warpedntwisted
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- Jul 18, 2002
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with a different twist, perhaps, with 6 you get eggroll.
a story line based in truth, a boy is adopted into a jewish family, at birth, unfortunatly mom is not cut out to handle it, child is dificult , is farmed off to the various aunts around the country. the lad is pocessed of what be best termed "a magnificent equipage",and of course, the females of the clan take notice as he grows. at a family gathering, the older female cousin, deciding it is high time to see if the tree has blossomed, takes things in hand, and to an 11 yr old, this is attention so desperatly wanted.
from there it is only a matter of time till the aunt of his fantasy, the one with the huge chest and the dead hubby, gives in to need and desire, seducing the all to willing now 13 yr old, who is now sporting what at best could be called "a freak of nature" in his underwear. from one to another, as he is passed from house to house, the otherwise very conservative, middle class
family is involved in an almost faustian dance of lust, a desire to nuture this needy, love starved kid, and a fixation on the member , the power of which he is only now beginning to comprehend, and the constant struggle for some of the females to justify the carnal drive and the instinct to nuture and protect.
as the story unfolds, it reflects on the effect this situation has on the various members of what was once a typical, post war jewish family, struggling to be as perfectly middle class and average as possible.
I intend to start roughing it out this week, and while fact based, I openly solicit comment, ideas, and any advice on the wordsmith's art. As yet I don't have a clear pic as to weather this is a mid lenght story, or a friggin book, The meat is there, weather i'm up to it or not remains to be seen. If it develops towards a book, i may yell HELP, who knows!!
a story line based in truth, a boy is adopted into a jewish family, at birth, unfortunatly mom is not cut out to handle it, child is dificult , is farmed off to the various aunts around the country. the lad is pocessed of what be best termed "a magnificent equipage",and of course, the females of the clan take notice as he grows. at a family gathering, the older female cousin, deciding it is high time to see if the tree has blossomed, takes things in hand, and to an 11 yr old, this is attention so desperatly wanted.
from there it is only a matter of time till the aunt of his fantasy, the one with the huge chest and the dead hubby, gives in to need and desire, seducing the all to willing now 13 yr old, who is now sporting what at best could be called "a freak of nature" in his underwear. from one to another, as he is passed from house to house, the otherwise very conservative, middle class
family is involved in an almost faustian dance of lust, a desire to nuture this needy, love starved kid, and a fixation on the member , the power of which he is only now beginning to comprehend, and the constant struggle for some of the females to justify the carnal drive and the instinct to nuture and protect.
as the story unfolds, it reflects on the effect this situation has on the various members of what was once a typical, post war jewish family, struggling to be as perfectly middle class and average as possible.
I intend to start roughing it out this week, and while fact based, I openly solicit comment, ideas, and any advice on the wordsmith's art. As yet I don't have a clear pic as to weather this is a mid lenght story, or a friggin book, The meat is there, weather i'm up to it or not remains to be seen. If it develops towards a book, i may yell HELP, who knows!!
