I'm going to try this one more time.

[rikaaim]

When I first started I made a thread stating that I wanted to read some good stories. Specifically I wanted to read stories of my friends here at the AH. Now I know the biggest problem about being a good writer here is that we have so few good readers. Meaning: We write our hearts out and only a few people vote and leave feedback. I still want to be a good reader to everyone here as well as a good writer. Currently I am a bit burned out on the writing portion of this little endeavor of mine. So, I'm back to my reading kick. I would like to read some good stories. I don't care how long.

If anyone wants me to read a story of theirs, just post. I must make one recantment this time around. Please only post one of your stories. I will read it and leave some feedback as well as vote. I know that's what we're all looking for. Not only do you get another view, vote, and comment, but I get some knowledge from reading. To me this is a win/win. I must admit that I am being slightly shelfish by reading your works for my reasearch, but isn't that what the AH is all about?

I do have quite a bit of freetime today and would love to get in some reading. So post the story you would like me to read most. Remember to keep it one per profile for now. When I have more time I can go back and read some more.

Anxioulsy waiting,

Rika


As a small PS: I decided to try leaving my abriviated tagline like some others, namely Yui and Shanglan. I know others do it, and I like it. So I'ma gonna try it out.

 

[angelicminx]

I don't know how good you will find either one of them but both of my stories are in my sig. "Dreams of Meeting" is still my favorite because my heart was poured into it, but you are welcome to read what you wish.

 

[rikaaim]

I don't know how good you will find either one of them but both of my stories are in my sig. "Dreams of Meeting" is still my favorite because my heart was poured into it, but you are welcome to read what you wish.

My dear, my humble services are at your command. I will read what you wish. Being the first to sucumb to my tempting proposition, you shall get yours first and instantly.

Rika.

 

[brightlyiburn]

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=184514

It will take you five minutes
It's non-erotic, so I haven't gotten a lot of feedback on it, and I'm rather curious to see what people think.

 

[rikaaim]

Minx, read voted and left a comment. I shall PM you with some more comments. Brightly, I'll read yours next.

Rika.

 

[sophia jane]

Oh yeah! a volunteer!

I would be thrilled to have a writer read one of my stories. I have gotten great feedback from some of the other writers here, but I always like more. And you can be mean, if you need to be. My stuff is in my sig. I would especially appreciate feedback on My special delivery, since it's gotten less feedback and comments.
You're a gem! I'll be glad to return the favor when you need a reader.
SJ

 

[rikaaim]

I would be thrilled to have a writer read one of my stories. I have gotten great feedback from some of the other writers here, but I always like more. And you can be mean, if you need to be. My stuff is in my sig. I would especially appreciate feedback on My special delivery, since it's gotten less feedback and comments.
You're a gem! I'll be glad to return the favor when you need a reader.
SJ

At your request I'll read that particular story. I'll get to it right away.

Rika

 

[Octavian]

Hello rikaaim

Since you are asking a second time I will recommend my 'A Modern Love Story'. I should warn you it is rather long but hand on heart I have had the most incredible feedback for it.

Octavian

A Modern Love Story

This is probably the best and most erotic wife-watching story I've ever read on the net!

Thank you very much for writing and posting "A Modern Love Story". It is an exceptional story, and its quality surpasses almost everything of its kind. Only once or twice a year do I have the pleasure of reading work this good.

I think this was one of the best erotic stories that I have ever read. Even though I don't like cuckold stories, I couldn't stop reading this one.

 

[bowtie4u]

Hot

I don't know how good you will find either one of them but both of my stories are in my sig. "Dreams of Meeting" is still my favorite because my heart was poured into it, but you are welcome to read what you wish.

Angelicimix
Just read your story "Dreams of Meeting" it is verry good and as a male reader it made me aroused

Keep up the good work

Yes I voted and maybe send feedback if you like??

 

[rikaaim]

SJ, I read, voted, and commented. Very well done and a love mid-afternoon treat.

