I revieved feedback on my previous published work. Told from Lin's point of view I am slowly rewritting them.
Part 1: Lin and Trent travel to Taiwan to teach English. Lin takes work as a hostess in a Japanese bar. Meets a visitng Yakuza called Hiro. Takes Lin and Trent under his protection. For Hiro's birthday they have a threesome.
Part 2: Lin finds out about Hiro's work and one wild night works as a bargirl in a karaoke bar where she sleeps with a client. Hiro leaves Taiwan.
Part 3: Trent and Lin look for a new adventure and find it with an expat that gropes Lin in a bar. Lin has a wild night with the expat. Trent sends Lin out to meet the expat again but instead she meets a local called Jin and has a threesome with the expat and Jin. Trent ends their relationship and Lin thinks about returning home.
Part 4: ?
Does it end with part 3 or should a new adventure begin?
Part 1: Lin and Trent travel to Taiwan to teach English. Lin takes work as a hostess in a Japanese bar. Meets a visitng Yakuza called Hiro. Takes Lin and Trent under his protection. For Hiro's birthday they have a threesome.
Part 2: Lin finds out about Hiro's work and one wild night works as a bargirl in a karaoke bar where she sleeps with a client. Hiro leaves Taiwan.
Part 3: Trent and Lin look for a new adventure and find it with an expat that gropes Lin in a bar. Lin has a wild night with the expat. Trent sends Lin out to meet the expat again but instead she meets a local called Jin and has a threesome with the expat and Jin. Trent ends their relationship and Lin thinks about returning home.
Part 4: ?
Does it end with part 3 or should a new adventure begin?