Help me improve my stories (and prove I'm not a robot)

[bumpercars]

I've been writing on Literotica for eight or nine years, and the editor I worked with for much of that time has moved away from editing for the site. I'd love to find a new long-term editor. I write a few NC/R, MC, sci-fi/fantasy stories a year, most with impregnation as a significant theme.

My most recent story got an AI rejection, so in addition to story/grammar feedback I'd like to know what I'm doing that looks robot-ish.

 

[Jim1855]

@bumpercars, your significant theme is right up my alleyway.

I would be very much interested in assisting you.
I have been an Lit editor for about eight or so years (2014 - end of 2018 & ~2022-Now).

 

[_Lynn_]

I've been writing on Literotica for eight or nine years, and the editor I worked with for much of that time has moved away from editing for the site. I'd love to find a new long-term editor. I write a few NC/R, MC, sci-fi/fantasy stories a year, most with impregnation as a significant theme.

My most recent story got an AI rejection, so in addition to story/grammar feedback I'd like to know what I'm doing that looks robot-ish.

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[bumpercars]

@bumpercars, your significant theme is right up my alleyway.

I would be very much interested in assisting you.
I have been an Lit editor for about eight or so years (2014 - end of 2018 & ~2022-Now).

Jim,

Thank you. The story I mentioned here has been published, but if it's alright I will drop you a line when I have written more.

 

[bumpercars]

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