Rika

 

[yui]

Tuesday, mebbe?

Yui the feedback slut

 

[rikaaim]

Hello rikaaim

Since you are asking a second time I will recommend my 'A Modern Love Story'. I should warn you it is rather long but hand on heart I have had the most incredible feedback for it.

Octavian

A Modern Love Story

This is probably the best and most erotic wife-watching story I've ever read on the net!

Thank you very much for writing and posting "A Modern Love Story". It is an exceptional story, and its quality surpasses almost everything of its kind. Only once or twice a year do I have the pleasure of reading work this good.

I think this was one of the best erotic stories that I have ever read. Even though I don't like cuckold stories, I couldn't stop reading this one.

I would much like to read a longer one. I seem to have only whetted my appetite sort to speak. I will read it post haste.

Rika


Edited to add:

I just saw that your story is 13 Lit pages long. Not that that is a deterent by any means. I just won't be able to read it all today. Sorry about that, but I will give it the read that it would seem to demand. Whe I am finished I will PM you. This is a story that I'll print out and read later while soaking in a hot, relaxing bath. Truly the best way to enjoy a long story. The last time that occured was with Carson's "What Chocolate Mousse can Do". That was a lovely and delicious late night snack. I do look forward to this main course as it were. Just give me a bit of time.

 

[rikaaim]

Tuesday, mebbe?

Yui the feedback slut

Didn't I read that once for you already dear? Wanting seconds are we? I know I already read about three of your stories. You and Lisa push my buttons better than any other you sexy beast.

I'll give it a look, and if I recall reading it, I'll vote and comment.

Rika

 

[yui]

Didn't I read that once for you already dear? Wanting seconds are we? I know I already read about three of your stories. You and Lisa push my buttons better than any other you sexy beast.

I'll give it a look, and if I recall reading it, I'll vote and comment.

Rika

the pasha!

 

[impressive]

Tuesday, mebbe?

Yui the feedback slut

You got some pasha in the other thread, wench!

 

[rikaaim]

the pasha!

Upon further inspection, it may be the only one I haven't read of yours Yui. I will read following Octavian's request.

Just to let everyone know, this is a much needed and enjoyed break. I love to write, but first and foremost I've always been a reader.

Yui, to you love.

Rika

 

[rikaaim]

You got some pasha in the other thread, wench!

Yui can have all the lovely, young pashas that she wants. As long as I'm in there somewhere.

Rika

 

[rikaaim]

Tuesday, mebbe?

Yui the feedback slut

Read, voted, and commented.

Rika

 

[rikaaim]

Any more volunteers? I've already read everyone's but Octavian's story. I really would like to read some more.

 

[moonlight elf]

Pasha

I have only one story so far. It was kinda rushed and not my fav. piece of work but I'd love some honest feedback. Thanks

moonlight

Edited to add: give me a sec, i'll add the link to my sig.

 

[rikaaim]

Pasha

I have only one story so far. It was kinda rushed and not my fav. piece of work but I'd love some honest feedback. Thanks

moonlight

I shall do so immediately. I was just waiting for another victi....I mean...volunteer. If you want an honest disceting critique I shall PM you one.

Rika

 

[angelicminx]

Angelicimix
Just read your story "Dreams of Meeting" it is verry good and as a male reader it made me aroused

Keep up the good work

Yes I voted and maybe send feedback if you like??

Please?

 

[rikaaim]

I would highly recommened that the stories being asked to be read by me be read by everyone who has the time or desire. That's what we are, a community, a family of sorts. If we don't support one another, who will?

Elffy, did you want a full critique? I would be more than happy to leave some honest and thoughtful suggestions in a PM.

Rika

 

[moonlight elf]

I shall do so immediately. I was just waiting for another victi....I mean...volunteer. If you want an honest disceting critique I shall PM you one.

Rika

The PM would be nice, TY


I don't mind being a victi....volunteer that is

 

[rikaaim]

Why, is that a proposition?