Help with new story!!!!

[bobcleme]

Would like to hear from someone about an idea for a new story I like to see, or help me, to write it.....It's interracial and takes place back in the 40's, during World War Two. It's based on an actual happening............Thanks!!!

Thanks, all of you for your replies. The facts are this:

1. During World War Two, my father was stationed out on the West Coast while we live back in Alabama; we hadn't seen him in almost two years.

2. Although no one in these stories is to be under 18, I was but for the story I could be 18.

3. We'd been given a private compartment and it would take us three days to travel to our destination.

4. Mom was a very traditional southern woman, very religious and very beautiful in her early 30's. Having spied on them we they were together in bed. Mom was a very passionate woman, she liked sex.

5. On the train we met some very young, late teens, early 20's, black sailors who had just got out of basic and were traveling to the west coast also. Mom was very upset because I'd struck up a conversation with them. She didn't like "Niggers" as she called them.

6. One things lead up to another and Mom ended up in the lower berth of our compartment with several of the young blacks while I was supposedly asleep in the upper. Of course I was able to observe in the mirrors on the paneled walls all the action and believe me it was hot and heavy. Each of these young blacks was hung, huge and gave Mom the best sex she'd ever had. It lasted each night during the 3 day trip after I was supposed to be asleep.

There, does that help?

 

[jakelyon]

Here's one idea

This is a very interesting scenario. Here is my first pass at an outline:


How about the woman is wealthy about 25 or so, married for less than a year. Her husband is away fighting in the war. It is 1944 so he has been gone for a year already. Her father hires a middle aged black man to help around her large estate/farm. He is a jack of all trades type of guy. They develop a warm friendship.

Things go to the next level when she watches him masturbate one day in the barn. She is incredibly horny then but can break through her social barriers and marriage vows to do anything about. Then the man is outside raking leaves when he sees her masturbating on her bed one afternoon. Maybe she means for him to see??

Then they begin a slow dance of innuendo, bluff, and lust that ends up with them fucking each other’s brains out until her husband shows up again. Does he catch them, join them, watch them?? Is he angry, turned on, vengeful??

In the end she must resolve her conflict between her lust, love for her husband, and the morals of the day to choose the right path.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

originally posted by jakelyon
Then they begin a slow dance of innuendo, bluff, and lust that ends up with them fucking each other’s brains out until her husband shows up again. Does he catch them, join them, watch them?? Is he angry, turned on, vengeful??

I really doubt, that the guy would be turned on. I guess, he would get mad. I mean, he just risked his life in the War, he saw many of his friends die. And maybe he lost an arm, too. It was a very hard time. But all the time, he thought about his loving wife at home, and how she waited for his return.

But now, he has to find out that she cheats on him ....

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Would like to hear from someone about an idea for a new story I like to see, or help me, to write it.....It's interracial and takes place back in the 40's, during World War Two. It's based on an actual happening............Thanks!!!

if you want something based on something that happenned, you might want to say what that was.

Jake not a bad idea you have going there. Although I would go for the easiest route and have the husband be killed in the war. Then you can have the widow deal with her additional guilt/sorrow etc.

 

[MissTaken]

Would like to hear from someone about an idea for a new story I like to see, or help me, to write it.....It's interracial and takes place back in the 40's, during World War Two. It's based on an actual happening............Thanks!!!

Bob,
Feel free to share the details, but please, remember not to mention anyone who is under the age of 18.
Thanks!
MissT
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[Chicklet]

If you haven't already, I would suggest starting a similar thread in the Author's Hangout - I'm sure they'd like to help, too.

 

[BlackSnake]

That was a very bad time to be black in America. Make the woman a South African, her companions killed by Warlords under the control of the Germans. "That's for all you history buffs"

She is fearful, and hungry. She finds a nomatic family and their animals: camels, goats, horses, etc... "again for the history buffs"

She comes a little too close and is spotted by one of the wifes. The husband mounts his camel and chances her down. His intent is to kill her, but her torn clothing and sexy exposure stops him from driving his spear through her pounding heart.

He bounds her wrists and drags her behind his camel to his temporary camp setup by his three wives....

 

[Guest]

if you want something based on something that happenned, you might want to say what that was.

I was just thinking that, but you beat me to saying it. Before people write up story lines, you should tell us what you want in your "real" story Bob.

 

[BlackSnake]

I was just thinking that, but you beat me to saying it. Before people write up story lines, you should tell us what you want in your "real" story Bob.

else...Bob, you will end up with replies like mine.

 

[Diane Marie]

In my opinion you have the foundation for a very good story, one that could be developed into a novel. Perhaps an historical novel is much more then you’d like to tackle for your first story. Lots of boring research and interviews with people who lived during that era. If any of you have any considerations about ever doing a novel based on that period of time. I’d suggest doing the interviews now, it won’t be long before what remains of that generation has passed.

