Good plot, poorly written

[Tigersman]

I tried to read a new story entitled "My First BBC" by desireexperienceit. Although this story had a good plot, it was full of run-on sentences and spelling errors. The spelling errors got through spellcheck because the word used was spelled correctly but was the wrong word. The author also did not use caps every time they used a person's name. The mistakes in this story were too distracting to keep on reading, so I bailed out.

The author had their pms turned off as well as the comments to the story. This is one author I will never waste my time again.

 

[MsNotSleeping]

Sounds like you're describing about 90% of the stories here and on other self-published erotica websites, sadly.

 

[robertreams]

I did not notice her describing it sadly.

 

[sr71plt]

MsNotSleeping's placement of the comma in the original made the sentence grammatical.

 

[LadyVer]

Lol strange thread Hey guys.

 

[NoahValentine]

Good plot, poorly written
its'nt it interesting to read beside too many good book out there