I'm new author-please review...

[Phallux]

I recently submitted my first-ever erotic story, Scent of a Handyman. So far I've gotten a couple email complements...thank you MorningStar. Please give me some input.

Thanks!
Phallux

[This message has been edited by Phallux (edited 10-14-1999).]

 

[MorningStar]

Hey, no problem....like I told you, I enjoyed the story a lot. I appreciate an author taking the time to set the scene and the mood of a plot. In my mind, a story isn't worth reading if I can't place myself somewhere within the characters I'm reading about....therein lies the key to being able to fantasize while you read, and if the author is lucky enough to have struck a chord within the reader's 'soul', success is found in the fact the author's audience reacts by being aroused....isn't that literotica is all about, arousal? Well done, P...looking forward to seeing more posted soon.

MorningStar

 

[robertreams]

so where's the story?

 

[sr71plt]

Why do you do this? This thread is nearly fourteen years old. Do you have some sort of mental deficiency? You've already been called on dredging up multiple thirteen-year-old threads.