How about a man having sex with a woman
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I'm not sure what kind of story you'd make out of this. This is a snippet, not a story. The questions that would have to be answered are:
1. Why don't they have sex?
2. Where does this story go?
3. How do the characters change or what do they learn as the story moves on toward the ending?
These are the same questions I would ask of any story, Lit or otherwise.
Exactly what did you have in mind, Atikaya?
1. Why don't they have sex?
2. Where does this story go?
3. How do the characters change or what do they learn as the story moves on toward the ending?
These are the same questions I would ask of any story, Lit or otherwise.
Exactly what did you have in mind, Atikaya?
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so he do only smal tach with her in nudeJenny_Jackson said:
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yes, but the major elements of the story are still missing. What we have so far is three or four well-worded sentences that haven't gone any place other than to have the couple rolling around naked. That still isn't a story.aymanmosstfa said:
Is there a reason they don't have sex? He was casterated in an accident? Some religeous thing? She's saving herself for the boyfriend she has behind her hubby's back?
Ideas people.
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rydia57 said:Is it kinda like that spooning position? I've had a guy rub himself against me until I had an orgasm... ooooh it was totally awesome!
Absolutely, that's the idea. They can't have sexual intercourse because at birth she has a rare condition because she was a premature baby, and had jaundice.
Later on, she recovered but because she lived in an traditional environment , never touched herself, saving herself for her husband. When her husband found out on the wedding night that she didn't have a functioning vagina he was really p#ssed because he too was saving himself.
But because he felt honor bound and loved her he thought he might as well make the best out of a bad situation...
This story is already sounding intriguing...
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Aww, and I was hoping for my situation, which is not very erotic but it's an interesting tale.Atikaya said:
I thought you meant plain dry humping or hand touching (breasts, breasts, and more breasts).
Suppose the guy does not like sex at all (for the purposes of the story I would exadurate this point) because of a traumatic event in childhood or some such reason.
Maybe he's just afraid of even the slightest chance of getting a disease or the chance a child will be born and he doesn't feel like he can take proper care of a child.
Perhaps he's just afraid of rejection.
Being an adult virgin, maybe no experience means he can't perform well.
Maybe he fears he won't be able to get it up at the last minute, as he's used to fantasy women when masturbating.
Maybe he feels his partner won't live up to his fantasies, and he will be stuck with her for the rest of his life.
If it's that kind of story, I would make it the harem kind, chock full of voyeuristic naked lesbian scenes.
Actually this would bring in a good storyline, featuring loads of love slaves.
Come on, give me something else to masturbate to.
Throw in some mild MILF inscest too.
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Fantasies_only said:
Incest.
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I think both spellings are correct, like color and coulor.Hallowed Eve said:
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. LOLFantasies_only said:
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Fantasies_only said:
Last time someone corrected you, you said it was a typo and ranted at them for making a mistake.
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P.S.
Colour.
Colour.
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Ummm... I don't think this makes sense. She was born premature with a liver malfunction so the twat don't work? I'm having a hard time with this.Atikaya said:
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No, no, Jenny the coulor of her inscest was jaundiced and so her vegina duzn't werk.
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I appolgized for that a long time ago.Hallowed Eve said:Last time someone corrected you, you said it was a typo and ranted at them for making a mistake.
If you mean just recently, I did not rant.
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Ha-haAthena_e19 said:
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coulor pictures, videos and albumsHallowed Eve said:
Coulor is a town in French Guiana. - Wikipedia
It's an honest mistake people would confuse the two.
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Athena_e19 said:
*coke spew*
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Fantasies_only said:
do what?????
Someone would honestly confuse the name of a town, and a word for a hue????
Dear god, make the stupid people shut up.
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By the way, that would make sense if the English (British) word came from France.Hallowed Eve said:
The "our" ending, like flour (pronounced flew-er), is French.
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I realize this is fiction, but there has to be some element of belivability. This is like saying "I drove to the park, so the TV doesn't work." There's a cause and effect problem I'm just not getting here.Athena_e19 said:
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Now there's an idea!Atikaya said:
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*sigh* Amazing, isn't it? Unfortunately, at some point they become so stupid they have no clue how dumb they really are- and then there's no end to their blather. I haven't quite decided yet is this particular one is guilty-pleasure amusing or shake-your-head tragic.
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Jenny_Jackson said:
Well, you might not know this. When a premature baby is born, most come with severe complications. In this instance, our scenerio and maybe a real life incident, we are saying that the vaginal tissue did not form properly in so far as the baby was premature and that a blockage occurred but was never noticed by the woman or her relatives. She might have been able to diagnose for herself that she didn't have a functional vagina if she touched herself or let herself be touched i.e. with the use of her finger but because of her strict upbringing and prudishness when it comes to touching herself - she never knew of her own problem.
The guy and her find out on the wedding night and both are shattered but decide that they can still love each other in other ways and yes, dry humping comes into this because they guy used to dry hump during his formative years as a teenager as a means of getting off, capich?
