I have found my ideal lover! My perfect love!

[riff]

Her name is "Sleep."

I am gonna write a poem about her.

 

[nzwookie]

Good on you.....Are you into shareing then.......

 

[Debbie]

Her name is "Sleep."

I am gonna write a poem about her.

I love the idea of a poem about your new love.

Please share with us when you have finished.

 

[freescorfr]

I opened this thinking "Amelia" or something like that and all I find is sleep. Sleep is not the same as oblivion.

An Ode to Sleep.

I love to place my head upon
The pillow's downy fluff
I close my eyes and fill my mind
with lots of empty stuff.

I drift away to some far land
And sooth my weary soul
And dream of my Rebecca. Lord,
Please wrap her round my pole.


Somethinmg like that, Riff?

 

[riff]

No.

You wrote that poem. Not me. I am serious here. Because the truth is that no matter whom I love- she will never be perfect or as wonderful as my ideal love.

And I have found her. I have known her all of my life and never Knew that she was THE one.

I was thinking more on the lines of (this is off the top of my head):

My Ideal Love (proto-poem)
-by riff

I can see myself
married
turning to you, my
love.
The last kiss I gave you
somewhere
on your holy temple
before I leave to find my
ideal love,
Sleep.

 

[freescorfr]

You wrote that, Riff?

We could have the wedding in the amphitheatre in Orange.

beneath the statue of the the great emperor - I forget his name, Anthony perhaps.

"Do you, Riff, take Sleep, to be your lawful wedded wife, to have and to hold, to love and to cherish etc. etc."

I think you'd have to have some symbolic representation of Sleep.

Who would you like?
What would it be?

 

[craigiebaby]

Sorry riff, Sleep is multi-timing you !

I have been going to bed with her for many years and plan to carry on so doing

 

[riff]

You wrote that, Riff?

We could have the wedding in the amphitheatre in Orange.

beneath the statue of the the great emperor - I forget his name, Anthony perhaps.

"Do you, Riff, take Sleep, to be your lawful wedded wife, to have and to hold, to love and to cherish etc. etc."

I think you'd have to have some symbolic representation of Sleep.

Who would you like?
What would it be?

Of course I wrote it! Is it good the way it is, do you think?

I could never marry my ideal love, I've already been sleeping with her for all of my life! On the day I marry, Sleep will become my mistress.

 

[herpesface]

Is that picture you ?

If not who ?

 

[riff]

Is that picture you ?

If not who ?

What picture?

 

[GreenEyedGirl]

Sleep is the most wonderful mistress, except for the times when she forsakes you and leaves you to toss and turn, cluthcing your pillow in her absence.
But when she nestles into your arms, oh the wonder and bliss of it all. She will hold you close, give you wonderful stories to interweave into your soul, and kiss you into another realm of consciousness.
Sleep is the only love that will ever be ideal.

 

[Desert Amazon]

 

[Private Vasquez]

hey! you back off, sleep is MY lover..


but I'm willing to share
for a nominal fee

 

[perks]

I have to steal moments of time for all my lovers. Sleep seems to be looked over more often than not. I'm glad you can appreciate her. She deserves it.
looks at my bed wistfully

 

[freescorfr]

So this has got serious now.

Riff, if you did find your ideal love and you courted as normal humans might and were about to be married, whereupon your beloved says, "But, Riff, my dear. Sleep is my truest love!"
What would you feel?

It's a bit like saying, "Darling I want to marry you, but, you know, food will always be the most important thing in my life. The table is my true mistress."

 

[riff]

So this has got serious now.

Riff, if you did find your ideal love and you courted as normal humans might and were about to be married, whereupon your beloved says, "But, Riff, my dear. Sleep is my truest love!"
What would you feel?

It's a bit like saying, "Darling I want to marry you, but, you know, food will always be the most important thing in my life. The table is my true mistress."

Threadkiller. LOL

 

[Azwed]

Sleep is overrated.

 

[amelia]

my poem about sleep

riff..you inspired me...i never write poetry...

sleep

clean sheets
the smell of rosewood
cool, dark comfortable quiet
soft music
the warmth of someone's skin
these are the things sweet dreams are made of

 

[MorgaineLaFay]

Riff...

I'm going to pay a little visit to your lover right now

 

[Juspar Emvan]

At 6:03 Morgaine?! Bitch . . . I'm going to seduce her now.

Ah Amelia, you touch the soul of my lover there.

Night all

 

[Andreina]

i thought your pocket pussy was your TRUE love. im disappointed now.

Halo