Have the time to give me a feedback?

[Guest]

Hello, I'm svet.

If you have the time, give me your feedback.

The story, originally, was written without the chapters, but I devided the part up into six pages for those with short attention span.

You can find the story at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=43941
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Thank you for your time,

svet@literotica.org

 

[startrooper]

I enjoyed your stories. The first was detailed just enough to bring the visuals to mind and nicely detailed as to geographic location. Nice sex scenes.
I am really enjoyed the beginning of the second. Details were accurate enough to bring the reader into the scene.

 

[Guest]

Thanks Startrooper

Hello Startrooper,

I'm happy that you enjoyed the story.
I'll check out your stories, and let you know what I think of them.

You might like my other stories. Check them up, if you have the time.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=95091

Bye for now,

svet

 

[KJGirlie]

wow, I am impressed!

The story really kept me in it, but the sex was soo hot.. Normally I'm really such a tease, I like soft sex and anticipation, but I love the way you thrust right into the middle of things. I was really rooting for them to get away with it. Good job!

 

[Guest]

Thanks KJGirlie

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading the story.

You might like to check up my other stories, so:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?=uid95091

Love to hear from you soon,

svet@literotica.org