I need some help. I'm a writer, see, and I want to write an illustrated story . . .

KillerMuffin

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Hey, I'm Muffie. I write porno for this site (click my WWW if you want to see it) and I'm vain enough to think I'm kind of good at it. I'm here because you people are the undisputed amateur pic mongers of the web. At least as far as I'm concerned.

I want to write an illustrated story. I've got a few questions and I'd like to request your help to volunteer your pictures. Credit will be given to where it's due and any generated feedback will be sent to all parties involved. I will not give out anyone's email address for any reason, merely pass on the message.

I've got a part of the story written already and it shouldn't take me much to finish it. It's not too hard to work it to fit any pictures that might be tossed my way.

Basically, this is what I envision for it. I want 5 or so pages with 2-5 pictures per page. This, of course, really depends on a couple of things. I only want one full picture on the screen no matter where you are in the story. It can be two pics split, but I don't want two pics fully visible. It would distract too much from the writing. I'd like my writing to be at least half of what makes the story hot.

This also depends on connect speed. I've got cable soon to be DSL, I can hit a page with 5 pics on it and get it loaded in a minute or less. It's been so long since I've had access to dial-up that I'm not sure how many pictures is too many to load. I don't want the reader to wait thirty minutes between pages. If necessary, we can test this by hotlinking pics located at Lit into the forum.

If you've got a dial-up, how many pics of around a 3x4 size would open on a page for you in what you would consider a good amount of time? Any ideas on this?

This is the story:

A man comes home early from a business trip to find his wife looking at porn on the computer while on the phone. She and her best friend (female) are exploring phone sex with each other and it gets hotter as it goes (I hope). He gets on another extension and listens in to find that they're having a menage a trois that involves him. The ending is with them all hanging up and him heading out the door for a motel room because his wife and best friend plan to make that fantasy a reality for him when he "comes home" the next night.

Because of the nature of the beast, it's mostly dialogue. Pictures will complement that nicely since neither description nor picture will get in the way of each other. Since none of the people having sex with each other are actually in the same room, I thought this would make it simpler.

What I want:

I want pictures that you own the copyright to. I don't want porn site rip-offs because it will be posted on a page that includes advertisements. This can spell legal trouble for Literotica and I really don't want that. I also think that having real Lit'ers in the story is a lot cooler than some faked porno pics.

I obviously need two females and one male. All of them are alone so it's not necessary for anyone to actually meet. Unless you want to. My ideal would be the two women sitting in a chair at the computer on the phone with enough showing to get a good impression of the body and personality without giving away too much privacy. I'd like the male to be leaning in the doorway, looking in on his wife (she needn't be in evidence). He's buck naked, fair warning. I won't accept pics that are altered to fuzz out details for privacy, I'd rather use camera angles to protect privacy. Masturbation will be involved.

I want pics of people who are attractive, of course, but I want the people to look like someone people actually know. Perfection need not apply.

Clear pictures are a requirement. If your cam is grainy, that's going to be a problem. I would like a quantity of shots to choose from, rather than just one or two. That helps me pick shots that work with the story and to write the words around the pictures more effectively.

What to do:

You can email or PM me if you'd prefer (hit the buttons below this post) or you can simply post here. I'm perfectly amenable to going through pics on this thread, perhaps even getting actual input on it, instead of using email. I've got a small inbox anyway.

I'll be checking with Laurel about what she may need from you since you aren't posting yourself under your own name where you'd have control over it.

Copyrights -- you retain all copyrights to your pictures. This is both my preference and site policy. All you will be granting me is the right to post the pictures with my story at Literotica only until such time as the story may be pulled from the site. If you think that you may want to remove these pics some time in the future, please don't volunteer yourself. I want to take pains to make identity murky while titillating the reader as much as possible so somthing like this doesn't come up. Removing one picture or set of pictures will ruin the effort.

I hope I get a response.
 
Your wrting is terrific and the idea is wonderful
I wish you luck in your search
 
It does sound interesting. If you're hard up for volunteers, drop me a line. I somehow doubt you will be though. :)
 
I'm kinda excited about it, I admit.

Here's a part of the story, so far.

He peeked around the corner of the door and saw his wife. <i>His</i> completely naked wife was sprawled in the obscenely expensive, leather, executive desk chair that she’d bought him for his birthday months ago. The monitor bathed her in the multicolored light of a porn site and one of her toes was wrapped in the phone cord. <i>His</i> wife was having a phone sex affair. He didn’t know if he wanted to kill them both or curl up under the bed and cry or both.

“My tits are too small, Alec would dearly <i>love</i> to see that! Can you suck your nipple, too?”

He stopped, confused. His mental picture of the anonymous man that was everything he wanted to be was replaced with a female.

“God, that sounded so fucking sexy. I wish I could do that.” She sucked in a deep breath and held it for a few moments. “You would? For real? Holy shit, Caro.”

The pornstar in his brain disappeared and a tall drink of water with generous breasts, an ass that won’t quit, and short brown hair took her place. Caroline. His wife’s best friend and the second hottest feature fantasy collection in his brain.

“Oh my God, Alec would cheerfully kill to see that.”

