Hen party delights

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I have it in mind to describe the goings-on of a close group of women friends - possibly four to six in total - some married, others single, who all end up having sex via different "routes" on the night of the bride's (one of their number) hen party. Their back stories would be described - some would be frustrated sexually, others merely "out for a drink and a night with the girls". Perhaps one would be an ultra-loyal, loving wife whose fate is to be dragged into a dark alley when trying to get home after the party on this dark, rainy night... and ends up loving every minute.

I'm trying to garner ideas for the other "routes" that are taken. Any suggestions very welcome but the major idea is that this isn't done explicitly, i.e. in full public view such that everyone knows. Each girl has her "time" arrive somehow without the others being aware.
 
Daphne can't stop staring at the two women at the bar. They're clearly lovers having an increasingly bitter argument - that ends with one storming out. Against her better instincts, Daphne (married with kids) chooses that moment to go to the bar, and asks the lesbian if she'd like a drink. The lesbian turns and says, "I'd like a fuck," clearly expecting Daphne to take a hint and fuck off, but Daphne dares to say, "Okay." One minute later, they're in a bathroom stall together, kissing, the lesbian's fingers in Daphne's pants, rubbing her clit until she comes loudly.
 
Always the bridesmaid, never the bride, Amanda thought, as she handed the stripper his wages for the night.
"You OK?" he asked.
"Yeah..." she said.
"You know this is the third hen party that you hire me as a stripper for."
"Well you dance well, and...." she blushed, "You're easy on the eyes."
"I danced for you tonight you know, i think you're the prettiest of them all."
 
Later that night, while Genevieve the bride was bent over puking her guts out into the bar toilet - damn the whiskey and tequila! - and the maid of honor Amanda was valiantly holding Genevieve's hair back, 36-year-old Teresa wandered outside to get some fresh air. At her age, she was smart enough to know not to mix different types of hard liquor. Besides, the last thing she wanted was to go home to her husband of 8 years smelling like a distillery.

As she passed by the alley, she heard a man crying. He appeared to be in his mid-twenties, about 10 years her junior. Despite his red eyes and sorrowful look, she couldn't help but notice he was very cute, a 'smoke show', as the younger women these days were fond of saying.

"Hi, I'm Teresa", she offered, "are you feeling OK?"

He looked up at her with tear-filled eyes and explained, "I'm Derick," he replied, "my groomsmen and I were out for my stag do, but the maid of honor just sent a text and photo proving my fiancée cheated on me with a stripper at her hen party! Angelica was my world, I don't know what to do!"

A wicked smile crossed Teresa's face, and she surreptitiously undid the top two buttons of her silk blouse to show some tempting cleavage. Pulling the handsome young man to his feet, she put her arms around him and kissed him deeply; his crying immediately ceased, and she felt his firm hands reach around and grasp her ass, pulling her crotch into his.

Breaking off the kiss, Teresa murmured, "I'll tell you what, Derick. You worry about cancelling your wedding tomorrow, tonight I'll be handing your revenge.”
 
After the bride is done puking her guts out into the bar toilet and the maid of honor leaves, the bride sits alone for a bit to let her head clear. That's when she notices a hole in the stall wall - the wall adjacent to the men's room. She hears a light tapping - three short taps, and then three more. Just for fun she taps three times, then three times more in response. She hears the sound of a zipper, and an erect 7" cock appears through what is now a glory hole. While satisfying, her fiancé's cock is not as long or thick, so she fancies she'll just have a quick suck on the tip of this anonymous meat to compare....
 
How about the bride-to-be gets a phone call from fiancé and has to go outside to hear it because of the racket. There, she realises he has "pocket dialled" her accidentally and she can hear sex sounds at the other end. In tears, she attempts to rush back inside to seek sympathy from her pals. She slips and falls, tearing her dress... and is helped to her feet, breasts bared, by this tall, handsome stranger...
 
I've always liked the idea of several sub-tales within a story. This is a good one and would take a special writer to achieve it.

For my contribution to the pile, I'm suggesting that one of the women has a grudge against one of the others and has arranged (over to the author to contrive how!) for the latter's hubby to come and fuck her somewhere out of the limelight (ditto!) while wifey is sipping at her bacardi, all unknowing.
 
I've always liked the idea of several sub-tales within a story. This is a good one and would take a special writer to achieve it.

For my contribution to the pile, I'm suggesting that one of the women has a grudge against one of the others and has arranged (over to the author to contrive how!) for the latter's hubby to come and fuck her somewhere out of the limelight (ditto!) while wifey is sipping at her bacardi, all unknowing.
Jealousy! Payback! I LOVE it!
 
I've always liked the idea of several sub-tales within a story. This is a good one and would take a special writer to achieve it.

