Help editing

[socalman11]

Hi, new member here so excuse if I am asking the obvious. I am almost done writing a story, my problem is the story is told from a two person point of view and I don't know how to gracefully transition from on character to another. Looking for advice and editing help. BTW, this is a gay story just so you know.

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[LexxRuthless]

I'd be happy to help. How long is your story?