He had to know what he would kill to see. Images of his wife’s face buried between Caro’s legs were hot, but to actually <i>hear</i> Caro talking about it would blow his mind. He raced downstairs as fast as he safely could without being heard, his boner leading the way to the phone in the kitchen. He filched the salmon shaped potholder to cover the mouthpiece with and approached the phone with all the care of a cougar stalking a rabbit.

“–that noise?”

“I don’t know. It sounded like someone on the other phone.”

The silence stretched as both women listened keenly. He held still, hardly daring to breathe. He winced, hoping the salmon effectively muffled the thump and whirr of the refrigerator as the compressor kicked on.

“Oh well.” He wilted in relief. “You were talking about sucking my tits.”

“I’ve been, ah, wanting to do that for years.” He could here the little girl shyness in Dana’s voice and it turned him on ever more. It was better than he’d hoped. “I love your tits.”

“Why didn’t we have this conversation years ago?”

“I don’t know. Are your nipples hard? Mine are so hard they hurt.”

“The left one is still wet from where I sucked it.”

He wrapped his hand around his cock, but didn’t move because one jerk and he’s shoot his wad all over the floor.

“God. Are you naked yet?”

“I could be. My panties are wet. I want to be with you right now, Dana.”

He pictured a white scrap of silk and lace turned completely transparent with love juice. He wondered what it smelled like, tasted like.

“I’d lick them if you were here.”

Even better. What would he prefer, to suck his Dana’s clit while she licked Caro or to watch them sixty-nine?

“Are you still fingering your pussy?” Caro’s voice was huskier, hornier.

“Ooh yes. I’ve got two fingers inside still and my thumb is rubbing my clit.”

“I’ve got my panties to the side and I’m doing that, too.”
 
Re: I need some help. I'm a writer, see, and I want to write an illustrated story . . .

Perfection need not apply.

Ah, well then. :D

This sounds really interesting KM. I hope you get what you need. I'll be sure to hop on over and take a look when it's all finished.
 
After that excerpt, I think I'm excited about it as well. :D
 
Just a bump for a friend, and a VERY worthy cause! I'd love to read this one when it's done!
 
Great Idea!

KM:

I can't offer any help here (no digicam), but I just wanted to offer my support for this great idea. Using amateur pics from lit members instead of ridiculous corporate web shots will make your story even hotter than it already is.

Maybe you should find a way to get some lit members to record an audio version of the story, one member for each voice of the phone sex conversation.

You are truly an incredible writer. I have followed your writing ever since reading "Front Lawn" way back when. It remains the most exciting story I have found on the site.

Butt maybe that's just me...;)
 
Muffin, If you have NOT already done so, you should ask the group over there on the general board for help. You seem to have good following over there? I'm sure they would be apt to help. I would try Marksgirl. Her and her husban could probably help you out.... gladly. send her a pm.

huskie
 
Have you considered illustrations? It would seem to me to be the best way to get owned work. You would probably have to settle for less pictures though.
 
No takers?

The only people who will do illustrations want me to pay for them and they're either cartoonish or of dubious quality. Besides, I think pictures of real people are hotter.
 
KillerMuffin said:
No takers?

The only people who will do illustrations want me to pay for them and they're either cartoonish or of dubious quality. Besides, I think pictures of real people are hotter.

I have to agree, the pics are hotter but as far as illustrations go, the answer is right under your nose.

Perky can not only do the illustrations, she may already have some for you.
 
Here's hoping a month later!

I haven't checked with Perky (I forgot), but I will. Though I'd prefer pictures to illustrations by far.
 
*bump* for KM.

I'd be willing to help KM, but they'd be webcam shots, not as clear as you might like.
 
Great Idea for your stories Muff!

Hope you get someone to collaborate with.

The idea of including some text from your stories was a good one, and should pay dividends.

If you hit the mother load, please pass them on to me. I'm trying to cast Sarah, my horny secretary, for my next story. She has decided to take Bruce, (Her Boss) up on his offer of a raise and a penthouse to become his plaything. She generally wears office attire, with stockings obviously!

Hope you don't mind me hitching a ride?

I love your stories by the way!




Is everything fiction?

If you observe it, you change it. (Loosely, Heisenbergs uncertainty principle)
 
Great Idea and great story beginning KM. I have always been a fan of your writing. Can't contribute yet....no cam, but may be able to help out in mid-August. You may want to approach some folks here directly with an appeal. I can't speak for them, but Lil_Angel, Freya, MSP?? (Jewell), Lionblade (josh) and MichievousMisti (except she is pregnant now) may want to play with this. oogieboogie and oogieboogielove seem to be good sports and he is a great photographer. Chicklet may be game, but she is writing up a storm herself in all categories. Just some ideas, I am sure there are others as well. you can find a lot of men in the Big Handsome Men Experiment thread.

Good Luck - hope these suggestions help out.
 
E-mail ...

Killer Muffin ... I have just sent you e-mail offering to illustrate your story. It may not be what you want, exactly, but it is a serious offer.
 
Having only just spotted this KM, I'm more than willing to help out.
Just let me know if you still need this help, I'm always up for it.:p

Carl
 
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