For my contribution to the pile, I'm suggesting that one of the women has a grudge against one of the others and has arranged (over to the author to contrive how!) for the latter's hubby to come and fuck her somewhere out of the limelight (ditto!) while wifey is sipping at her bacardi, all unknowing.

Absolutely. A kind of mini-Canterbury Tales! I like your grudge idea... would make for a stand-alone in its own right but is also good here as a "motive".
 
Could make this an anthology event. Just need to establish the scene and the bride, and let authors contribute side-tales in whatever categories they like...
 
as lomg as no cocks are fighting in this chicken coop...
 
I have story from several years back addressing this theme, but following the bride-to-be for the evening. Fallon's Final Fling. I was inspired by the movie "Bridesmaids", so it's a bit snarky. Not my best work, I'm afraid, though I had fun writing it if anyone wants to check it out.
 
A further thought, just as a set-up: maybe this happens on a Friday or Saturday night when it's the habit of a pair of predatory lesbians to go out "hunting". They too are visiting this venue and target one of the women for being abducted to the car park and an interesting n/c experience in the back of their van.
 
A further thought, just as a set-up: maybe this happens on a Friday or Saturday night when it's the habit of a pair of predatory lesbians to go out "hunting". They too are visiting this venue and target one of the women for being abducted to the car park and an interesting n/c experience in the back of their van.
This thread is creating quite the omnibus, so to speak. Multiple interwoven story threads along the lines of "Love, Actually", "Three Weddings And A Funeral", or even "Pulp Fiction" and I am HERE for it!!!!!
 
Speaking of hen nights or Bachelorette parties. Have you ever seen those dancing bear videos? With the women blowing the strippers while all the other women clap and cheer? What exactly do you call that? I mean it’s obviously exhibitionism while also being voyeurism, but the clapping and cheering? Does this have a classification?

I just really want to know what this kink is.
 
Speaking of hen nights or Bachelorette parties. Have you ever seen those dancing bear videos? With the women blowing the strippers while all the other women clap and cheer? What exactly do you call that? I mean it’s obviously exhibitionism while also being voyeurism, but the clapping and cheering? Does this have a classification?

I just really want to know what this kink is.

Peer pressure/mob instinct? You know, just like all the ad-men are taught these days about what drives the mass of morons constituting "society"? Not really a "kink", I know, but then we eroticists can't have everything...

If you need any further evidence for this mentality, just check out your TV schedules for an average Saturday night...
 
I am talking about the exact scenario of a woman having sex with a stripper, usually at a Bachelorette party, while all the other women cheer her on. What would that be categorized as? That's all I want to know. The image of a woman getting savagely fucked while all her female friends/ family cheer her on is hot.
 
I am talking about the exact scenario of a woman having sex with a stripper, usually at a Bachelorette party, while all the other women cheer her on. What would that be categorized as? That's all I want to know. The image of a woman getting savagely fucked while all her female friends/ family cheer her on is hot.
There's no specific phrase that I know of to describe that phenomenon, other than maybe "a last fling", or something like "single whore, just once more", LOL!
 
Speaking of hen nights or Bachelorette parties. Have you ever seen those dancing bear videos? With the women blowing the strippers while all the other women clap and cheer? What exactly do you call that? I mean it’s obviously exhibitionism while also being voyeurism, but the clapping and cheering? Does this have a classification?

I just really want to know what this kink is.
It's not a kink. It's women enjoying themselves. Letting their hair down in an environment where they dont have judgemental men disapproving.

If a guy cops a feel with a female stripper, nobody cares. If a woman does, it has to be a kink?
 
an ultra-loyal, loving wife whose fate is to be dragged into a dark alley when trying to get home after the party on this dark, rainy night... and ends up loving every minute.
I've been on several hen nights. On not a single one has getting raped up an alley figured on anyone's list of must-haves.
PLEASE don't promote rape as a good thing.

Trust me. Being out at night as a woman is very different to being a man because we have to be constantly aware of ewnvironment, who's around, how drunk we are, how drunk they are... You don't have to do a risk assessment every time you turn a corner.

Hen nights are fun. Many times everyone goes out with the intention of getting laid, or at the very least getting the bride laid. Dont spoil it by adding rape in there.
 
It's not a kink. It's women enjoying themselves. Letting their hair down in an environment where they dont have judgemental men disapproving.

If a guy cops a feel with a female stripper, nobody cares. If a woman does, it has to be a kink?
I am specifically talking about the dancing bear stripper videos where women are having oral or full intercourse in front of a crowd of women who are cheering them on. That is a little more than women letting their hair down. It's a mixture of exhibitionism and voyeurism and it is definitely a kink.

Or are you saying that this is normal behavior with women with male strippers? Because if a guy acted that way in a strip club, he'd wake up in the parking lot with a concussion. You do not touch the dancers!
 
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