I could use a new set of eyes

[soflabbwlvr]

Not for myself, of course, but to take a look at a story I am currently writing. I have a wonderful editor--I love her to death--but due to other commitments she doesn't have sufficient time to provide all the assistance I require.

I am looking for someone to read through what will probably be the first two chapters of a story and provide editorial feedback. I am not looking for grammar, spelling, or punctuation corrections. Those will come later. (That's just the way I work). What I am looking for is someone to read through and evaluate the storyline, dialog, characterization, etc. In other words, tell me what needs to be fixed before the final draft.

The story is approximately 17,000 words at present. I have not decided upon which category it will eventually be filed, but it most likely will be group sex.

There is a link in my signature to my last story for anyone who would like to become familiar with my style before accepting this undertaking.

 

[Aellio]

Well, if you are willing to give me, a sort of new person around here a try I can certainly attempt to do as you ask.
Although, admittedly, I would most likely be better suited for the spelling, and grammar checks later on in your writing process, I would love to take the time to look over your story.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

Ok, that's one. Anyone else interested?