I need some some ideas for a "Son watches mom" story

[er2122]

I like stories that involve a son watching his mother seduced by a friend to the point it has become a fetish. But they are very rare and it's even harder to find good stories in this vein. Some of my favourites are:

Home Run by Sa2222http://www.literotica.com/s/home-run-4
Dad's Lost bet by thehumpman http://www.literotica.com/s/dads-lost-bet
The Bet by TheStinger http://www.literotica.com/s/the-bet-53
Only Mom and I Know by thestoryspinner http://www.literotica.com/s/only-mom-and-i-know-ch-01

Finally I've got bored of searching for similar stories and decided to write something similar. If you check the stories above you'll notice they are all written in first person with the son's POV. I'm planning to write just like that. My problem is I've got the gist of the stories but just can't make up my mind on the details. I thought of a mom that goes to camping with her son and his best friend but the story keeps changing in my mind while I try to write. Changing the small details would be fine but I keep rewriting the main scenario over and over.

I would be grateful if you could tell me your ideas so I can choose one and write on that without changing the core details. I need the "son watches mom get seduced" part intact but feel free to throw in any fetishes.

 

[DarkMask008]

Here's some ideas.

- Have it originally be a group of friends that were going camping with the MC but at the last minute the MC's dad got called into work or some other excuse. The MC's mom decides she'll take her husbands spot much to the dismay of the MC as he hates the kind of attention his mom gets from his friends.

- Throw in a flashback (To explain why the son hates the attention his mom gets form his friends.) to a scene where one of the friends was spending the night and saw the mom changing (In bra/panties) or in a skimpy bikini and initially told the son he wouldn't tell a soul but the next at school or something the friend told everyone in their friend group. The friend tells the story in an extravagant way and going into fine detail on her body.

- Don't make the mom perfect, make her believable. Make her around late 30's early 40's, if your going with big boobs say she got implants or something. If your going to have it where she only does sexual things when shes drunk or high make it believable. Dont make her turn into a slut the moment she's high/drunk.

I'm looking forward to your story!

 

[HeyAll]

edit.

 

[er2122]

Thanks for the tips and ideas. I've read the Family Nightmare and agree it's quite hot.

I've decided to keep it short and simple since it's my first story. Still I'm willing to listen to any ideas people have before I start working on it.

 

[tapeworm]

Thanks for the tips and ideas. I've read the Family Nightmare and agree it's quite hot.

I've decided to keep it short and simple since it's my first story. Still I'm willing to listen to any ideas people have before I start working on it.

How about a somewhat plump but rather attractive mom with a whimpy son? He and the friend have been friends for quite some time. The friend is a big, tough black ghetto type and often looks out for the son. One day, the mom comes over to school to pick up the son. She sees her son about to be bashed up by some bullies, but the friend steps in and sends them packing. She thanks the friend afterwards and asks if she can do anything for him. He insists that she comes along for a trip that he had planned with her son and some other buddies. Does that appea to you?

 

[saltpepper57898]

I like stories that involve a son watching his mother seduced by a friend to the point it has become a fetish. But they are very rare and it's even harder to find good stories in this vein. Some of my favourites are:

@er2122 I am also a fan of the subject.
Check my post: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=798741

If you like take the ideas and write a story.

 

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

I've written a lot of stories of this kind and would really love to see more.

 

[jamie9100]

Son travels back in time. Mom is at the moment when she can become a good girl or a bad girl. Son upsets the timeline and mom becomes a bad girl. Son has to chase her through life and try and fix things. In the process, he sees moms escapades.

 

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Son travels back in time. Mom is at the moment when she can become a good girl or a bad girl. Son upsets the timeline and mom becomes a bad girl. Son has to chase her through life and try and fix things. In the process, he sees moms escapades.

What kind of moment is that?

 

[er2122]

Thanks for the ideas, I submitted it already. If you have any ideas for my next story feel free to tell me.

 

[Bob Waters]

What kind of moment is that?

Past mom - barely legal - is at a party and is in the process of getting seduced by 2 or 3 guys. She went with them, is tempted but changed her mind and is about to leave when future son shows up and makes a big deal of her needing to leave NOW. She gets pissed at being told what to do, being judged etc and blows them all. Situation gets her a 'reputation' and she suddenly becomes 'popular'. Son has to fix things so she actually meets and falls in love with his father a-la Back to the Future.

