I'd like comments on my pirate story

[Flashlight7.5]

If anyone feels up for it, I'd appreciate a few reads and comments on my newest story here - The Jolly Roger Earrings. It's one of the oddest pieces of erotica I've written, so I'm keen to hear what people think of it.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=196812&page=1

Thanks in advance.

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[Sabledrake]

That opening line is priceless! Off to read the rest.

-- Sabledrake

 

[GirlMidnite]

Shiver me timbers, twas a good read!

Sorry, I am shit at the criticism thing. I really am.

But I liked it, punchy and with some humour.

 

[msboy8]

A great tale! I R.V.C.ed your story. Sequel please!