Innocent Exhibitionist

[thymaridas]

The idea is this: a beautiful girl who is completely oblivious of her own beauty and has no sexual urges. At age 18, they convinced her to at least wear clothing outside. Since she doesn't really like clothes, she has conceded, but prefers very loose fitting garments. Of course, bras are out of the question and panties are infrequent at best. She is constantly getting into situations where she has clothing mishaps and is unaware of the effect this has on others. As she is not embarrassed by these accidents, they occur quite frequently, to the great delight of many observers.

 

[DocCIS]

Very similar to this idea: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=905086

The premise is good, although I would have gone to more tighter skimpier clothes. She does not like clothes, but feels tighter clothes at least give her form more of a "natural" figure instead of hiding it all the time.

It sounds like you are looking more towards the exhibitionist angle than any sex, so you could go a long way in her accidentally showing off to others without getting bogged down in the how's and where for's of the sex angle...

 

[katt2007]

This reminds me a bit of Claire's Career. Though that is very sex focused, it is based on naivety rather than promiscuity (and of course played for laughs).

 

[MatthewVett]

The idea is this: a beautiful girl who is completely oblivious of her own beauty and has no sexual urges. At age 18, they convinced her to at least wear clothing outside. Since she doesn't really like clothes, she has conceded, but prefers very loose fitting garments. Of course, bras are out of the question and panties are infrequent at best. She is constantly getting into situations where she has clothing mishaps and is unaware of the effect this has on others. As she is not embarrassed by these accidents, they occur quite frequently, to the great delight of many observers.

I like the idea. You can definitely do a lot with it. One idea is that she goes to the beach with some friends, and just wears swim trunks, rather than a bikini, because she doesn't realize that men wear one and women the other.

 

[thymaridas]

Thanks all for the suggestions. My basic idea is that the reason she prefers loose fitting clothing is that she would rather be naked, and that loose clothing is less restrictive and feels closer to being naked than does tight clothing. This provides for more amusing circumstances. For example, wearing a crop top, baggy t-shirt, and running to meet a friend results in a nice show of her braless breasts. Wearing baggy shorts gives us a nice pussy flash since she doesn't wear panties. The overall mood of the story is humorous and there is no sex, similar to many of the stories by Thesparkzone, although without the explicit teasing and sexual suggestiveness.

I had an idea of bringing in another character, call her Aunt Linda, who is also an exhibitionist and does engage in more explicit teasing. She would get our innocent character--let's call her Candy--into situations where she would be exposed without compromising her innocence. For example, Aunt Linda sees Candy at some crowded outdoor location. When Candy sees her Aunt Linda she starts running toward her. Aunt Linda, knowing full well what will happen, stops walking toward her in order to prolong the show, to the great delight of many spectators.

 

[pedal_dew]

great idea

This is a great idea. Lots of teasing potential. Are you going to write it?

 

[GorgeousGeekGirl]

The idea is this: a beautiful girl who is completely oblivious of her own beauty and has no sexual urges. At age 18, they convinced her to at least wear clothing outside. Since she doesn't really like clothes, she has conceded, but prefers very loose fitting garments. Of course, bras are out of the question and panties are infrequent at best. She is constantly getting into situations where she has clothing mishaps and is unaware of the effect this has on others. As she is not embarrassed by these accidents, they occur quite frequently, to the great delight of many observers.

What would make this character very believable is if she had some sort of genuine social disorder, such as asbergers syndrome or mild autism. Quite often people with these sort of conditions don't understand social rules and chafe at them, and will disregard the ones they think are stupid. The girl sees the weather is nice and the sun and breeze feel good, but can't feel sun and breeze on her clothed body, so there goes the dress. She is wearing a white shirt but was warned not to get it dirty, so taking it off while she eats is the most practical way to keep it clean.

She could have developed an aversion to clothing as a child because her clothes were being washed in detergent she was allergic to. (When I was a child, I got rashes in uncomfortable places because my mother used generic detergent on my underwear, but didnt get rashes herself because she used woolite on her own underwear.)

Some women hate the constricting feeling of bras, especially if they don't fit right. (My mother was also under the mistaken notion she could stop my puberty by putting me in bras that were too small. Damn things chaffed and felt like I couldn't breathe.)

A big critique I have of erotic literature is that the characters are usually just horny paper dolls with no purpose or reason other than sticking penis tab A into vagina slot B, and various conjugations of the act. Having a female who runs around naked or naked ish without a thought process is boring. Give your reader a reason; people prefer to read about more tangible characters, and it often takes only a few sentences.

Good luck!

