hot to approach the sex in my story

[king nothing]

Hey everybody:

This is my first posting on any of the boards but I have written and submitted a few stories. I have a question and would appreciate any opinions or advice that anyone might have for me. I am doing a brother/sister incest story about a guy who has had feelings for his sister for a long time and done things to try to see her naked, spied on her with guys, imagined that girls he was with were actually his sister etc etc. Anyways after an eternity of wanting her he finally gets his chance with her after she gets pregnant by some guy who takes off after he gets her preganant. My question: Is having the first real sex scene of the story being pregnant sex going to severely limit the audience that enjoys the story and be a turn off for a lot of readers? Thanks for any input that you have!

KN

 

[cantdog]

I have no idea. Hundreds of thousands read these. Surely someone will appreciate a well-written story, no matter what the plot or situation.

 

[Guest]

Originally poasted by king nothin
Hey iverboady:

This' ma first poastin oan eny ay the boards but Ah hav written an submitted a few stoaries. Ah hav a question an woud appreciate eny opinions or advice thit enyone might hav fer me. Ah'm doin a broathir/seister incest stoary aboot a laddie whoa has hud feelings fer ehis seister fer a loang time an done things te try te see her naked, spied oan her wi boays, imagined thit lassies eh wis wi wir actually ehis seister etc etc. Enyways efter an eternity ay wantin her eh finally gets ehis chance wi her efter she gits preagnant by some cunt whoa takes oaf efter eh gits her preaganant. Ma question: Is havin the first reeal shag scene ay the stoary bein preagnant fuck goin te severely limit the audience thit enjoays the stoary an be a turn oaf fer a loat ay readers? Ta fer eny input thit ye hav!

KN

 

[Guest]

Somebody's obviously bored.

Hi King Nothing!

I don't have any kind of answer re. your query, partly because I've never written anything involving incest and/or pregnancy, but, as Cant said, just write it well and I'm sure there are plenty out there who would appreciate it.

Lou

 

[gauchecritic]

Actually King you may have hit on a very appealing idea there. For my incest stories I got quite a few responses regarding boys making their mother/aunt/sister pregnant. So starting with her pregnant may well tip the balance on to clickback or not.

I'm curious as to what stage of pregnancy she will be at as there isn't a specific category for pregnant sex on Lit but there are quite a few picture sites that include it.

It would probably be a good idea to mention the fact in a pre-blurb which could attract otherwise incest reluctant readers, and warn those whom it would put off.

I imagine that those who are attracted to pregnant sex find a swollen belly and breasts to be the turn on and like-as-not the lactation too.

Something to think about.

Gauche

 

[king nothing]

Hey thanks for the suggestions. I never thougt about a blurb before the story. That could do the trick. I was thinking about making it later in the pregnancy where she might already be lactating so I can kill the pregnancy and lactation birds both with one stone. Thanks for the help

KN

 

[Nemasis Enforcer]

I've done a couple of Incest stories, and they always get more views and votes then any other subject I find...

In some of the stories I have got one of the femails pregnant and it didn't seem to detract from the views or votes and I actually often got comments that viewers wanted to read more about the pregnancy and subsiquent sex...

Lactating, that will only add to your story, as added with the incest this is alot of Lit readers fantasy it seems from my own feedback.

Good luck

 

[Wyatt]

you will find that whatever you write it will find an audience. Some of the audience will love you and send you feedback that makes you feel like a god. Other feedback is really very horrid and ruins your day. Then after the tenth story you've written even the shitty feedback just makes you shrug. Write what you want but write it with a passion and do your best to make it a good read and the majority of people will be pleased to have a new writer on lit.