I screamed as the force of the blow seared across my cheek. “Where are the documents,” he yelled. “ For the last time tell me where your father hid them!” “ I won’t betray my family or the King.” I murmured in reply. This had been going on for almost a day now. I was taken from our summer villa in Barbados two days ago. At first the captain of the Darthian had been charming and tried to encourage the information from me. After that didn’t get anywhere he locked me is a dark damp closet. I could smell the vile filth of the ship, but couldn’t retch because I didn’t even have enough space to double over. Shortly after dawn, he released me from the darkness and interrogated me until I hardly knew my name.
My face throbbed from the numerous blows I received through out interrogation. “ If you don’t tell me where to find the papers I will have to become more forceful” I groaned. We were interrupted by a sharp rap at our door.
“Captain a ship is approaching at full sail” The first mate bellowed through the door. The captain quickly opened the door, ‘Does it look like one of the King’s ships? What flag is it flying?’ “ It looks like a ship loyal to the king, it is flying his flag but it is not of the royal fleet.” The captian spun on his heels and grabbed me by the elbow, and proceeded to haul me up to the deck. My legs threatened to buckle under me, shear feel propelled me forward.
“Captain she is coming abreast!” the first mate shouted. “Prepare the guns…..I will signal them from the bow”. He continued to push me forward toward the front of the ship. When we reached the front, I was blinded by the sun. I was roughly tossed aside and blackness filled my vision.
***general idea is that the ship comming up to them is going to plunder them. The captian sees she and can't leave her there. He rescues her..... I was thinking that the main plot could be her father was protecting the last will of the king. He was murdered and now soone is trying to kill the girl in he story.***
Would anyone like to help write it? I have trouble switching charactor views and would love some input.
My face throbbed from the numerous blows I received through out interrogation. “ If you don’t tell me where to find the papers I will have to become more forceful” I groaned. We were interrupted by a sharp rap at our door.
“Captain a ship is approaching at full sail” The first mate bellowed through the door. The captain quickly opened the door, ‘Does it look like one of the King’s ships? What flag is it flying?’ “ It looks like a ship loyal to the king, it is flying his flag but it is not of the royal fleet.” The captian spun on his heels and grabbed me by the elbow, and proceeded to haul me up to the deck. My legs threatened to buckle under me, shear feel propelled me forward.
“Captain she is coming abreast!” the first mate shouted. “Prepare the guns…..I will signal them from the bow”. He continued to push me forward toward the front of the ship. When we reached the front, I was blinded by the sun. I was roughly tossed aside and blackness filled my vision.
***general idea is that the ship comming up to them is going to plunder them. The captian sees she and can't leave her there. He rescues her..... I was thinking that the main plot could be her father was protecting the last will of the king. He was murdered and now soone is trying to kill the girl in he story.***
Would anyone like to help write it? I have trouble switching charactor views and would love some input.
