I don't care what you sick fucks think, but this is a brilliant work!

[Guest]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=75827

 

[Guest]

brilliant?

CV-

I did not find this story to be erotic at all... I know it wasn't supposed to be.

The concept was a big concept and one that is compelling.

The disillusion did "leave a taste in my mouth", but the story didn't convince me. The first paragraphs were tedious to read.

Thanks for bringing it to our attention, though.

 

[damppanties]

Yes, it wasn't erotic but it was different and I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks CV.

 

[littlenightstar]

I definatly think that whoever wrote this has a wonderful talent. It was an enjoyable story, well worth reading. Not erotic though, I do agree with everyone else on that one....it was very sexual, but not erotic. All together Great Job though!

 

[Graymouse]

Yeah--not erotic but I still loved it. I'll take brilliant non-erotic writing over mediocre erotica any day.