Decided to start a new story, in hopes if it being my first competition entry, for the 2013 Literotica Summer Competition.
I've settled on a bro/sis story. I don't want a lovey dovey type of story so I figured there would have to be some type of control one has over the other. Couldn't really decide on who the be the controlling one in the story, ie who's incharge, decided on the sister, came up with the following outline,
College aged sis is returning home for the summer after her first year away. She's informed that she's is stuck 'babysitting' her 18yr old bro for the summer, while the parents take a trip to try to fix their marriage.
Brother is the shy, submissive type with a streak of perviness to him lol, so naturally older sis catches him, maybe with her underwear or jerking off or something. She confronts him and makes him confess to his actions, from there she makes him agree to do whatever she asks for the entire summer. At first it's innocent stuff, serving her meals, doing the chores etc
...but one day, she invites one of her friends over to enjoy their pool. Big sis has little bro serve them drinks poolside etc. Her friend pesters her to tell her why she has so much control over her brother and she gives in an tells her. Intrigued and sort of turned on, the friend convinces the sister to up the stakes, having the brother do more brazen, erotic tasks, like having him stripped down to his undies while he serves them at the pool, have him applying sun tan lotion, question him incessantly about his underwear fetish.
Sister and friend decide that the friend should spend the summer at the house as they carry on their teasing. Trips to the beach, park, even grocery, are made with the brother, maybe involving some forced exhibition by everyone.
At some point, maybe sis and friend start feeling a little sorry for the brother, so they decide to indulge him a little, knowing of his underwear fetish, they take him lingerie shopping, modeling numerous outfits for his viewing pleasure.
From there, back at the house, things begin to take a physical turn. Sister is at first hesitant, never meaning for it to go this far, but the friend convinces her. At this point im considering having the roles change a little, since sister is reluctant, maybe have brother come out of his shell and take control a little, (still considering whether to include the change, im not completely sold.)
That's what i have so far, what do you guys (and gals) think?
Any suggestions, tips, criticisms? Perhaps other themes/scenarios that would be fun to include? Any help would really be appreciated.
I've settled on a bro/sis story. I don't want a lovey dovey type of story so I figured there would have to be some type of control one has over the other. Couldn't really decide on who the be the controlling one in the story, ie who's incharge, decided on the sister, came up with the following outline,
College aged sis is returning home for the summer after her first year away. She's informed that she's is stuck 'babysitting' her 18yr old bro for the summer, while the parents take a trip to try to fix their marriage.
Brother is the shy, submissive type with a streak of perviness to him lol, so naturally older sis catches him, maybe with her underwear or jerking off or something. She confronts him and makes him confess to his actions, from there she makes him agree to do whatever she asks for the entire summer. At first it's innocent stuff, serving her meals, doing the chores etc
...but one day, she invites one of her friends over to enjoy their pool. Big sis has little bro serve them drinks poolside etc. Her friend pesters her to tell her why she has so much control over her brother and she gives in an tells her. Intrigued and sort of turned on, the friend convinces the sister to up the stakes, having the brother do more brazen, erotic tasks, like having him stripped down to his undies while he serves them at the pool, have him applying sun tan lotion, question him incessantly about his underwear fetish.
Sister and friend decide that the friend should spend the summer at the house as they carry on their teasing. Trips to the beach, park, even grocery, are made with the brother, maybe involving some forced exhibition by everyone.
At some point, maybe sis and friend start feeling a little sorry for the brother, so they decide to indulge him a little, knowing of his underwear fetish, they take him lingerie shopping, modeling numerous outfits for his viewing pleasure.
From there, back at the house, things begin to take a physical turn. Sister is at first hesitant, never meaning for it to go this far, but the friend convinces her. At this point im considering having the roles change a little, since sister is reluctant, maybe have brother come out of his shell and take control a little, (still considering whether to include the change, im not completely sold.)
That's what i have so far, what do you guys (and gals) think?
Any suggestions, tips, criticisms? Perhaps other themes/scenarios that would be fun to include? Any help would really be appreciated.
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