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jenn02

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First time thinking of a story idea but here goes:

18 to 20 year old girl lives at home with her mom and younger brother. Dad hasn't been around in years and things have been very rocky financially for some time. But lately things have started to slip further behind and we are short for rent again which now makes it three months that we haven't been able to fully pay. Growing up every now and then things would be really tight like they are now and I remember our landlord being upset and sometimes seeing him going with my mom into her bedroom and the door closing. The walls of the house are thin and my room is right next door so it was hard not to hear what was going on in her room and hearing our landlord with my mom and the headboard hitting against the wall and the sounds him using her to let us stay. And here we are again in a tough spot and I'm in the kitchen with my mom sitting at our table with our landlord telling us that he can't keep letting us not pay him. My mom's English isn't great so I've always had to be a translator for her when things get too complicated. When our landlord knocked on the front door I went to go answer and was wearing tight leggings and a little t shirt. As he walked in and I turned around to take him to the kitchen his eyes moved down to my ass and kept them there staring at my ass hard all the way to the kitchen. And as we are all in the kitchen he's talking to my mom primarily but he glances over at me a few times or looks at me when I need to translate something for her. Eventually things would progress to where he makes a proposal that makes me nervous. Him looking over at me and asking me if I really want to help my mom out then maybe I'd let him take a few pictures of me, something just for him, nobody needs to know, just our secret. He would tell me whatever he thought I needed to hear to make me think its just a few innocent pictures and would be over quick and he would let us slide on the rent. Him putting me in a position where he knows I want to help my mom, where he knows he can almost guilt me into agreeing to it. But my mom also knows him and knows that she isn't sure she can trust him that it's just going to be some innocent pictures. My feeling of nervousness getting so intense when he tells me something like "then let's take care of it now. I've got another house just around the corner that's empty and was just cleaned this morning." He sees the look of nervousness and hesitation on my face and tells me "I thought you said you were serious about helping your mom out. come on i promise it wont take long".

Thoughts? I've also thought about it where maybe my boyfriend was involved and we owed money to someone and really the only thing he had to offer was me. Or other thoughts of being put in a position by a much much older man where he takes advantage of a situation to have his way with me.
 
It's a fine idea.The real story though is how your mom and you, feel about it. What are your thoughts during the acts you perform. Did it make your pussy wet to be photographed? How did it feel to hear her screw the landlord? What did you imagine doing? These are the things that pull the reader into the story.

The boyfriend is a neat curveball that can go many different ways.
 
It all depends on where you want it to go, doesn't it?

If you want a psychological story, the boyfriend could be horribly conflicted. He talked her into it, but now he feels jealous. He constantly asks her leading questions, trying to get her to admit she likes sex with the loan shark more than with him, because he's so torn up by the jealousy. Finally, she tells him to just hide in the closet and watch. That's one way it could go.

Or, the loan shark decides to keep your heroine, so he approaches the boyfriend when she isn't around and says he'll forgive the debt entirely and even give Loser Boyfriend a few bucks, if he moves to Cleveland within a week. Boyfriend is a coward, so he just vanishes, leaving your female main character thinking that he abandoned her (correctly, but not quite the way she thinks). The loan shark looks pretty good to her now. He is always affectionate and even respectful to her, and he's never begging her for cash to cover his bills.

Until it turns out he's also a pimp and wants to rent her out.

Or hundreds of other ways it could go.

-Annie
 
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