javawarrior
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- Sep 2, 2011
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I wasn't sure where to put this, but I've revised my incest story. Based on some feedback I got, I changed some dialgue, but I also added an extra thing at the end to make it even more interesting. I hope I succeeded.
My Blood
If you read it, let me know what you think of the changes, and if you haven't, let me know anyway!
My Blood
If you read it, let me know what you think of the changes, and if you haven't, let me know anyway!