I like the idea of making your heroine a young rich girl, early twenties, finishing school and all those good little bits of the life style of the rich and famous. I’d make her very patriotic, contributing to the war effort by working in a factory producing something war related. Of course working as such would be below her station. I could see some very good material in a novel based on her inner conflicts, meeting women below her station, working with them, becoming friends with them. Her realization the when all was said and done there was no real differences between them. Not to mention some very interesting material about working and playing almost exclusively with other women. Maybe we could make her lover a black woman. At the very least we could have one lesbian scene.

I’d have her husband come from the same background, a little older maybe. A Jack Kennedy type in his patriotism, giving up the protection of his station to actually fight in the war. I’d make him handsome, very debonair, well educated, and successful in his own right. As far as a lover, I’d make him fair but I would not make him a great lover, I’d reserve that for the black man.

As far as their relationship, it could be a war romance. Short courtship, then marriage shortly before he was shipped overseas. Those marriages were very common, partly because of the uncertainty of the times and partly because of the morals at that time period. I’d give her a mental longing for her husband, for his love, but I’d give her also a longing for sex, with him but also apart from him. I think I’d play up her longing for sex in opposition to her moral belief that sex outside of marriage was wrong. I’d further have her and her husband having sex before marriage. The feelings of guilt she had because of that being the bigger of the reasons she married him, love yes but how can you really be in love when you hardly know someone.

I think I’d make her a New Englander, family money with a long family history of wealth, his the same. Her family would be in the vain of the Kennedy liberals so prevalent in the East. Typically that is I’m for equal rights, I believe in helping the poor, just do so in someone else’s backyard. So I don’t have everyone jumping down my throat, I have great respect for both Jack and Bobbie Kennedy, but I did grow up in Greenwich, Connecticut. I assure you that attitude is-as long as it’s in someone else’s backyard. Her father being a liberal hires the black man, mind you the black man is college educated, but the job is some kind of menial labor. Can you imagine the conflict created when the father finds out where his liberalism leads. I love to nail hypocrites to the wall so it just fits me, maybe not your cub of tea.

Rather then make your black man middle aged, I’d make him young. I’d make him a war hero, maybe a fighter pilot, fighter pilots are hot, who was injured while serving in Europe. I would not make the injury to serious, but serious enough to have gotten him out of the service. I’d make him very attractive, but that is just me. I’d make him intelligent, witty, very personable but I’d also have him rebellious against the prejudices that surround him. I think it would suit me if he was college educated but couldn’t find a job that fit his education only because he was black. What kind of soldier he was, is of course based on the historical record. I do know that black pilots flew in WW II, indeed they were very heroic, when I’m not sure.

There is an almost instance attraction between the black man and our heroine. Maybe at first her talking to him was based on her liberalism, shockingly she finds him to be just like any other man. They can then become friends, that growing to a small cinder of physical attraction, later to a full blow affair, both physical and mental. It’s not hard to see this happening, they’re throw together, her contact with other men of her own age is very limited due to the war, most are off fighting. Underlying all of this is the sexual desires of our heroine. I would make this a general desire, not specific to any one person.

Those were times of our sexual awakening, most women would not even admit they had those feelings, at least not for anyone other then their husbands. Unbelievable for a women to actually think about causal sex with just anyone. It was a time of change for us, driven by the war, by the uncertainty of what your life would be like, how it would all end. Women in great numbers working outside of the home, finding a degree of independence they had not had before. Working with and becoming friends with woman outside of their normal circles. I won’t say that was the beginning of feminism, but I do believe that was the time when women in great numbers decided they’d had enough of playing second fiddle. They wanted more for themselves, but even more importantly they wanted more for their daughters.

I tend to agree with NASCARaddicted, when you do introduce the husband into this scenario making it a love triangle, he can’t like the idea. Maybe he could if it wasn’t a black man, but we have to be true to that time period. Black men were not considered equal, even those that were given some respect were not equal. A black man being with a white woman could get him killed. Even in good old liberal New England.

Despite how impossible it would seem some couples rebelled, love won the day, blacks and whites did marry in limited numbers. That could be the direction your story could take, divorce then marriage. Or it could take on something more primal, her unwillingness to give up her relationship with this man, great sex being only one of the reasons. Her struggle to maintain her marriage, while at the same time fulfilling her lustful and intellectual desires for her lover. Please don’t disappoint me and make this all about the size of the black man’s cock!!!!

Of course complicating all of this is the lack of really good birth control. Think of the suspense of her becoming pregnant, then of not knowing if the child would be black or white. How does she deal with that, how does her husband deal with that, how does her lover deal with that.

BlackSnake your so wrong, the very heart of this story is in the prejudices. Prejudices not only against blacks in America at that time, but also against women. Both of my leads are in their own way rebellious against the injustices and prejudices of American society. Injustices and prejudices that to some extend still exist today. If we change the he to a she, we just have one more injustice to over come. My preferences aside, personally I think the story would sell better if it’s kept basically heterosexual, maybe some fragments of lesbian love during the novel.

So many paths for this story to take. Again being true to the times, most ending up in some kind of tragedy. I can see this novel, if well written, being a best seller. Perhaps to be a best seller the erotic parts have to be glossed over, but we all know that don’t we. Maybe it could be made into a movie, anyone have an ideas for the leads?

Damn it, I didn’t want to write a novel, but I just may.