bi_cherrypie
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I have a rant, guys. I recently posted a story that I wrote for a friend. I obviously did something wrong with this particular story, as I have not one, but two hurtful comments left under my story.
The first:
Suddenly
03/05/07 By: Anonymous in Under my Bridge.....with my Benelli
Her husband had returned as the meeting was canceled. He watched from the patio as his wife became a cheap cheating whore for his neighbor. Something in him snapped. He walked to the bedroom closet and retrieved his Benelli Black Eagle and loaded it with buckshot. They were locked in each other's arms as he slipped up behind them. He coughed and they turned around in unison. The scream died on her lips, the evening air shattered by the mighty blast. The pool water stained red as if angry sharks were feeding. Shit, he thought, water and blood all over my good suit! Death to the whores!
The second:
Bullshit
03/06/07 By: Anonymous in USofA
The only losers are the queers that rate this piss-poor trash higher than 00.
Both of these comments were attatched to zero ratings. This is on a story posted in Loving Wives... and I get the impression that people reading these stories are wallowing in their own self-pity, maybe angry over their own life situations. The fantastic thing is, while calling my other readers queers, and threatening my character's with death, these jerks aren't even brave enough to attach their names to the insults. Cowards. I am fully aware that this story is not my best, but even my worst (or anyone's worst) doesn't call for such behavior. Objective, helpful criticism is always appreciated, but this was just mean.
Thanks for listening.
The first:
Suddenly
03/05/07 By: Anonymous in Under my Bridge.....with my Benelli
Her husband had returned as the meeting was canceled. He watched from the patio as his wife became a cheap cheating whore for his neighbor. Something in him snapped. He walked to the bedroom closet and retrieved his Benelli Black Eagle and loaded it with buckshot. They were locked in each other's arms as he slipped up behind them. He coughed and they turned around in unison. The scream died on her lips, the evening air shattered by the mighty blast. The pool water stained red as if angry sharks were feeding. Shit, he thought, water and blood all over my good suit! Death to the whores!
The second:
Bullshit
03/06/07 By: Anonymous in USofA
The only losers are the queers that rate this piss-poor trash higher than 00.
Both of these comments were attatched to zero ratings. This is on a story posted in Loving Wives... and I get the impression that people reading these stories are wallowing in their own self-pity, maybe angry over their own life situations. The fantastic thing is, while calling my other readers queers, and threatening my character's with death, these jerks aren't even brave enough to attach their names to the insults. Cowards. I am fully aware that this story is not my best, but even my worst (or anyone's worst) doesn't call for such behavior. Objective, helpful criticism is always appreciated, but this was just mean.
Thanks for listening.
