MarriedCuriousSwitch
Virgin - New Here
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- Dec 2, 2025
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I tried using the Volunteer Editor's Program Page listings to find someone, but after sending a few a couple days ago, ever since then, it just pops up a "too many requests" message. If the purpose is to send one message and wait to see if someone responds and then send another one after you don't receive a reply, days later, finding an editor could take weeks. I don't want to wait that long if I can help it. Anyway, on to my post.
I have a story I would like to receive some editing and general feedback for.
The story isn't super long, and I don't believe there is a lot of help needed (but you know how you look at something a million times and swear it is perfect, then as soon as it is "too late" you see all the problems?).
The story is written from a woman's perspective, and I am not a woman, so I need to know if it "feels" authentic. If not, what kind of language or phrasing could I alter to get closer to that?
I am also trying to find the right Category, Tags, Title, and Short Description so any help with that would be appreciated.
More or less the story is about a woman who starts following a local band. One night she attends a house party at a band member's home, and ends up in the bedroom, being shown off, played with, and then finger fucked in front of the whole band.
So, right now, I have it in the "Exhibitionist & Voyeur" Category, but I don't know if that is the best place. The Tags I have so far are: Fingering, Teasing, and Group. But again, those are freeform and I am not sure if they are the best.
Any editing help you could provide would be very appreciated. Reach out via a direct message and we can figure out the "how".
Thank you.
I have a story I would like to receive some editing and general feedback for.
The story isn't super long, and I don't believe there is a lot of help needed (but you know how you look at something a million times and swear it is perfect, then as soon as it is "too late" you see all the problems?).
The story is written from a woman's perspective, and I am not a woman, so I need to know if it "feels" authentic. If not, what kind of language or phrasing could I alter to get closer to that?
I am also trying to find the right Category, Tags, Title, and Short Description so any help with that would be appreciated.
More or less the story is about a woman who starts following a local band. One night she attends a house party at a band member's home, and ends up in the bedroom, being shown off, played with, and then finger fucked in front of the whole band.
So, right now, I have it in the "Exhibitionist & Voyeur" Category, but I don't know if that is the best place. The Tags I have so far are: Fingering, Teasing, and Group. But again, those are freeform and I am not sure if they are the best.
Any editing help you could provide would be very appreciated. Reach out via a direct message and we can figure out the "how".
Thank you.
