Help me complete a scene

Mal_Bey

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I have a scene I am working on, and I need a bit of inspiration. I suspect I am on the edge of a fun bit of humorous scene-setting, but I cannot find my way into it properly. I've got a working version, but I know if I can go a bit more over the top, it will be so much better.

Setup: POV is a bisexual female college freshman who is extremely sexually frustrated. On a scale of 10, her frustration is an 11 and rising. She needs laid incredibly bad.

The text: Finally, one Wednesday, all my frustration became too much. <snip> First stop was the dining hall for breakfast. Wandering over to the fruit table, all I saw were banana cocks, citrus teats of differing sizes, and peaches with cleavage. Taking some cornflakes, I sat down with <my friends, male and female>. I was so fucking horny. Even watching my friends eat caused pornographic flashes in my mind.

The Question: What sexual imagery does watching her friends eat breakfast inspire to her sex-crazed mind? Feel free to be fairly humorous. I am looking for mildly over the top.
 
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How about...
one friend is eating an egg taco with salsa, salsa then drips onto the friend's hand and then main character takes said friend's hand and licks up the salsa from bottom of finger to the top of finger... Meanwhile second friend bites into an orange and juice squirts onto main character's facial cheek where she quickly and erotically moans, before quickly coming to and realize she briefly "lost herself". Friends just sit and stare at her like, "ummm, you ok???"
 
I would say the easy one is the cereal, with milk "looking like" semen.

I like the "dripping on hand" idea but salsa... Red, chunky bits?

Maybe pancakes all fresh and steamy, the syrup getting poured on and then... BAM! Knife and fork going in pulls her out of the fantasy.
 
Susan picked up the halved peach, and she ran her tongue up the slit where the pit had been, like licking pussy, teasing me. This probably wasn't on purpose, but with her deviant thinking, she might be torturing me. Turning my attention away from the pussy show to Charles, he read the paper, my god, he was peeling a banana. I imagined myself kneeling under him as he unsheathed his porcelain, white dick, which curled away from me. Gazing at his face, which was out of focus because all my attention was on his six inviting inches. Turning my attention to my cereal, swimming in a watery cum. Fuck, I need someone right fucking now.
 
I also thought of glasses of milk, white and or chocolate. Tall, thick, tubes filled with creamy "goodness". Hands sliding up and down them, moisture condensing on the outside looking like they're covered with lube.
 
Closing her eyes, the sounds of people masticating their food and slurping their drinks quickly become the frantic shlicking sounds of copulation.
 
... Even watching my friends eat caused pornographic flashes in my mind.
I may be too late to the game, but it seems to me that some detail of how one of the friends is eating might add more sexual impact;

Out of the corner of my eye, I see Susan licking a banana — she see's me watching and winks at me. It's like she can read my mind and knows just how wet her naughty behavior is making me. The tingling between my legs intensifies as I squeeze them tightly together. All I can think about is how good both her lips and that banana would feel right this instant!

Or some such erotic thoughts, etc.
 
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