redzinger
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Is there ever a word which is so versatile but is so easy to overuse and overlook?
I've just read the third story in the last 24 hours where a form of 'look' has been used three times in the space of a few sentences. There could be more, I just stopped counting at three.
I know this is one of my habits, and it's bemusing for me to find the same thing in some otherwise very well-crafted tales.
(For those who don't recognise it, thread title is a corruption of Kylie's first hit back in 1988 - the saucy little minx has been around for years:
http://youtu.be/bMCXx5k01Tg )
I've just read the third story in the last 24 hours where a form of 'look' has been used three times in the space of a few sentences. There could be more, I just stopped counting at three.
I know this is one of my habits, and it's bemusing for me to find the same thing in some otherwise very well-crafted tales.
(For those who don't recognise it, thread title is a corruption of Kylie's first hit back in 1988 - the saucy little minx has been around for years:
http://youtu.be/bMCXx5k01Tg )
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