 

[Lost_Yonder]

Past mom - barely legal - is at a party and is in the process of getting seduced by 2 or 3 guys. She went with them, is tempted but changed her mind and is about to leave when future son shows up and makes a big deal of her needing to leave NOW. She gets pissed at being told what to do, being judged etc and blows them all. Situation gets her a 'reputation' and she suddenly becomes 'popular'. Son has to fix things so she actually meets and falls in love with his father a-la Back to the Future.

in another occassion, the future son finds his mom drunk at a party one night. she seduces him and he becomes his own father...

 

[buggiez]

Thanks for the ideas, I submitted it already. If you have any ideas for my next story feel free to tell me.

what name this story ?

 

[Hitman7]

I have actually written a story called 'Fillius', which is about a son witnessing his mum having sex with his classmate, who is Black.

My idea was to create a sort-of mini-series involving the same premise, but told within different viewpoints of each main characters. So the first part will be the son's. Then after it, will be the mother. Next is the father and finally, the black boyfriend.

So it's a bit ambitious, but hopefully I can manage to do it.


I have posted two chapters already. The first chapter, if you want to check out is already online.


http://www.literotica.com/s/filius-ch-01


The second though, is still on pending.

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@er2122

Here are the things I always think of, before I start writing a story.


1. Overarching plot- What's the main gist of the story? e.g. son catches his mum with a friend of his

2. Main Characters- Who are the lead characters? e.g. son, mum, friend

3. Viewpoint- Is it third person, second person, or first-person viewpoint?

4. Setting- Where is/are the locations? e.g. school, house, restaurant, friend's house

5. Secondary plot- Why did the overarching plot happen? How did it happen? e.g. friend has had a crush on son's mum for a very long time, the mother did to

6. Minor details- Who are the minor characters? How did each scenarios happen? How did each even transpired to the next?


I hope that helps you mate.

 

[MaryR]

I like stories that involve a son watching his mother seduced by a friend to the point it has become a fetish. But they are very rare and it's even harder to find good stories in this vein. Some of my favourites are:

Home Run by Sa2222http://www.literotica.com/s/home-run-4
Dad's Lost bet by thehumpman http://www.literotica.com/s/dads-lost-bet
The Bet by TheStinger http://www.literotica.com/s/the-bet-53
Only Mom and I Know by thestoryspinner http://www.literotica.com/s/only-mom-and-i-know-ch-01

Finally I've got bored of searching for similar stories and decided to write something similar. If you check the stories above you'll notice they are all written in first person with the son's POV. I'm planning to write just like that. My problem is I've got the gist of the stories but just can't make up my mind on the details. I thought of a mom that goes to camping with her son and his best friend but the story keeps changing in my mind while I try to write. Changing the small details would be fine but I keep rewriting the main scenario over and over.

I would be grateful if you could tell me your ideas so I can choose one and write on that without changing the core details. I need the "son watches mom get seduced" part intact but feel free to throw in any fetishes.

I think the first person type of stories are the best although naturally we like from the mothers point of view.
The problem with camping is that it can be so uncomfortable. Much nicer with a pleasant domestic setting in the kitchen or lounge.

Mary

 

[MaryR]

I like stories that involve a son watching his mother seduced by a friend to the point it has become a fetish. But they are very rare and it's even harder to find good stories in this vein. Some of my favourites are:

Home Run by Sa2222http://www.literotica.com/s/home-run-4
Dad's Lost bet by thehumpman http://www.literotica.com/s/dads-lost-bet
The Bet by TheStinger http://www.literotica.com/s/the-bet-53
Only Mom and I Know by thestoryspinner http://www.literotica.com/s/only-mom-and-i-know-ch-01

Finally I've got bored of searching for similar stories and decided to write something similar. If you check the stories above you'll notice they are all written in first person with the son's POV. I'm planning to write just like that. My problem is I've got the gist of the stories but just can't make up my mind on the details. I thought of a mom that goes to camping with her son and his best friend but the story keeps changing in my mind while I try to write. Changing the small details would be fine but I keep rewriting the main scenario over and over.

I would be grateful if you could tell me your ideas so I can choose one and write on that without changing the core details. I need the "son watches mom get seduced" part intact but feel free to throw in any fetishes.

I think it is exciting if the mother and son are watching each other touching themselves.