help on finishing my sequel story

amandate

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I have been trying to finish the sequel story I started but never had the mood and right time to finish it. What I have so far is an outline and a few chapters (3-4 pages at most). I would like to keep the story as close to what I have in mind but it is up for discussion if we could make it better.

This is the sequel story I'm working on:
http://www.literotica.com/s/betel-nut-girl

I would need someone who is very patient and like the story-line of first story I wrote. I could help along the way including comment along the way. Thanks.
 
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