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[FallingToFly]

Need an opinion from the guys; is this masturbation scene realistic?

He stepped into the lukewarm water with a shudder and reached for the tap, turning up the heat. He had no intention of reducing himself to cold showers over beautiful cockteases when he could just as easily take care of things himself. He leaned on his hands into the spray, letting the hot water sluice over his head and down his back in the dark, his prick aching and throbbing with every heartbeat. The body wash felt cool against his palm, filling the steamy air with a rich, spicy scent that pleased his senses as his slippery hands slowly traveled over his own skin. His fingers wrapped tightly around his erection, squeezing impatiently against the straining flesh. He circled the base with the forefinger and thumb of one hand, holding the skin taut as he stroked with the other hand. Brisk, almost painful strokes, torturing the sensitive flesh with the calloused pads of his fingers, the roughness of his palm. It almost hurt, and he took a deep breath, forced himself to slow down.

He let go of his cock with the circling fingers and used his hand to brace himself against the wall again, fondling himself gently. He stroked his thumb across the engorged head and thought of how Adrian's mouth would look wrapped around it, those pink lips wet and swollen from kisses, gleaming with the first pearly drops of come and his own saliva- a shudder ran through him that had nothing to do with the water and he slid his hand along himself, squeezing and slipping on the soapy skin.

A low groan found its way from his lips as he thought about his beautiful new obsession, stretched wanton and willing on his sheets, of the sweet scent of his hair and the smooth, warm skin of his shoulders and chest. He wondered what his dick would taste like, nestled in his mouth, how it would feel plunging down his throat, if his come would be salty and bitter or sweet and thick. His balls tightened and tingled and he gasped as his climax spilled in a scalding wave over his fingers, onto the porcelain to be rinsed away down the drain. His hand moved half-heartedly as his cock as it softened, milking the last dregs of the fantasy into an empty void of exhaustion.

Thoughts, opinions, suggestions?

 

[Antfarmer77]

I liked it
Are you sure you're not really a man?

 

[Aurora Black]

Need an opinion from the guys; is this masturbation scene realistic?

Thoughts, opinions, suggestions?

Hell yes!

 

[FallingToFly]

I liked it
Are you sure you're not really a man?

*unbuttons jeans, checks*

No, I'm still a girl... but if you want to trade for say... a week? I would be more than happy to.

That's what I think too, Rora, but as I have no idea how it feels for a guy to masturbate, I had to guess, and figured I'd ask the guys for their thoughts.

 

[AchtungNight]

It seems realistic to me, but since me and the guy in question have different masturbatory fantasies, I can't say for sure.

 

[Antfarmer77]

*unbuttons jeans, checks*

... but if you want to trade for say... a week?
.

Uhhh...sounds hot...ok LOL
I can't speak for everyone, but for me, masturbation is nothing like what you read in erotica stories. It's more like just a basic act on the same level as making a ham sandwich LOL a menial (sp) task to fullfil a human need.

 

[yui]

Need an opinion from the guys; is this masturbation scene realistic?



Thoughts, opinions, suggestions?

The last paragraph confused me ... I think mebbe, you've got a "his throat" when it should be "her throat". Otherwise, damn, that's a great scene from my girly perspective. Very well written.

 

[FallingToFly]

The last paragraph confused me ... I think mebbe, you've got a "his throat" when it should be "her throat". Otherwise, damn, that's a great scene from my girly perspective. Very well written.

Tis a gay male story, milove. And thank you.

 

[rgraham666]

Except for the object of his fantasy, I can relate.

 

[Antfarmer77]

Tis a gay male story, milove. And thank you.

Ewwww...I replied about masturbation to a gay story excerpt!!
*runs and gargles with Wisk* I thought it was a typo too!
I'll never feel clean again

 

[Aurora Black]

Ewwww...I replied about masturbation to a gay story excerpt!!
*runs and gargles with Wisk* I thought it was a typo too!
I'll never feel clean again

*frown*

 

[FallingToFly]

Ewwww...I replied about masturbation to a gay story excerpt!!
*runs and gargles with Wisk* I thought it was a typo too!
I'll never feel clean again

*laughing too hard to breathe*

 

[yui]

Tis a gay male story, milove. And thank you.

<laughing> Ohhhh. Sorry, my het assumption just reared its fuzzy, goofy, fluffy head.

Very sorry! I'll just slink off, now.

Again, very well written. You've a great style.

 

[FallingToFly]

<laughing> Ohhhh. Sorry, my het assumption just reared its fuzzy, goofy, fluffy head.

Very sorry! I'll just slink off, now.

Again, very well written. You've a great style.

No worries, darling.

I'm actually considering... well. Let's just say I have an idea that may prove useful.

 

[ibhard]

If it matters, I'm bi and I thought the scene was very hot, realistic-ish. Male masturbation isn't half as pretty as female masturbation...us guys just get er' done and over with.

 

[FallingToFly]

If it matters, I'm bi and I thought the scene was very hot, realistic-ish. Male masturbation isn't half as pretty as female masturbation...us guys just get er' done and over with.

That was part of what I was thinking. This is a piece cut from Ties That Bind that I was worried about- my husband is absolutely no help with stuff like that.

 

[ibhard]

That was part of what I was thinking. This is a piece cut from Ties That Bind that I was worried about- my husband is absolutely no help with stuff like that.

The scene worked...erm, I mean it works for me.

 

[FallingToFly]

The scene worked...erm, I mean it works for me.

Well, I'll add you to the least of people to PM when this chapter goes up, then.

 

[Skip1934a]

Need an opinion from the guys; is this masturbation scene realistic?



Thoughts, opinions, suggestions?

I went and tried it to see how it worked out for me. When all the hot water was gone and I still hadn't cum, I had to quit.

But I do think it's realistic, FTF. Good job.

 

[TheEarl]

It seems realistic enough to me. Not my subject area on the fantasy matter, but the description itself rings true. Go with it.

The Earl

 

[Liar]

Sounded fine to me. The fantasy part was a little more brief and a little more visual than what I'd go for. But each to his own.

 

[impressive]

If it matters, I'm bi and I thought the scene was very hot, realistic-ish. Male masturbation isn't half as pretty as female masturbation...us guys just get er' done and over with.

Might not be as "pretty," but I do so adore watching a fella with his cock in his hand.

 

[Antfarmer77]

I went and tried it to see how it worked out for me. When all the hot water was gone and I still hadn't cum, I had to quit.

But I do think it's realistic, FTF. Good job.

I just spit beer outta my nose!!

 

[Remec]

*laughing too hard to breathe*

*nodding*
*coughing*
*laughing to the point of spewing*

Yeah, me too...*g*

I thought it was very well done, although I had to sort of stop and think for a moment 'cause my own hand and finger placement is a little different from the way your character's.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Might not be as "pretty," but I do so adore watching a fella with his cock in his hand.

It's a great thing to watch.

and. . .

It is a great example FtF.