"Hot Mom" Style That May Be Too Hot and Potential For Drama

[Betternotsay]

Could a new "hot mom" (having within the last year of divorcing her ex and giving herself a "new me" makeover before moving her 19 year-old son and herself to a new, upscale gated (and very conservative) community cause unintentional drama by how her new look and even more specifically her newfound sense of style (looking her best to feel her best is foremost to how she dresses, how it often makes her stand out and/or become the center of attention at social events and parties is - or was until recent incidents - something she ignored, or at the very least had been acting as if unaware of it (only to have found out it has increased the image she was unaware of - again, or was until recent incidents - the majority of the men and women, husbands and wives, dads and plain Jane moms have of her as being "snooty" and "full of herself" (to name a few overheard criticisms)

More so to her dismay, her own son and his new little group of so-called friends are the ones who have the most ..."focused" ...reaction to how she dresses when attending the same social events they are at (and sometimes she isn't aware of their presence at some, the more formal events , until much later in the evening) Could a "grudge" her son has over the divorce (he believes she instigated the divorce, when in truth - which she has been to embarrassed to share because of his father's/hr ex's infidelity with a younger blonde at his office - she wasn't going to let the marriage continue to a 23rd year, not when she was a faithful yet admittedly a wallflower wife) and her son's seemingly increasing moodiness about her near instant popularity upon arrival in the community due to her unique and exotic looks (yes, in part from her makeover and being the only single mom in her mid 40;s who is a blonde Asian/Latina) ... could seeing her in a dress at a social event that she may be unaware is a bit too "sexy" and/or potential for drama.... lead a moody, somewhat spiteful son of 19 want to enlist the help of his friends that he knows she dislikes. - or maybe he goes along with an idea of theirs - to cause a small series of moments that lead to his "Know It Al Hot Mom" having a comeuppance that involves her sexiness - her look and more so the dress she is wearing - to backfire ands/orbe turned against her in a very public and revealing moment?

For example, is THIS STRAPLESS DRESS too hot and potential for drama and/or the aforementioned comeuppance for an unwitting "hot mom" orchestrated by her moody, spiteful 19 year-old son at "Spring Fling" she was hired as the Event Planner for and had insisted her son attend as her Assistant to get pics for her website ?

Or THIS NEW SKIRT SUIT too much for a community college theater department afternoon fundraiser (that she organized and he was required to attend)?

Or is THIS DRESS too much to wear to the Senior Grad Party held in the afternoon at another parent's home?

 

[Rob_Royale]

In my experience, few people will put more effort into looking good, than a single mom/divorcee. She is hitting the gym, losing some weight, spending more time on makeup and her wardrobe. A hot single woman in a new community is bound to cause a stir, with the local wives keeping an eye on her.

Wives will want their husbands to keep clear of her but are genuinely alarmed when the new hottie seems to smile a little too much at their college age sons.

I think this idea has a lot of potential.

 

[MichelleSwan]

That's quite the stage and well thought. This new skirt suit, sets a realistic canvas that is relatable. An open blouse and a skirt that's too tight , the exhaustion at the end of the function just before things need to be put away. Somewhere we have all been.

 

[Betternotsay]

In my experience, few people will put more effort into looking good, than a single mom. She is hitting the gym, losing some weight, spending more time on makeup and her wardrobe. A hot single woman in a new community is bound to cause a stir, with the local wives keeping an eye on her.

Wives will want their husbands to keep clear of her but are genuinely alarmed when the new hottie seems to smile a little too much at their college age sons.

I think this idea has a lot of potential.

