Help, I need somebody with free time

[Lucifer_Carroll]

I've recently written a Halloween contest entry and it's really hard for me to pinpoint just which category it would belong to. I can describe the overall premise, but I believe what it really needs is some sympathetic lad or lass with some time to kill to look it over and tell me where they think it fits. Especially since the overall tone and themes may have as much affect in where it deserves to go.

Plus, I've just got a decent feeling about this one and want to give it truly every opportunity to do as well as it can instead of throwing it to a category to which the community will not support it.

Anyone who can help me with this deliema will be given the following:

1) One no-penalty Satanic boon
2) A free night with minion vella (or if helper turns out to be vella, free access to the Tatelou clone harem)
3) That gratitude thing I've heard talk about


Seriously though, help would be appreciated. I will email the story to the person/people who agree. Thank you all in advance.

-Lucifer_Carroll

 

[English Lady]

Email it over to me LC Love...I'll PM you my Email address

 

[Lucifer_Carroll]

Email it over to me LC Love...I'll PM you my Email address

Just sent it.

Now name your boon, love.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I'll give it a look if ya need Lc

-Colly

 

[cloudy]

I'll be glad to look it over, too.

 

[Lucifer_Carroll]

Colleen: PMd

and

cloudy: PMd




vella is going to be very sore tonight.


Seriously though, thank you all. You have that piece of my black heart that is gratitude.

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Can I volunteer to be the minion of the free night awarded? Vella's really sick and I suppose I could do this one favor for her.



~lucky

p.s. I'll peek it over for ya, if you still need opinions.

 

[Lucifer_Carroll]

Can I volunteer to be the minion of the free night awarded? Vella's really sick and I suppose I could do this one favor for her.



~lucky

p.s. I'll peek it over for ya, if you still need opinions.

Hmmm...okay, but only if you play nicely with your temporary mistresses.

And PMd.

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Hmmm...okay, but only if you play nicely with your temporary mistresses.

And PMd.

Play nicely?




Doubtful, but no worries, k? They'll walk away satisfied.



~lucky (off to read)

 

[English Lady]

gratitude always goes down well with me love.... *grins*

I am reading now......will feedback soon

 

[Guest]

so if i help you, i get a night with myself?

send to me dahlink.. im laying in bed and oddly have no urge for battery opperated toys.

 

[Lucifer_Carroll]

so if i help you, i get a night with myself?

send to me dahlink.. im laying in bed and oddly have no urge for battery opperated toys.

I believe I said you could have use of the Tatelou clone harem for when you're feeling better.

But, PMd and thanks minion.