I guess I can now hangout here!

[Lying Eyes]

Got my first story "Breast Pump Blues" up on literotica so I am oficialy an author now!

Already got some nice feedback but what shocked me was when saw I had over 7000 views. Is that some kind of typo or error? The story has been up probably less then 12 hours, that seems insane!

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Welcome Slick!

Views will vary according to the category of your story, but seeing views in the thousands is normal. Anytime someone clicks on the story it will constitute a view. Even if you just look at it constantly, it has been viewed. Not all views mean people read all the way through, but regardless it's a good sign that it generated that much interest in such a short period of time. The numbers tend to go down some when it leaves the New Stories List, but never fear. There are new views almost everyday. Congratulations on your first story and good luck with it.

~lucky

 

[Guest]

Hi Slick, welcome to the AH.

I won't repeat what Lucky just said, because she said it so well.

Have fun here, and congrats on your first story!

Lou

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

slicknhb,

Congratulations on your first story. But you didn't need that to be apart of the Hangout. My presence alone is proof that the standards here aren't very stiff.

You might want to place a URL link to your story on your post so folks can get to it easily.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Lying Eyes]

A link to my story for those intrested:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=129625

By the way its a lesbian story, though I guess it fits as a fetish story also. A brief discription would be, she falls for lonely lactating lady next door.

I just read it again. The feedack I got from one person concerning the dialogue was useful. I should of tweaked it up a bit more before sending it in.

 

[Guest]

lonely lactating lady next door.

Slick, for that phrase alone I welcome you and wish you well.

best, Perdita

 

[Boxlicker101]

Got my first story "Breast Pump Blues" up on literotica so I am oficialy an author now!

Already got some nice feedback but what shocked me was when saw I had over 7000 views. Is that some kind of typo or error? The story has been up probably less then 12 hours, that seems insane!

Hi, Slick and welcome to Lit and to AH. Congrats on getting your story posted and all. 7,000 views is quite a few but lesbian stories are pretty popular so it is not a record. That is a very catchy name, though. How many votes you get and how much feedback, either email or PC counts a lot more.

 

[MathGirl]

Dear Slick,

yo

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

"...lonely lactating lady next door." Slick, for that phrase alone I welcome you and wish you well. best, Perdita

Slick has real potential, all right. It's just a shame that gal wasn't good looking and from Kentucky. Then she could be a, "...lonely, lovely, lactating Lexington lady."

My name's Rumple, and I'm an non-recovering alliterator.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Guest]

... she could be a, "...lonely, lovely, lactating Lexington lady."

Rumplydude, name her Lavinia and you might have a catchy C&W hit, you alliterating old fool.

Perdita

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Perdita,

Why oh why didn't I remember Lydia the tattooed lady?

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Re: Dear Slick,

yo

I'll see that "yo", and raise you a "lo".

 

[Guest]

Why oh why didn't I remember Lydia the tattooed lady?

I did, but I didn't use her name cos 'tatoo' doesn't fit the alliteration. P.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

I did, but I didn't use her name cos 'tatoo' doesn't fit the alliteration. P.

Right as usual, super star Perdita. What we'll do is update her. From now on, she'll be, "Lydia the latte' lady."

RF

 

[Guest]

"Lydia the latte' lady."

OK, RF, try this on your tongue (and I know you know the tune):

Have you met Lydia?
Lactating Lydia,
Lydia the latte' lady

You continue. P.

 

[Lying Eyes]

Right as usual, super star Perdita. What we'll do is update her. From now on, she'll be, "Lydia the latte' lady."

RF

With... long luscious legs

I actualy used that those three words in the story. The story was originaly titled "Broken Breast-pump Blues".

 

[minsue]

With... long luscious legs

I actualy used that those three words in the story. The story was originaly titled "Broken Breast-pump Blues".

- Mindy

ps Congrats!