I wonder... do you feel one of the wives, perhaps even the "hot mom's" so-called "frenemy" be the one to want to have a hand - directly or indirectly - during either a social setting or worse, while the "hot mom" is hosting a formal fundraiser onstage and this "frenemy" (maybe even with the help of one of the other wives in the clique against her) would chose such an important and prestigious evening in the "hot mom's" rising Event Planner career to completely ruin it by way of making an onstage "wardrobe malfunction" seem accidental (or worse her own fault under the pretense she is tipsy) that also would ruin her professional image and make her look like a ditzy sex object?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

In my experience, few people will put more effort into looking good, than a single mom. She is hitting the gym, losing some weight, spending more time on makeup and her wardrobe. A hot single woman in a new community is bound to cause a stir, with the local wives keeping an eye on her.

Wives will want their husbands to keep clear of her but are genuinely alarmed when the new hottie seems to smile a little too much at their college age sons.

I think this idea has a lot of potential.

Suppose it sets off a competition? Suddenly several, or many want to try and outdo the new hot body.

Aside from their own appearance, the town gyms have a boom in business, followed by the spas, beauty salons and clothing stores. The economy of the whole town thrives based on women wanting to look better.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Damn ......


What if the new mom is a witch? The newest hot mom MILF is really 250 years old,

Agatha Cromwell moves to town in search of members for a new coven. Is there something in the water? Is there something in the air? Did Aggie put it there? How do all the women start looking better over a span of a few weeks or months?

What happens on the twentieth birthday of the town sons and daughters? Is that when they get their powers? Maybe through some kind of elaborate erotic ceremony where they're offered up to others on a special bed?

Maybe that's how Aggie keeps her looks and body. Once every month she needs the intimate secretions of a 20 year old son or daughter.

 

[Betternotsay]

Suppose it sets off a competition? Suddenly several, or many want to try and outdo the new hot body.

Aside from their own appearance, the town gyms have a boom in business, followed by the spas, beauty salons and clothing stores. The economy of the whole town thrives based on women wanting to look better.

Cute, but lacks dramatic action and conflict. Strays from the initial idea.

 

[Betternotsay]

Damn ......


What if the new mom is a witch? The newest hot mom MILF is really 250 years old,

Agatha Cromwell moves to town in search of members for a new coven. Is there something in the water? Is there something in the air? Did Aggie put it there? How do all the women start looking better over a span of a few weeks or months?

What happens on the twentieth birthday of the town sons and daughters? Is that when they get their powers? Maybe through some kind of elaborate erotic ceremony where they're offered up to others on a special bed?

Maybe that's how Aggie keeps her looks and body. Once every month she needs the intimate secretions of a 20 year old son or daughter.

Funny. But too fantastical and derivative.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I wonder... do you feel one of the wives, perhaps even the "hot mom's" so-called "frenemy" be the one to want to have a hand - directly or indirectly - during either a social setting or worse, while the "hot mom" is hosting a formal fundraiser onstage and this "frenemy" (maybe even with the help of one of the other wives in the clique against her) would chose such an important and prestigious evening in the "hot mom's" rising Event Planner career to completely ruin it by way of making an onstage "wardrobe malfunction" seem accidental (or worse her own fault under the pretense she is tipsy) that also would ruin her professional image and make her look like a ditzy sex object?

Of course. Jealousy is a powerful thing. The frenemy (Amy) has long been the object of desire in the neighborhood. She's gorgeous. Perfect hair, wealthy husband ( a bit boring though), gorgeous body and face. A head turner in sweats and no makeup, but when she gets dressed up, she's the all-star hottie.

This new young woman (Josie) moves in and starts to cause a stir. They meet socially and Josie is just too sweet and effortlessly attractive. Amy hates her instantly. Especialy when she gets home and hears her 19-year-old son talking with his friend on the phone.

"Jesus Pete, did you see that new MILF in #11? She's gotta be the hottest woman in the neighborhood."

Amy grits her teeth and realizes that the norm must be re-established and begins her plans to make it happen.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Cute, but lacks dramatic action and conflict.

I don't like drama and conflict.

