I need a comparison...

[Just-Legal]

Cause bright as a halogen bulb does NOT fit. Help?

 

[starrkers]

lightning flash?

 

[Just-Legal]

lightning flash?

Ooh, lightning would work! Lemme try it...

Lyelleth was curled up in the foetal position, lit from the inside like lightning caught in a bottle, yet her skin was icy to the touch.

 

[Vermilion]

bright as in light, not intelligent yes?

Bright as burning magnesium? Very poetic I think...
x
V

 

[Just-Legal]

bright as in light, not intelligent yes?

Bright as burning magnesium? Very poetic I think...
x
V

I might use that later actually, she's going to be sparking a lot in this part hehe

 

[Liar]

Cause bright as a halogen bulb does NOT fit. Help?

A few steps up in luminescence: a xenon flash.

Or maybe not. Not what it is you're after.

 

[The_Fool]

nova...

 

[Just-Legal]

Basically, my character has a lot of power trapped inside her, eventually its going to be released in a rather massive explosion style thing but at the moment she looks like a lightbulb she's glowing that bright *g*

 

[starrkers]

Ooh, lightning would work! Lemme try it...

That sounds great!
Now, if I can just get my own writing jumpstarted,,,

 

[Just-Legal]

nova...

That will be perfect for her grounding out...

 

[fieryjen]

Let me just say that this all sounds very intriguing.

 

[Just-Legal]

Is now the time to confess its probably never going to get posted on Lit? Its actually for my fanfic...

*runs*

 

[fieryjen]

Is now the time to confess its probably never going to get posted on Lit? Its actually for my fanfic...

*runs*

Aw. You don't have to run, but I would have liked to read it.

 

[Just-Legal]

Aw. You don't have to run, but I would have liked to read it.

*point to sig* Its for the one marked Lyelleth and Orannis

 

[Just-Legal]

That sounds great!
Now, if I can just get my own writing jumpstarted,,,

Its an ongoing series, the last chapter took me for *ever* to do. This one is sort of a "write a few lines, do something else" too.

 

[fieryjen]

*point to sig* Its for the one marked Lyelleth and Orannis

Thanks for pointing it out. I'll have to go give it a read once I'm caught up on my NaNo.

 

[Just-Legal]

Thanks for pointing it out. I'll have to go give it a read once I'm caught up on my NaNo.

Please do! I warn you I'm a review whore...

 

[fieryjen]

Please do! I warn you I'm a review whore...

Definitely

It might be a while though, since I do have to get my NaNo done first. I sort of doubt I'll get caught up all the way tonight, although I'm getting close.

 

[gauchecritic]

coruscating is a nice word. sparkly and shimmering.

 

[slyc_willie]

"Lyelleth was curled up in the foetal position, glowing as if she had trapped the sun in her womb, yet her skin was icy to the touch."

How's that?

 

[SeaCat]

Ahem, empty your incoming box please? I can't get the next one in there.

Cat

 

[Just-Legal]

Ahem, empty your incoming box please? I can't get the next one in there.

Cat

Oopsie

 

[Just-Legal]

"Lyelleth was curled up in the foetal position, glowing as if she had trapped the sun in her womb, yet her skin was icy to the touch."

How's that?

Good but sorta not due to lacking that bodypart. I think I have a good one for now but keep em coming, she's going to be glowing for a while.

 

[slyc_willie]

Good but sorta not due to lacking that bodypart. I think I have a good one for now but keep em coming, she's going to be glowing for a while.

Replace 'womb' with 'belly' or something similar (if she's not human).

Now you got me thinking . . . .

 

[Just-Legal]

Replace 'womb' with 'belly' or something similar (if she's not human).

Now you got me thinking . . . .

Heheh yeah I was planning to. Except its the moon (she's "Moontouched".)