Help with a rejected "NonConsent/Reluctance" story

[deviantmind4u]

I recently submitted a story in the "NonConsent/Reluctance" category that has now been rejected twice. There is nothing specific in the rejection notes. I thought at first the objection was that the woman was too young, so I went back and reworded it to make it clear she was over 18, but it was still rejected. Stories of this kind toy obviously tread a thin line between acceptable and unacceptable, but Im hopeful I can get it posted. Can anyone help me out here?

 

[RonClarkeson]

Same here

My story rejected despite stating the events all after 18th birthday in second paragraph. WTF?

Send me a copy PM or e-mail we can compare notes.

 

[Weird Harold]

Stories of this kind toy obviously tread a thin line between acceptable and unacceptable, but Im hopeful I can get it posted. Can anyone help me out here?

I suspect that you strayed away from the permissal "Rape Fantasy" into the unacceptable "Rapist Fantasy."

It's a very hard line to define; it's more than "the victim has to enjoy it" explanation, but that is part of the distinction. It's also a very subjective distinction and it's Laurel's subjective determination you have to change.

I suspect that the story you want to tell is simply not what Literotica chooses to accept and you'll need to find a different place to post it.

My story rejected despite stating the events all after 18th birthday in second paragraph. WTF?

Are you sure age was the issue that the story was rejected for? Sometimes a simple statement that the characters are all over eighteen isn't enough to avoid a rejection for "underage sex" if all of your descriptions contradict the age disclaimer -- you have to include some reason why your "underage" character looks and acts child-like despite being of legal age.

However, age and "rapist fantasy" aren't the only reasons a story might be rejected and the changes both of you need to make may have nothing to do with the content of the story. More stories are rejected for bad spelling, bad grammar, or formating issues -- like the story converting to a single humongous paragraph -- than are rejected for borderline content.