Ideas for part 4 or should the story end?

LindyWong

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I revieved feedback on my previous published work. Told from Lin's point of view I am slowly rewritting them.

Part 1: Lin and Trent travel to Taiwan to teach English. Lin takes work as a hostess in a Japanese bar. Meets a visitng Yakuza called Hiro. Takes Lin and Trent under his protection. For Hiro's birthday they have a threesome.
Part 2: Lin finds out about Hiro's work and one wild night works as a bargirl in a karaoke bar where she sleeps with a client. Hiro leaves Taiwan.
Part 3: Trent and Lin look for a new adventure and find it with an expat that gropes Lin in a bar. Lin has a wild night with the expat. Trent sends Lin out to meet the expat again but instead she meets a local called Jin and has a threesome with the expat and Jin. Trent ends their relationship and Lin thinks about returning home.
Part 4: ?

Does it end with part 3 or should a new adventure begin?
 
Understand that viewership falls off by two-thirds immediately after part 1. So if your goal is to be read, starting a new story with those characters is the way to go.

In other words, Have the Adventures of Lin P1-P3, and then start Lin's Adventures in Bondage, P1 which stands by itself, where the reader doesn't need to go back and read older stories unless they want to.
 
THX :)

I had the idea to move it to New York next. Have Lin open a bar for Hiro. Same as the one where she worked in Taipei.

Lin's Taipei Adventures
Lin's New York Adventures
 
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