I need help

[randyolegoat]

I submitted the 4th chapter of 'Beverly needs a plumber' and it was rejected because of punctuation I think. I'd like someone to take a look at it because I can't figure what I've done wrong. Thanks, Randyolegoat

 

[Guest]

Post a link to the story, randy. We're lazy sods around here.

 

[where]

Post a link to the story, randy. We're lazy sods around here.

it was rejected so he can't can he? I always find it funny that some total crap gets posted because it's punctuated correctly but other stuff gets rejected time and time again because of one stupid little thing.

 

[fieryjen]

Punctuation, you think?

Is it possible for you to go back to your control panel and make sure this is the reason, please? It should list it quite clearly there.

I'll PM you my email address, you can send me the story and I'll look it over and see if I can find anything wrong with it.

 

[Guest]

it was rejected so he can't can he?

I sit corrected, Red, and in awe of your natural ability.

 

[where]

I sit corrected, Red, and in awe of your natural ability.

If you are trying to get into my pants with all this flattery, carry on, you are nearly there

 

[Guest]

If you are trying to get into my pants with all this flattery, carry on, you are nearly there

So, one more bity of flattery and a transatlantic plane ticket would do it, eh?

 

[LizKitten]

If you email it to me, I'll see what I can do with it. Punctuation? Really? Your commas must be atrocious. ; )

 

[where]

So, one more bity of flattery and a transatlantic plane ticket would do it, eh?

*lies back and waits for it*

 

[Guest]

*lies back and waits for it*

Or curls up naked in a depression atop a boulder and waits for it?


Just snuck a peek at your website, darlin'--you're absolutely stunning!

 

[where]

Or curls up naked in a depression atop a boulder and waits for it?


Just snuck a peek at your website, darlin'--you're absolutely stunning!

*blush*

I misread that as me being depressed at first, *laughing*

 

[Guest]

*blush*

I misread that as me being depressed at first, *laughing*

Oh, don't worry about being depressed. I think I could find something to lift your skirts--

AHEM!!!

SPIRITS! Lift your spirits!






And that is my 1,000th post. Was it good for you, too?

 

[where]

Oh, don't worry about being depressed. I think I could find something to lift your skirts--

AHEM!!!

SPIRITS! Lift your spirits!






And that is my 1,000th post. Was it good for you, too?

Whhhhooooo hoooooooo!

I think the earth moved!

 

[Guest]

Whhhhooooo hoooooooo!

I think the earth moved!

Beauty, brains, and highly orgasmic to boot...

 

[where]

Beauty, brains, and highly orgasmic to boot...

only in my dreams baby

 

[Guest]

only in my dreams baby

No, no... the beauty and brains are quite real. The other? Practice, practice, practice...

 

[where]

No, no... the beauty and brains are quite real. The other? Practice, practice, practice...

*pulls out my Rock chick and starts practising*

 

[Guest]

*pulls out my Rock chick and starts practising*

You've now expanded my horizons regarding female vibrators (never heard of Rock Chick before, at least not in this context). You type remarkably well one-handed!

And, you've furnished a fair amount of, let's say, inspiration as well.

 

[where]

You've now expanded my horizons regarding female vibrators (never heard of Rock Chick before, at least not in this context). You type remarkably well one-handed!

And, you've furnished a fair amount of, let's say, inspiration as well.

Don't need hands with a rock chick

And I'm delighted to be an inspiration!

 

[randyolegoat]

Rejection

Just a little update. I checked for punctuation errors in my story and finding none I resubmitted the story. I left town for a few days and came home to find it has been accepted. Who knows what mysteries we encounter on this very interesting and education site.

 

[where]

Just a little update. I checked for punctuation errors in my story and finding none I resubmitted the story. I left town for a few days and came home to find it has been accepted. Who knows what mysteries we encounter on this very interesting and education site.

The accept/ rejection thang here is a mystery of divine proportions sometimes