Blind_Justice
Universe builder
- Joined
- Jul 5, 2012
- Posts
- 3,175
You forgot the "Oh God, oh gawd, omigoshI'mcummiiiiiiiiiiiiing" inflation.This. I love real dialogue, even when it’s a digression. Instantly puts a story above the pack.
And it sure as hell beats the normal standard of dialogue, which often goes something like:
“I think you are sexy.”
“I think you are sexy also.”
“I want to do the sex with you.”
“You want to do the sex with me?”
“I am doing the sex with you and it’s so sexy. Oooo!”
“Yes baby, we are doing the sex with our sexy parts and it’s so sexy!”