I have a big canvas but don't know what to paint

[mikey2much]

I started a story that I thought would be about clones hatched out on a barren planet.
In my mind I saw them as eighteen year old men and women emerging fully grown and lit legal but with no, absolutely no, knowledge of who they were sexually.

Instead the story turned into a manhunt racing against a rescue mission in the swamps of a Florida that has been changed by global warming as well as evolutionary relapse of the people who still live there in the swamps.

If you have any ideals on what things I should focus on with the clones learning about themselves, I would love to hear them. If you need more details about the setting, you could read my story ' Lit World chapter one, Grandma's revenge', there is a link in my sig below.

Thanks in advance for any help you can offer.

 

[mythtrav16]

I think you'd have to begin with a situation of men being fascinated with the women's breasts and the women being fascinated with the men's penises, as these are the two most aparrent physiological differences between us.

Men would wonder why the feminine counterparts' chests are so bulgy. And are the bulges firm, like thier own pecks, or are they supple? What do they feel like?

Women would likewise be curious about the dangly things between the men's legs. What are they? Why don't they have one? What are those bags behind them?

Not knowing sexuality, the men and women explore each other's bodies very innocent and analytically. Eventually, one woman handles a man in just the right way and produces an erection. Both she and the man are mystified by what this means.

Trial and error would eventually see all men knowing what kind of stimulation produces an erection on them. They realize that when they are erect, being handled by the women is especially enjoyable. The obliging and curious women help the men explore this phenomenon. More experimentation leads to one woman producing an ejaculation. At first, there is concern among the tribe at the man's sudden collapse, but then masturbation becomes the new local craze when he tells all his friends how amazing it felt.

Eventually, one man twigs that he felt an elusive sense of pleasure when he was handling a woman's breasts, and as he knows it feels good to play with his erect penis, he wonders if the two sensations can be combined to enhance the pleasure. He finds a willing female assistant to tittyfuck him and the experiment is a resounding success.

Later, another man rationalizes that the cleavage from a woman's breasts being pushed together (where their cocks get those great tittyfucks) looks just like an ass crack, so he decides to test whether or not gyrating between a woman's ass cheeks is equally as pleasurable. As the experiment becomes more and more enjoyable, he finds himself wondering what it would be like to go all the way inside? The woman is shocked by the sensation, as she never agreed to anal penetration, but doesn't resist because of curiousity about the strange sensations she's experiencing, and also the man's assurances that it has become immensely pleasurable for him. Though she is quick to order him to calm down, to minimize her pain.

Meanwhile, the females, who begin to get jealous of the orgasmic experiences the men get from their cocks, begin to experiment with their own crotches and eventually produce orgasms of their own. Someone eventually posits the theory that because the vaginas and the penises are in the exact same place on the body, and because one is a shaft, and the other is a long hollow, perhaps they are meant to be together? An expiriment naturally ensues between the first vaginal sex partners. The sounds of the wild, aroused moans draw the whole tribe around out of curiousity, and the lovers continue in the center of the fascinated crowd, feeling no shame in what they are doing.

When they are finished, their reports to all their curious friends of the extreme mutual pleasure all but inspires an immediate orgy between everyone else, who are eager to try the experience for themselves.

Eventually, as sex became commonplace, foreplay would end up being a power struggle/wresting match between the man and the woman. The men struggle to take the women anally, as they enjoy the tightness, whereas the women are more eager for vaginal penetration. Differant psychological techniques would eventually enter the sexual battlefield, such as women teasing men to suckle on their breasts, so that they are facing each other when penetration occurs, rather than taking them from behind.

Or perhaps two men secretly agreeing to work together to outwit a mutual lover. Just when the woman thinks she's won the battle, because man #1 is screwing her vaginally, man #2 enters the room and climbs on top of her to hump her anally. The woman graciously allows it to continue as she admires the clever strategy they used.

I'd like to think that this would be a respectful society of consentual sexual relations. The battle for anal/vaginal is more a friendly competition between two people who have already agreed to mate, rather than a strong person forcing themselves on a weak one. But if you're in to rape stories, then you could take the story in a rougher direction at this point.

One other idea: Back in the "investigation" stage, when everybody is investigating the opposite gender, and as the colonies are begining to intermingle, you could have the men suddenly stumbling upon a woman with exceptionally large breasts, and perhaps the women meeting a man with an exceptionally large cock. Even though nobody really understands what breasts or cocks are for at this point, these curiously exceptional people become overnight "celebrities" among the society and perhaps become the de facto king and queen.

 

[mikey2much]

thanks for your input

Lots to think about