how do you like these poems?

[RitsE]

You bite my lips
I hold your hips
I bet you thought
you could never do it like this

Beads of sweat
My dark silhouette
I like the taste
You watch my face
My eyes and parted lips
induces your quickened pace

Slave of desire
Our fornication ignites a fire
Soft or mean
my realm for you outperforms
any late night screen

Your favourite dish
And you, my love?
My biggest fetish

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Hello and welcome. I think the fourth line should be 'ever'; not 'never'.

 

[Piscator]

Hello and welcome. I think the fourth line should be 'ever'; not 'never'.

Ditto
and in last line of 2nd stanza "induces' should be "induce"