Hey guys, I need help

[Lolita30]

I have had this story in my head for years now; I want to put it into words but it's like i'm scared how the readers would view it you know? It's a celebrity fan fic about a former child actor who gets a new personal assistant. In the media, he's portrayed as an innocent, articulate person but in reality he's a sexually charged 19 year old. That's as far as my thought as I got; if anyone got any ideas as to how I can develop this story, make it hot that would be great!

Thanks for reading and have a nice day!

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Tell your story.

Then let readers view it as they well.

Otherwise you're a typist, not a writer.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[jomar]

Hi Lolita30...what rumple said. You can also get a volunteer editor to help you out. Good luck.

 

[TheeGoatPig]

Just write. Write the story in your head. Write any story that comes to you. Even if you never finish anything just write. Don't be surprised if you finish a different story than you started. It happens to all of us. Just continue to write.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Lolita, this is how it works. You come up with an idea. If you can't come up with an idea, there is a forum of story ideas.

Next you sit down and write the story, develop the characters, engage the plot and add tons of useless discription.

Then you go the the Editor's Forum and ask for an editor. That takes a while and, of course, your story is perfect, so you submit it to Lit anyway.

Now the waiting begins. If you bothered to look at the FAQS you would know how long it takes from submission to post. But you don't so you go to the story feedback forum and post a thread asking.

Eventually, you get your story back rejected -"For no reason" that you can imagine. So you go back to the Feeback Forum and post a whine in there.

Two or three writers will read your story and comment about the "Underaged Animal Sex," complete lack of capitalization, POV swapping in the same sentence, the 47 periods you've used in your ellipsis (which, by the way, only created run-on sentences) and the eleven baby rapes that occur in the story.

Pissed off, you will come in here and whine. You will get good advice, which you will ignore.

Need I go on?

 

[OhMissScarlett]

LOL, Jenny.


Lolita, I think you already have a good idea for what you want to write. You just have to think about the specifics and ask yourself some questions. Is this a romance or a wild ride into the excess of celebrity life or both? Think about your character development and then just let it flow. Getting started writing for the first time isn't easy sometimes, but it sounds like you know what you want to write and I think that's half of the work. Don't worry about what readers will think, write what you like and what you would read. If you worry what people are going to think about your writing, you'll be too cautious and we all know there's no room for caution when you're writing sex.

 

[glynndah]

LOL, Jenny.


Lolita, I think you already have a good idea for what you want to write. You just have to think about the specifics and ask yourself some questions. Is this a romance or a wild ride into the excess of celebrity life or both? Think about your character development and then just let it flow. Getting started writing for the first time isn't easy sometimes, but it sounds like you know what you want to write and I think that's half of the work. Don't worry about what readers will think, write what you like and what you would read. If you worry what people are going to think about your writing, you'll be too cautious and we all know there's no room for caution when you're writing sex.

*nods* She's right. It's on that sign posted by the clubhouse door.--->

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Do you suppose I've been spending too much time reviewing in the feedback forum??

 

[glynndah]

Do you suppose I've been spending too much time reviewing in the feedback forum??

Oh, no! I was just trying to figure out where I'd gone wrong. *takes out notebook and checks off the steps* I did things in the wrong order and I skipped the step about going to the Feedback Forum. *sigh* I'll never get this right. On the bright side, I did have my first feedback about taking the Lord's name in vain, so perhaps it's not totally hopeless.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Oh, no! I was just trying to figure out where I'd gone wrong. *takes out notebook and checks off the steps* I did things in the wrong order and I skipped the step about going to the Feedback Forum. *sigh* I'll never get this right. On the bright side, I did have my first feedback about taking the Lord's name in vain, so perhaps it's not totally hopeless.

Glynndah, I love you, you know

 

[glynndah]

Glynndah, I love you, you know

*blushes* Thank you.

 

[Lolita30]

thanks for help!