tenyari
Naked Fool
- Joined
- Aug 13, 2002
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I've done it.Not really an erotica thing I guess.I don't think I've ever killed off a character. I considered it once, but it was too much of a downer.
A story not here but elsewhere, I ended the main story in a drive-by shooting. My main protagonist lost an eye, a major cast member was killed, and everyone in the 'shooter' car died when my protagonist shot back, hitting the driver and causing them to crash.
I write stories first, and then they have erotic elements.
- Despite that the story was very erotic throughout, all the way up to the sudden moment when they get shot at. Itself a scene I had been hinting at in some buildup as they kept having to deal with a pack of boys running around with Confederate flags and hassling them at various points in the story. So while it was sudden, I had put in hints that something was coming. But I'd not planned that something to be so extreme until near the end.
It's still more mild than some of what I grew up dealing with from those types.
I don't plan on doing it again. But I can easily see some characters 'not making it' in two inwork series I have been working on. My current work though, my Alien Girl stories - are purposefully setting a lighter tone. So while I have an 'attempted kidnapping' scene planned for it, I'm going to use that scene to intentionally show a different light to things and have everyone, even the "bad guys", make it out OK.