, so far, has only gotten mixed reviews in terms of voting and only two public comments, both somewhat critical. However, I've gotten nearly a dozen emails, all of which were complimentary and I would like to see what others Literotica regulars think.

Breakfast Lessons

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=378795

Thanks in advance for your comments!

Doug (carolinahusband)
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I don't really see the comments as critical - nothing like a nasty LW tale generates. But then, I tend to agree that the story is a fine introduction, but not long enough that the cliffhanger ending was necessary. I felt left unfinished, without payoff, would have liked more...
 
"The Morning After"

I think my story, “The Morning After” is fairly innocent. It can be found here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=377974 . It is about an incestuous attraction that is acted on, but not consummated. A man wakes up naked with a hangover and his naked daughter. The last thing he can remember is sitting in a restaurant with his daughter, and drinking too much in order to kill the pain of his wife’s recent death. During the story father and daughter reveal not only desire for each other, but also love and concern.
 
Love Your Erotic Imagination

Roleplay_Mom said:
DallasRP,

I sent you a private message, but wanted to let you know I fully agree with everything you've said in this thread. I also enjoy the long, slow build-ups, as well as having the characters realistic, instead of heathen sluts.
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... roleplay, mom/son seductions, teasing, blindfolds, bdsm, and more.

MMM, would love to read any stories that you write.

Wanting to know / read more,
Erotically,
Dave
 
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