How to write an orgy story

[Rickster627]

How would you write an orgy story in any point of view just curious?

 

[lovecraft68]

How would you write an orgy story in any point of view just curious?

Personally I think first person from one of the participants works best. The trick is you have to be able to have that person experiencing something while making note of all the fun stuff going on around them.

My suggestion is go on over to the group sex categry and check out some of the work there.

 

[Rickster627]

I was thinking of me being that guy and then the others in the orgy are my friends Shantel, Chelsea, Dan, Tyler, and Shalaya

 

[sr71plt]

First or third should work fine. I'd find first person more interesting, but either could be done well if felt emotion was emphasized over clinical telling.

 

[Bebeslut]

Do gangbangs qualify?
I once wrote a gangbang story with two narrators, both speaking in first person.

 

[Weird Harold]

Do gangbangs qualify?
I once wrote a gangbang story with two narrators, both speaking in first person.

Don't seee why gangbangs wouldn't count.

Using two first person POVs would tend to be confusing; confusing a character and letting the reader see that confusion isn't necessarily a Bad Thing but confusing the reader without a good reason usually is a bad thing.

An editor once chastised be for a scene being confusing. I told her that was exactly what I was trying for; the character narrating couldn't keeptrack of who was talking/acting and so couldn't possibly report the conversation/activity accurately.

 

[sr71plt]

If you carefully sectionalize the narrators, looking at a gangbang from two different perspectives could be quite effective and interesting.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

If you carefully sectionalize the narrators, looking at a gangbang from two different perspectives could be quite effective and interesting.

Got any links?

 

[Bebeslut]

If you carefully sectionalize the narrators, looking at a gangbang from two different perspectives could be quite effective and interesting.

That's exactly what I did. As for effective and interesting, somebody else has to be the judge.

 

[sr71plt]

Got any links?

Not on gangbang per se, but my writing partner, Sabb, and I specialize in this writing style (the traded perspectives of events). Pick anything listed on Shabbu's list.

We could do it for a gangbang too as easily as we do it for anything else.

 

[SevenSquared]

The difference between writing an orgy and a gangbang is that in the former there is usually a lot more going on at any one time. This makes it trickier (although maybe more interesting/different) to write it in the first person.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

One thing that I've found is that the larger the orgy, the harder it gets. A threesome or smaller gang-bang, or wife-swapping are easier, whereas a massive free-for-all can be trickier. I think that some of my older orgies were a bit too clinical, though I hope that when I get back into the swing of it, they will be a lot better.

 

[jeninflorida]

orgy's are hard to write, at least for me. so many characters....so many hands....so many mouths to feed

If you carefully sectionalize the narrators, looking at a gangbang from two different perspectives could be quite effective and interesting.

 

[LucyH]

I might try to simplify things by writing it from the POV of a single protagonist. A person can only pay attention to a limited number of things, and there's no need to write about things that don't really register with the protagonist. If you're having trouble explaining who is doing what in which order, just because of the sheer volume of information, maybe there's stuff you could gloss over. Even with just other 2 people, if one of them is being really distracting, sometimes it's possible lose track of what the other one is doing.

 

[Soiled_Raven]

As in any story, it should be told from the viewpoint of the main character(s) and her/his observations, thoughts and actions.

"Carrie looked to her right and gasped as she saw Ralph take Peter's penis into his mouth, but as she was about to laugh, Belinda approached and sat on her face. All around her she heard groans, moans and laughter as people came and went . . ."

 

[BuckyDuckman]

First of all - tell the story. That's key. It's not an orgy without reason or purpose. It's John's first orgy and a dream come true. It's Pete, being concerned about a streak of jealousy interferring with a good time It's Gretchen's secret pining to feel John's long prick deep inside her bald pussy. It's Mary, who has always been curious about being with another woman, but never had the gumption to just do it. If there's not a story going on, then what's the point?

From there, it's a roving camera view. How Mary and Gretchen slipped into a 69 position may not be as important as showing them doing it.

One thing I've learned from writing multiple partner scenes from various viewpoints - you HAVE to give each character/particpant a unique body type. It makes it MUCH easier to keep track of who is putting what, where. For example:

* John's long, thin prick
* Pete's fat, veiny rod
* Gretchen's shaved, bald pussy
* Mary's "Marge Simpson" dyed blue patch of fluff

Now the examples:

Sprawled on her back, Mary's vision was filled with Gretchen's bare pussy. It was their first taste of pussy and Gretchen was beating her to it. She squirmed beneath Gretchen's tongue as she raised her head to that shaved snatch for her first taste. Even the long, thin prick sliding in and out of that shaved twat didn't bother her.

Or:

I watched Pete as John splayed her legs, crawled between them, and pressed his face against that bright blue snatch. Pete squirmed, but his hand never left that fat rod of his. I know he was the jealous type, but it looked to me as if lust had conquered all. Straddling him, I lowered my freshly shaved pussy over that big, thick prick.