But you don't think a bunch of women trying to outdo each other could create drama and conflict if the author wanted to go that way?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

... could seeing her in a dress at a social event that she may be unaware is a bit too "sexy" and/or potential for drama.... lead a moody, somewhat spiteful son of 19 want to enlist the help of his friends that he knows she dislikes. - or maybe he goes along with an idea of theirs - to cause a small series of moments that lead to his "Know It Al Hot Mom" having a comeuppance that involves her sexiness - her look and more so the dress she is wearing - to backfire ands/orbe turned against her in a very public and revealing moment?

Why would you want to shame a woman for wanting to be a better person?

And why focus on Ethnicity?

 

[Betternotsay]

Of course. Jealousy is a powerful thing. The frenemy (Amy) has long been the object of desire in the neighborhood. She's gorgeous. Perfect hair, wealthy husband ( a bit boring though), gorgeous body and face. A head turner in sweats and no makeup, but when she gets dressed up, she's the all-star hottie.

This new young woman (Josie) moves in and starts to cause a stir. They meet socially and Josie is just too sweet and effortlessly attractive. Amy hates her instantly. Especialy when she gets home and here's her 19-year-old son talking with his friend on the phone.

"Jesus Pete, did you see that new MILF in #11? She's gotta be the hottest woman in the neighborhood."

Amy grits her teeth and realizes that the norm must be re-established and begins her plans to make it happen.

Two gorgeous women is one too much. The frenemy could be (Helen) is the opposite of new hot mom (Kyla). Helen is maybe 55 to Kyla's 45. Tall, thin. Grey hair always in a tight bun. Boring clothes. The Wicked Witch to Kyla's "Miss Priss Princess" attitude. Helen's husband (Phil) is wealthy, but boorish. Naturally he believes he will be the first to "have" the all star blondie Asian hottie. Helen has an iron grip on the community social scene, Every major party is held at Helen and Phil's because they have the biggest home in the private gated community.

Maybe Kyla finds out that since Helen does a big "Haunted House" thing for trick or treating kids on Halloween and apparently no other husband and wife have ever tried to have a Halloween costume party for the adults and their young adult children.... how does she find this out? Her son tells her when he pleads with her to let him have a party to help with his "new kid" status and make friends. What a perfect idea, she thinks.

Unwittingly setting the stage for scary good drama.

 

[Betternotsay]

I don't like drama and conflict.

But you don't think a bunch of women trying to outdo each other could create drama and conflict if the author wanted to go that way?

But I'm the author. Women trying to outdo each other? To what purpose. Maybe the idea is the new "hot mom" has no competition.

 

[Betternotsay]

Why would you want to shame a woman for wanting to be a better person?

And why focus on Ethnicity?

I'm not shaming anyone for wanting to be a better person. It's the other jealous wives/mothers who don't have the new "hot mom's" looks/fashion and dislike how their husbands clearly stare. These women feel their way to compete is to try to shame and/or ruin the "hot mom's" image/popularity.

Actually, by asking that second question, you're the one making ethnicity seem like it's a "focus" whereas others, including myself, call it "being specific about characters." Oh, and I happen to be Asian. And a hot mom.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Two gorgeous women is one too much. The frenemy could be (Helen) is the opposite of new hot mom (Kyla). Helen is maybe 55 to Kyla's 45. Tall, thin. Grey hair always in a tight bun. Boring clothes. The Wicked Witch to Kyla's "Miss Priss Princess" attitude. Helen's husband (Phil) is wealthy, but boorish. Naturally he believes he will be the first to "have" the all star blondie Asian hottie. Helen has an iron grip on the community social scene, Every major party is held at Helen and Phil's because they have the biggest home in the private gated community.

Maybe Kyla finds out that since Helen does a big "Haunted House" thing for trick or treating kids on Halloween and apparently no other husband and wife have ever tried to have a Halloween costume party for the adults and their young adult children.... how does she find this out? Her son tells her when he pleads with her to let him have a party to help with his "new kid" status and make friends. What a perfect idea, she thinks.

Unwittingly setting the stage for scary good drama.

I like it. Write it!