hey all i am new here and needed some help!would be glad for inputs and ideas.thanks.

[lacseeker]

hey all,
i met a person on line and some how we have gotten really intersted in each other.the irony of it however is that we live on different continents and though we plan to meet it wont be happening for atleast 6 months.any ways her birhtday is coming up and i was thinking what to do and suddnely i got an idea of writing her a letter..as her birhtday gift.any ways the letter is posted below and i just wanted to know if it works and if its any good.never done any writing of this sort before ...so your feedback will be appreciated.thanks in advance to all those people who read it and bother to reply.

 

[Penelope Street]

Have you considered writing a poem instead?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

This is beyond comment. This is just...Never mind

 

[elfin_odalisque]

All things being equal, perhaps roses and chocolates would be better.

 

[_Lynn_]

This is beyond comment. This is just...Never mind

I think........Yea, what she said.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I think your heart in the right place...I'd splurge on flowers and chocolate.

 

[rachlou]

I think a Hallmark moment is perhaps better than

the world is quite...

.

She'll love the flowers you're now going to think about sending.