 

[MatthewVett]

What would make this character very believable is if she had some sort of genuine social disorder, such as asbergers syndrome or mild autism. Quite often people with these sort of conditions don't understand social rules and chafe at them, and will disregard the ones they think are stupid. The girl sees the weather is nice and the sun and breeze feel good, but can't feel sun and breeze on her clothed body, so there goes the dress. She is wearing a white shirt but was warned not to get it dirty, so taking it off while she eats is the most practical way to keep it clean.

She could have developed an aversion to clothing as a child because her clothes were being washed in detergent she was allergic to. (When I was a child, I got rashes in uncomfortable places because my mother used generic detergent on my underwear, but didnt get rashes herself because she used woolite on her own underwear.)

Some women hate the constricting feeling of bras, especially if they don't fit right. (My mother was also under the mistaken notion she could stop my puberty by putting me in bras that were too small. Damn things chaffed and felt like I couldn't breathe.)

A big critique I have of erotic literature is that the characters are usually just horny paper dolls with no purpose or reason other than sticking penis tab A into vagina slot B, and various conjugations of the act. Having a female who runs around naked or naked ish without a thought process is boring. Give your reader a reason; people prefer to read about more tangible characters, and it often takes only a few sentences.

Good luck!

I actually knew a woman with Asperger's when I was younger, and she just did not wear a bra. She wasn't small enough to get away with going braless, either. Someone had to sit her down eventually and talk to her about it.

 

[malchore]

The idea is this: a beautiful girl who is completely oblivious of her own beauty and has no sexual urges. At age 18, they convinced her to at least wear clothing outside. Since she doesn't really like clothes, she has conceded, but prefers very loose fitting garments. Of course, bras are out of the question and panties are infrequent at best. She is constantly getting into situations where she has clothing mishaps and is unaware of the effect this has on others. As she is not embarrassed by these accidents, they occur quite frequently, to the great delight of many observers.

Well, right off the bat your idea of "...a beautiful girl who is completely oblivious to her own beauty AND has no sexual urges." is not believable. I would loose interest immediately (although I might read on to see if you take this girl into the REALLY unbelievable and have her walk around town completely naked and no one notices etc.)

And who is "they"? "At age 18, they..." who are they, her parents? Wouldn't they have taken care of that years prior? I mean, even at age 10, a naked girl is something that would make any person do a double-take. Any school district would not allow her to return to school if she ever did that etc etc etc. (You see what I mean, about the not believable part?)

But anyways, write the story you want to read. Who cares if anyone likes it, or even reads it! Just having a place where we can write erotic stories and publish them is reward enough I think.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm usually the one who runs around calling story ideas stupid but I'm also the guy who tells you when you've over thought it so here's what I've got thus far.

1. don't worry about why she doesn't like clothing. She just doesn't and that's plenty enough reason right there. Make certain you avoid giving her any specific medical condition. People who know about it will point out every single little thing you got wrong, even if if you didn't get it wrong and it just doesn't apply to their sister/brother/son/daughter/best friend. And everybody is an expert on every disease. If you don't believe me go check out some of the Forums dedicated to the Walking Dead and how pissy people get about menigitas. It's just not worth the fight since it won't add much to the story.

2. Don't make her asexual. Make her a combination of naive and high standards. I know lots of people (most of them guys admittedly but a few women) who simply don't get when guys are flirting with them. To the point where I've seen girls expecially walk away with hurt feelings because they were trying to flirt and the guy just wasn't getting it and she took it as he wasn't interested in her. So she doesn't like clothing and she doesn't really get that the guys aren't accidently brushing up against her and their game of monkey in the middle with her (insert object) wasn't really about teasing her, it was about having a naked woman running and jumping and rubbing against her. She doesn't think of them that way so it never occured to her that they weren't actually teasing her about playing Pokemon

3. Yes. Most erotic literature have horny sex dolls that just want to fuck. If you want something deeper you're probably reading the wrong genre. Note that action flicks are filled with people who shoot first, ask questions never, romance movies are filled with dumb asses who manage to misinterpret every possible thing in the most damning way possible etc etc. In erotic literature the average reader is likely to turn away rather quickly unless you've got a damn good story and if you do it's usually a shame to call it erotic literature instead of just plain literature.

Finally, rock on. I love this idea though it needs some tweaking and I'd start by either nixing the loose clothing or making her idea of loose clothing robes, dresses and perhaps finally a good excuse for those tiny school girl skirts that leave most of her legs bare but do exactly what they HAVE to do. They cover her naughty bits. I can easily buy this girl walking around in a pair of boxers and an open robe that only covers her nipples, and wouldn't even do that if the wind caught it.