Renagade21
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hey look at my story and tell me what you all think of it and e-mail me the responses and tell where to go with it ok?? thank you
hey go see my stroy and tell me what you all think of it
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bluntforcemama
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Here it is: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=8856
It's called "The Story," I went searching for it, and VIOLA! Although, I haven't read it yet... have to go to Chem lab and blow some stuff up. Go THERMODYNAMICS!
It's called "The Story," I went searching for it, and VIOLA! Although, I haven't read it yet... have to go to Chem lab and blow some stuff up. Go THERMODYNAMICS!
bluntforcemama
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Alright, I checked it out, it's pretty hot. The sex scenes are descriptive enough to get me off... 
I hope you don't mind me saying, but you could use a little more punctuation. You know, things like quotation marks and commas, but overall, I think you're on your way to becoming an excellent author. Keep it up, dear.
I hope you don't mind me saying, but you could use a little more punctuation. You know, things like quotation marks and commas, but overall, I think you're on your way to becoming an excellent author. Keep it up, dear.
Renagade21
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I am so sorry to all you guys
thank you for all your replies. yes i do need help on my punctuation and all that tenchinal stuff, bu i write i don't do good with all that stuff but i will sumbit more erotic writings in the future so keep watching and thank you miss mist, i hope to hear from you soon as well. and agian thank you one and all.
thank you for all your replies. yes i do need help on my punctuation and all that tenchinal stuff, bu i write i don't do good with all that stuff but i will sumbit more erotic writings in the future so keep watching and thank you miss mist, i hope to hear from you soon as well. and agian thank you one and all.
KillerMuffin
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R, if you have trouble with "all that technical stuff" and want to fix it prior to submitting it so you don't get all of those "gee, I liked your story but you know you mispelled..." check out the volunteer editor program. Literotica has people who'll help with that stuff. Click here to go pick out an editor. Sometimes it's nice to ask first, before sending your story.
I hate it when they tell me I misspell ya'll. Honestly. Of COURSE I misspell ya'll. I misuse ya'll. Who ever heard of consistently saying howdy to a friggin boat??
[Edited by KillerMuffin on 02-23-2001 at 09:19 AM]
I hate it when they tell me I misspell ya'll. Honestly. Of COURSE I misspell ya'll. I misuse ya'll. Who ever heard of consistently saying howdy to a friggin boat??
[Edited by KillerMuffin on 02-23-2001 at 09:19 AM]
Youse guys
You don't misspell y'all. You just don't know how to say it properly. Come to mah house and we'll drink some longnecks and teach y'all how to speak. Texans use the term to express both singular and plural (go figure), but feel free to bring StudMuffin and the young'ns with you. If'n y'all like, we'll mount a gun rack in the pickup while y'all'r here.
Speaking of boats, that little creek that rambles through the south forty we call a bow (but that ain't the opposite of stern).
KillerMuffin said:
You don't misspell y'all. You just don't know how to say it properly. Come to mah house and we'll drink some longnecks and teach y'all how to speak. Texans use the term to express both singular and plural (go figure), but feel free to bring StudMuffin and the young'ns with you. If'n y'all like, we'll mount a gun rack in the pickup while y'all'r here.
Speaking of boats, that little creek that rambles through the south forty we call a bow (but that ain't the opposite of stern).
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